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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: zaidi98

1st tym throwing chappal n jhoota on u harikaa...😡😡

ye teaser kaisa haii...😭😭
phele teaser inta acha n 2nd.. grrr...



jhooti se darr nahi lagta maahi pyar se lagta hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyharika



jhooti se darr nahi lagta maahi pyar se lagta hai😆


hahahhahah...😆😆 n mjhe pyr se dar nhii lagta u k ase teaser se dar lagta haii...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for new thread dear 🥳
After reading teaser really excited 4 updt
Pls continue soon waiting
Edited by trishadcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaidi98

hahahhahah...😆😆 n mjhe pyr se dar nhii lagta u k ase teaser se dar lagta haii...😛😛



lol maahi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi haarika
long time no talk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hi haarika

long time no talk



hi di sorry i did not check the thread sachi mein sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishadcute

Congo for new thread dear 🥳

After reading teaser really excited 4 updt
Pls continue soon waiting



thanks updating😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 15:

WARNING: strictly 18+!!!



For now your work will not start kuch time de raha hoon tumhe maan ke saath jitna khush rehna hai rehlo uske baad meri har baat manna padega and I am warning you geet if you try to tell maan anything about our talks you will find your mom dead and that's final kal tumhe tumhari maa se milaadonga


Geet sat back on the bed again pondering into the words of dev!! how life changed in two days, what is she supposed to do?? She cant take the risk of killing her mother for whom she lost her sanity. And maan whom she loved and whom she will love forever, she cannot betray him, jaan dedongi apni babaji lekin maan ko dhokha nahi dongi let dev play his cards. Jab woh mujhe dhokha dene kahenge khud ko maardongi lekin maan ko main tod nahi sakti, lekin kya karongi?? What will he ask me?? And then the sight of her mother came into her eyes, agar maa duniya mein nahi hoti toh kya karti geet tu?? Par iss sab mein maan ki kya galti hai?? He never promised me for anything so what if I move away from his life unki jindagi mein jo bhi ladki aayegi tujhse bhi achi hogi haina babaji?? She suddenly felt her head is spinning, every nerve of her began to ache. Probably its because she hadn't eaten for two days she thought.


Geet somebody barged into the room taking her name for numerous times. She got scared to look but it was the voice of maan, no her maan. Geet's lips curved into a smile, she got up the bed with that the bedsheet in which she was wrapped slipped off her body. Maan stood rooted at his place, all his excitement, all his delight seemed to vanish for a while. A rage, an acute pain surfaced seeing geet in the same saree on the night he touched her for the very first time. He forgot how he got geet into his house almost and here she is again and again making him recollect the past back. He threw the papers in his hand on the bed only to grab geet by arms boring deep into her eyes. Geet was all confused seeing maan this way, the least she expected. His untold pain was not understandable for her, geet only lowered her hazels with the intensity which maan's eyes were holding.


Why did you wear this saree geet?? he asked with an anger tone fearing her like hell. She didn't have anything to say to his question infact geet shivered looking down... woh main hoon aise... and nothing can change my identity she said walking back letting herself go as those words of dev lingered in her brain making her realize she is not meant to be with maan utaaro geet he roared with a deadly tone probably he thought she will listen to him as she is supposed to do what he says, but geet turned showing her back sach yehi hai maan mere kapde badalne se sach nahi badlega for the first time she managed answering back to him that too with a firmness... utaaro warna utaardonga he spat not paying heed to what she was saying.


Geet did not budge she still walked taking steps further only to hit herself onto the washroom door which was open, she fell in the washroom. Maan who was about to hold her too tripped on her, he fell over her. For him the denial of geet ignited so much, he just took her lips into his not minding the place where both of them landed. Its just that the old scars geet was trying to open was hurting him. The fact that she had entered his life lika a p******* was something he wanted to forget but still this girl is like hell bent to remind her existence which he wanted to wipe off. Not for once did he feel like what actually made geet to become what she was that night. He is in love with this sweet innocent girl but he felt her past doesn't matter to him anymore all he want is now geet to be with him for the rest of his life. The fact which both of them unaware was that a life is already breathing inside geet which is their actual future!!


Jab jab tere paas main aaya, ik sukoon mila


He unpinned her saree almost ripping it apart, geet looked at him shocked for the way he was tearing her clothes. She didn't know he is that angry for not listening to him.


Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, woh wajood mila


She gulped hard with the way the blouse tore, biting her neck with his teeth hurting her. This was something very new since the very first time they made love. Maan never hurt her, even the wild love he used to make seemed so sweet to her but now its his angerself coming out


Jab aaye mausam gham ke, tujhe yaad kiya


Tell me you are just mine he bit her shoulder, she flinched holding on to his shirt crushing it under her little palm


Jab sehme tanha pann se, tujhe yaad kiya


He held her wrist on his shirt to look at her eyes which were showing fear a sort of fear. But the moment their eyes met geet took his complaining lips into hers saying sorry to hurt him that way. It was indeed a shock to maan, as this naive girl has actually taken a bold move for the first time.


Dil, sambhal ja zara


Both of them didn't know when they landed on the bed. Its been two days geet is starving still the pain of those moments when she actually felt her mom died and then now this moment when she waited to be in the arms of her maan with her seemed to soothe her.


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


For maan he was just a need now seemed to be love. He toyed with her nipples with his tongue and then biting them with his teeth, latching on them, pulling them hard making geet to scream. She closed her eyes even more tight not letting any pain to come back to her mind, enjoying this short time with maan


Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara


Geet wanted to stop the time when he entered her pleasuring her like never before. Is it that she is not supposed to love?? And when she has got it why is the fate being so cruel to her?? she will have to choose between her maa and maan!!


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


This dumb girl did not know the life inside her is starving, its not her who is!! When the passion of maan stopped for a while. They started to pant being in each others arms



Aisa kyun kar hua, jaanu na main jaanu na


Maan thought about the reception party in a day. The next day is the day of marriage of dev and sam, he would declare his love for geet and then throw those papers on dev's face. He thought this is the best way he would give respect to geet infront of the whole world


Dil, sambhal ja zara


Geet closed her eyes as again she felt like fainting for the second time. Maan was caressing her back lost in his thoughts.


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


This is the love he has craved for the way geet is taking care of his every need, the way she is trying to tell him what life is he is falling in love with her more and more.


Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara


Geet kissed his cheeks one by one making maan to come out of his sleep. Her lips which were against his skin made him to wake up to look at her with eyes full of desire.


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


Maan flipped geet again to thrust into her, she did not have the energy anymore now. Geet clinged to him trying to cope up with the little zest as she knows how much he might have missed her for two days and now this was just expected


Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera

Later in the morning by the time geet got up she found the bed empty, worry over took her. She took the phone to call maan when she found a note nearby


Aksar wahan se haan main hoon guzra


Please jaan check out the parcel, I have got clothes for you last night I have been aggressive I am really sorry it was just my restlessness of two days staying away from you. Ill be back by night as for now I am held up


Shayad yakeen, dil mein raha
Tu mujkho mil jaaye kya pataa
Kya hai yeh silsila, jaanu na main jaanu na
Dil, sambhal ja zara


It's a marriage house actually and tonight is the wedding of dev and sameera. Geet now felt like throwing up, she ran inside the washroom with the fatigue.


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


She took out the pregnancy strip its positive!! Her stomach churned with the feeling, her heart seemed to explode out, hands and legs began to ache probably with the fear.


Kucch bhi nahin, jab darmiyaan
Phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaaha ki de, tujhko bhulaa
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na saka


Geet threw the strip, her hand got hit to the shower tap and the water began to drench her naked form, what is she supposed to do now?? She wanted her mom inside her but its maan's love inside!!


Kya hai yeh maamla, jaanu na main jaanu na
Dil, sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara


Geet remained under the shower till afternoon lifeless, her emotions got bottled up with things messing up. But at the end she is a to-be-mother to an unborn child. That's the truth, she will do anything for the child like she is doing for her mother!! when her stomach grumbled she realised what mistake she was doing


Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil, sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu


She ran to the kitchen to grab some food like a maniac. Geet checked on the every bowl with the lids to eat. She was hungry for two and half days?? God when all the bowls were empty she fell down crying I am hungry ko...koi mujhe khana dijiye she screamed holding her tummy when out of the blue the plate full of food was placed infront of her, she ate the food just snatching it literally stuffing it inside her mouth saying sorry to the life inside her

i am tired of asking you all as to y the likes are decreasing really its discouraging thats the big reason my updates are also going slow its ok then ill give slow updates from now on atleast for my honest readers who never fail pressing like atleast

next update i want 250 likes!!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update didu love it

P.S from now onward my comment will be of one or two words
as i will be busy in cousins marraige then my tests will start nd after that in march my exams will start
so plz cooperate with 😊
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago

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