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well iss note ko main like nahi karongi meri di ko yeh explanation note lagane ki jaroorat nahi hai nobody cant raise their finger on her love you di note nikaal do warna harika going mad 😡
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Awesome update!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊
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ur writing style is diffrnt there is no similarities with other...keep it up
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annie is back...is jairaj paris father or some realtion wth her...or with vicky or maan...i think yash should tell everything to his family...his sons r matured enough n thy can handle ny situation...
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NOTE

Hi all!!

I know i have been very late here but trust me m very much busy with work and don't get time to type. I don't know when i will update this FF but will start typing tomorrow as time permits me. Hope to give you update soon and i may change the precap or may keep it depends on my writing.

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Its OK dear..
We'll wait...😛
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very nyc update
maaneet moments alwayas treat for us
now anathor twist that jai grrr precap chuddail ki aahat
srk style mein bolu tho msk nd vsk is there tho don't fear 😉
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PART 59


Her soft delicate body missed the warmth tat always engulfed her while her eyes tried hard to open. She moved her hand trying to feel her Maan and Baby but she did not get an inch trace about them. Her body shivered while her eyes tried to open beating the heaviness of her tired eyes and the moment she did she panicked but a faint voice tat was just a mere muffle reached her ears bringing the widest smile on her lips. She left the bed walking towards the voice tat echoed in the balcony of their room. She slowly tip toed and hid herself to witness the most serene sight of her life. Her Maan holding their Armaan well covered with all soft duvets while Maan's hand patting him to sleep. She looked closer and could say tat their Sweety was all awake hearing his Dadda's soft sweet words. she chuckled hearing his words.

Maan: Sweety..why do wake so early. Aap janthe nahi kya.. Mumma gets hell tired and you start waking her.

Maan tilted his head a bit and smiled seeing his Sweety looking at him with deep eyes precisely to say like his Mumma.

Maan: Hain na.. You stare at Dadda like Mumma do.. but I love it. ab bataye.. why did you wake so early.. abhi tho sirf 7 baje hain aur aapki yeh tummy tho full hain na.

Maan tickled his small tummy making Armaan to giggle throwing his saliva. Maan softly wiped his mouth with the soft cloth he was carrying.

Maan: Sweety.. aise nahi karte beta.. now say.. wats your plan for today..oops (maan thought for a second and said) Ollle.. aaj tho Sunday hain na.. so sweety planning to play with Dadda kya.. how sweet sweety.. you very well knew Dadda goes for his workout and you stopped him by opening your eyes at the right time. Mera sweety kitna samjhdar hain.

Maan touched his nose to Armaan's holding him securely into his hand. He placed Armaan in his lap while his lips adored his soft small face with kisses. With each kiss Armaan smiled making Maan's heart to swell with love and pride.

Maan: Sweety.. aaj na Dadda and Sweety will play for the whole day.. (he looked at Armaan who was looking at him) don't worry Sweety…. We will na hide somewhere and play.

Geet who was all smiling was shocked to hear it and almost spoke to herself " Yeh Maan pagal hain kya.. wat will he do by hiding." Soon she realized by his words tat why he said tat.

Maan: Dekha mera Sweety.. he also thinks the same. Sachi Your Dada and Chachu will not let us play so na.. we will hide somewhere and play.. Hain na Sweety.

Armaan smiled but instantly cried softly while Maan smiled looking at him.

Maan: Mumma ka ladla.. will take Mumma also…. But don't you think you can fool Dadda ok.

Armaan smiled hearing his Dadda while Maan pinched his soft nose softly.

Maan: You want Mumma so tat you can keep you lips sucking her na… you are very naughty Sweety. Din-raat Mumma ko tang kartha hain.. even in sleep you don't leave her.

Maan tickled his tummy making sound while Armaan hit his leg to his neck laughing.

Maan: Naughty…. Aap na bahut badmash ho.. Mumma ko bilkul chodna nahi chahte.. waise aapki tummy kitni badi hain Sweety tat you just keep latching Mumma.

Maan looked at Armaan where he could see his eyes smiling. The small doe shaped eyes tat were the exact replica of Geet and window to her soul were inherited by their Sweety. He bends down placing soft kisses to his eyes worshipping them.

Maan: You eyes are your mirror Sweety.. aapki Mumma ki tarah.. and I cant stop myself from drowning in them as they shower only Love on this ruthless Maan Singh Khuranna.

The moment Maan said Armaan kicked him on his face. Armaan smiled kicking him again while Maan looked at him with a smile.

Maan: Aap dusri Mumma ko kya. Why do you both always beat me when I say this? Haan sweety aap tho Dadda side na.. than..(armaan again kicked him) Alle aap tho kick pe kick kar rahe hain Dadda ko.. Sweety.. dekho Dadda will get angry haan.

Armaan smiled kicking him again while Maan looked at him.

Maan: Mumma ke chamche.. Dadda ko Mumma ki tarah badi badi aankhe deekha rahe ho.

Geet: Kyu nahi.. when Dadda will say bad about him… Sweety will show him tat his Dadda's is the best.. Hain na Sweety.

Geet settled herself on the floor placing a soft kiss on Armaans' forehead. Maan looked at her and was surprised to see her all awake and before he could question her she said.

Geet: Pata hain Sweety, Mumma na hate Dadda and Sweety. You both cheat Mumma and do chungli hain na.. Mumma very gussa.

Geet pouted looking at Armaan and than at Maan who just smiled at her.

Maan: See Sweety Maan so big Jealous na.. always want Dadda all for her.

Maan kissed Armaan who had stopped kicking him but his next task was to stare at Geet. Maan softly turned his face towards him while he now pouted and said.

Maan: Haan ab dekho Mumma ko.. Sweety not fair ha. You are Dadda's sweety na so you should see Dadda na. see Mumma so jealous of you.. as she cant sit on Dadda's lap like you.

Geet looked at Maan in fake anger and than said to Armaan.

Geet: Sweety, tell Dadda.. Mumma not jealous of Sweety.. Mumma angry because Dadda-Sweety enjoying here and Mumma sleeping. So bad na.. mumma missed Dadda-Sweety sweet cute talks.. waise Sweety wat did Dadda say.

Maan pulled Armaan hiding him into his chest while Geet pouted looking at him but before he could lay Armaan on his lap again she settled herself on his lap and hugged him by his waist.

Maan: Nahi.. tats Dadda- Sweety secret. And waise bhi its men's talks so Mumma not allowed to know it.

Geet: acha..

Geet rests herself on Maan while Maan gives her space securing Armaan closer to him. Geet smiles placing her lips on his neck giving him wet kisses. She saw Maan getting restless with her simple kisses. She smirked seeing him, bit him on his adam's apple, and sucked giving him pleasure. Maan groaned feeling her sweet pain while she continued giving him kisses and sucking on to his skin.

Maan: Jaan.. please…aisa na karo..

Geet tried to muffle her laughter while her hands reached inside him feeling his bare skin under the vest. She smiled looking at his droopy eyes while se pleasured him giving touches making him moan her name.

Maan: Jaan.. please… see sweety is here na.. sab dekh raha hain.

Get: nahi dekh raha hain.. Sweety busy in hearing and concentrating on Dadda's moaning.

Maan:Wahi tho Jaan.. see Sweety will know na why Dadda's moans Mumma's name.. dekho sweety will say Mumma has no shame.. kissing Dadda in front of him.

Geet was by now so lost in her kisses and his skin tat she could hardly could make out wat Maan was saying. She pushed herself into him sitting on his right spot and started to grid herself on him. Maan was having a very tough time and his slowly tightened his hold on Armaan making sure tat he does not hurt him while he pulled Geet closer and smacked his lips on hers holding her by her waist wit one hand and Geet wrapped her one hand around Armaan and other around Maan. Maan was being awakened by her tortures and having hard time to control. He kissed her hard and pulled away giving a puppy look at her while she pouted in anger.

Maan: Morning romance bas Jaan.

Geet:Haan kyun nahi.. Mumma disturbing Dadda-Sweety naa…jabse Sweety aaya hain. Dadda not giving time to Mumma.. kiss bhi nahi karta Sweety.

Geet complained to Armaan while he slowly raised his hand touching her face reaching her lips.

Geet: Dekha Babaji.. ab Sweety bhi Mumma ko chup kar raha hain.

Maan smiled hearing her while he pecked her lips along with his hand tat covered her lips.

Maan:Nahi Sweety Na Mumma ke lips wipe kar raha hain.. See Dadda kissed Mumma na so now Mumma should kiss Sweety.. and he knows tat Mumm-Dadda kiss very passionate so Sweety wiping Mumma lips first. Hain na Sweety.

Armaan smile moving closer to Geet searching for his feed. He moved his soft fingers and lingered them on her heavy b***** while Maan and Geet smiled seeing his moves to say tat he was hungry.

Maan: See.. you just came and he started to search them. Sachi Jaan.. He is not less than me.

Geet: Aap hi se tho sekha hain .

Maan smiled while Geet turned into his lap. now she was sitting with her back touching his chest. He softly placed Armaan in her hands while helped her to loosen her loose dress giving a perfect view of her bud to Armaan who at once latched to it. Maan softly placed the duvet covering them while he hugged Geet by her waist making her relax on his body. She fed him while Maan showered her with his kisses making her smile all the time.

Geet:How long you and Sweety have been sitting here.

Maan:hmmm..

Geet: Bolo na Maan.

Maan: Since 6am.. he was all awake at 5.30 am. I tried to make him sleep but Sweety was in mood to play with Dadda, so Dadda and Sweety came here and played.

Geet: How mean Maan.. You both saw the sunrise and did not wake me.

Maan: My Jaan was in deep sleep.. so Sweety asked not to wake Mumma. Hain na Sweety.

Armaan snuggled more into Geet pulling scratching her skin with his small nails.

Maan: See Sweety does not like Mumma asking all this.

Geet: Haww.. Sweety…. Mumma gussa..

Maan: Haan Sweety Mumma Jealous na so gussa..

Geet: Maan..

Maan: Hmm Jaan..

Geet: Aap aur Sweety theek nahi kar rahe hain. you both enjoy keeping me away all the time.

Maan: Nahi Jaan.. Its just tat I let you take rest, after all I would need you more than Sweety na.

Geet blushed on his words while Armaan continued to get fed. Geet and Maan continued to have their small cute fights with their small make out session along with Armaan between them.

The ladies stood watching the men's trying to give Armaan a bath. It was a huge argument between them as to who will give Armaan a bath and finally Geet gave a chance to Maan, Yash and Vicky who were grumbling for giving a bath to Armaan and Armaan was all enjoying giving them all sorts of trouble. The ladies stood watching their so called drama while they had hard time to control their laugh.

Naina: Yash.. chod do apni zidd ab.. Maan kyu nahi lete tat its not easy to handle babies.

Yash (without turning): Kyu tumne tho teen teen nahi char char bacho ko akele bada kiya hain. did I have any hand in it. Paida bhi tumne akele kiya the na.

Naina: Yash.. bahut bak juke hain aap. Just say tat you can't do it aur yeh aapke do chele unhe bhi bata dijiye ki its not easy to give a bath to a small baby.

Vicky: Mom.. can you please keep quite for few minutes. Dekh nahi sakte kya.. Amy feeling shy seeing you all.. Kitni besharam hain aap sab.. mere nanhe Amy ko aise nange punge dekh rahe ho.

Pari: Nanga punga Amy nahi but its you Vicky.. dekho see the way you are half naked just in your shorts.

Geet and others laughed hearing Pari while Vicky was hell embarrassed in front of them but he cared a damn.

Vicky: Itni hi sharam aa rahi hain tho apni potato jaisi aankhe band karo.. You know its not safe to see your husband like this.

Pari was all shy and red by hearing his words, hid behind Dadima while she looked and Vicky, and smirked.

Dadima: Vicky.. par jaha tak mujhe yaad hain I have seen you without even clothes and even Pari. Hain na Pari.. did not you see him when he was just 5 and you were 2. Ush time pe tho koi problem nahi thi. Pir aaj kyu.

Vicky: Dadima ush time yeh aise lal nahi hoti thi par ab hoti hain.. so aap samjha dijiye apni ladli ko.. its not good getting so red when m around.

Dadima: Haaye rabba.. yeh nalayak tho bilkul besharam nikala. Maan you better keep Armaan away from Vicky.. kahi ishe bhi yeh apni tarah besharam na kar de.

Vicky: Meri chodiye Dadima. Amy has seen his parents kissing so staying with me or not won't change anything. Yeh Bro aur Bhabhi kahi pe bhi shuru hote hain.

Maan: tujhe koi problem kya.meri biwi mera bacha..why does your stomach pain.

Vicky: Bro.. main tho aapki balayi ke liye keh raha hoon. Right now Amy is too small to know but if you continue in this speed than I suppose the whole Mansion will know how you romance your wife.

Yash: abbe saalo … dono chup baitho and concentrate on your task. These good for nothing women are trying to divert our minds. Dekh Armaan m warning you, you better stay away from these girls ok..

Armaan smiled kicking Yash while Maan and Vicky chuckled seeing him agreeing to his Dada. Yash was so happy tat he teased Naina on it.

Yash: Naina..better be safe.. its Armaan now.. not Yash.

Naina: Dekho Yash.. Main keh rahi hoon itni hawa mein mat uddo.. pata chala dumb karke gir gay tho haath pao fracture hoga.

Yash: Darr gayi biwi kya.

Naina: darre meri juthi. Ab hatiye.. itni der tak you cant keep Armaan in water. He will catch cold.

Maan: Kisne kaha.. we have finished giving him a bath Mom and finally we did it. tho chale Dad, Vicky we need to get him ready.

Maan picked Armaan wrapping him into a soft fluffy towel while the women's were shocked to see them. They passed through them without even sparing a look. Geet tried to help Maan but he gave a stern look tat was enough for her to stop.

Maan: badi aayi thi Mumma.. Sweety Mumma thinks tat Dadda, Dada and Chachu cant give you a bath. Ab na.. Show them tat we are best.

Armaan smiled while Maan, Vicky and Yash teased the ladies. Vicky and Yash settled everything on bed tat was required for Armaan. Maan softly unwrapped Armaan and made him ready while others looked at them. Maan, Vicky and Yash were perfect in tat while Armaan enjoyed being with them

The day was filled with love and happiness as Armaan was surrounded with all the members who showered their love on him. In this, Maan and Geet got some privacy where they could spend some time alone with their small make out giving kisses and licking each other but it was not soon tat Yash was left all alone with his miseries. A phone call and he was left all to struggle with the fear tat had been lingering in his heart for his family, the happiness tat surrounded them. He slowly stepped out of the Mansion making sure tat none had seen him.



He hands shivered yet Yash did not show tat he feared the person who stood in front of him. He looked straight into his eyes demanding an answer to his question repeating it for nth time.

Yash: Wat do you want Jairaj. Why the hell are you back after ages?

Jairaj laughed aloud making Yash to fear more. His laughter was not less than a devil who was all set to destroy them.

Yash: Answer me Jairaj Shikawat.

Jairaj: Yash Singh Khuranna and scared of JS.. come on Yash.. dekha do na aapni taqaat. Wahi taqat tat you used to destroy me once.

Yash: Jairaj tat was past.. and it was your mistake.. a crime tat you did and you deserved to be punished.

Jairaj: and who did force me to do tat. its you Yash.. its you.. and you will pay for it. Your Armaan will pay for it.

Yash moved to hold his neck and pushed him behind making him to lay on the car bonnet. Yash's anger was at peak. Someone laying his eyes on their Armaan was something tat would make him to kill tat very person.

Yash: Apni aankhe aur haath keep them to yourself Jairaj. Mere pote tak nahi jaane chahiye. This time I won't hesitate to tear you into pieces. Woh mera Maan hain.. My Armaan and a mere eye on him will see the end.

Jairaj: She was mine.. and you took her away. You took her away.

Yash: You lusted her.. do you get.. a lust for her and I saved her from the monster.

Jairaj: par nahi bacha paye ushe.. and now she will not be safe.. I will take her away.. will take everything tat belonged to her.. kill her with my own hands… sazza milegi tumare Armaan ko.. he will pay for your deeds Yash Singh Khuranna.. he will pay.

Yash: Hum tak kya humare saaya bhi nahi chu paounge Jairaj Shikawat. You will not be able to do anything.

Yash walked throwing Jairaj on the ground but his next words make him to stop.

Jairaj: Sunna hain tat you Daughter Anwesha Singh Khuranna played a very big game. Sunna hain ki ushne tumari bahu ki nangi photo's aur videos nikale the jiske jariye tumare bete Maan ne uski zindagi barbaad kar di.

Yash turned with a fear in his eyes. his mind had only one question tat how did Jairaj knew about Annie in detail. None knew tat Annie was responsible for all these except the family than how come he knows.

Jairaj: Itni hairanni se mat dekho Yash.. Its Jairaj Shikawat.. and I know every single secret about your family. the tiniest of your secret. But mind blowing haan to see your own daughter doing such thing. After all apne baap pe gayi hain.

Yash: Annie kaha hain Jairaj.

Jairaj: Who the hell knows where tat bloody bitch is but trust me where ever she is she might be planning a grand entry into your life. backe rehna Yash.. its time for your destruction.

Yash: Mujhe barbaad karne se pehle apni aukaad mat bhoolna Jairaj Shikawat. You are nothing in front of me and don't forget tat you will be dealing with me and my two sons.. Maan Singh Khuranna and Vicky Singh Khuarnna.. jo mar sakthe hain ya maar bhi sakthe hain.

Jairaj: Keep them safe Yash.. keep them safe or else kahi buddhape mein akele na hojao. Suna hain Vicky aur Pari honeymoon pe jaa rahe hain.. kahi kuch ho na jaye…. Uff Pari.. kitni badi ho juki hogi na Yash.. ek baar dekhna hain ushe.

Yash: Apni Aankhe dur rakhna ushe.. she is ours do you get.

Jairaj: off course Yash.. she is all yours par kuch haq hain na.

Yash: Dur reh Jairaj Shikawat Dur reh humse aur mere family se.

Jairaj: Abhi tho aaya hoon Jairaj.. and you have to wait for many more secrets.. many more Yash Singh Khuranna.

Yash left with a fear in his heart but he knew tat Jairaj would not be able to hurt them but he did not knew tat he was not the same Jairaj anymore. He was more devilish and not all alone this time.

Jairaj: Apni beti khoyi hain Humne Yash.. Tumne humse huamra pyar jinna aur tumare Bete ne humari beti.. You all will pay.. you will pay for the game you all played. Apne pariwaar ke thudke kar diye the maine aur jab wapas mile.. you and your sons destroyed by whole family.. you will pay.. you will pay for wat you did.

Precap: No precap..

Do like and comment.

Hehe me devilish na.. Bahut mystery hain. You will never know wat will happen next.

Next update after 235+ likes and 15 pages comments….

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

Half update was full of happiness other half was fully sad

Maan n Armaan moment were so sweet

Maaneet making out in presence of Armaan

Yash Maan n Vicky giving bath to Armaan Maan Singh Khurana

Armaan was happy in receiving all the attention from the family members

Wht is JS planning

JS warning Yash tht Aniee is going to re-enter in their life

curious to know abt past

hope Dadima Yash n Naina speak abt the past to Maan n Vicky before they came to know the past from any outsider
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maneet with armaan part was cute
but happy moments all vanished by the call of jairaj..
what is the past between him n yash
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago

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