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Posted: 12 years ago
hi di... pls dont abort the baby...
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Awesome SS read in one go
waiting for next update
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good morning di have a nide sunday😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Harika jaldi se update do
sia bohot der se wait kar rahi hai
aur main apni jaan ko aur wait nahi karwa sakta😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

Harika jaldi se update do

sia bohot der se wait kar rahi hai
aur main apni jaan ko aur wait nahi karwa sakta😆😆😆



sorry jaan late kar diya 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 18:


read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!

A day back,

Geet came back to the room controlling her cries, she took out a pen and paper wrote something on it. She opened the cupboard to take out the money when somebody knocked the room door. She looked at the door but did not had the courage to open it....open the door geet the game is not over yet dev yelled banding it with his hand.


Her hands did shiver as she found dev standing and staring at her as if he had something in brain with evil intentions as the door flung open. Dev looked at the packed bag of geet, he smirked ... when you came here you didn't have anything other than the clothes you wore ab dekho maan ne kya kya dediya hai tumhe, things which cant even imagine in your life his hand ran on her arm and was about to touch her stomach she stepped back''' don't you dare touch me aapne kaha toh main jaa rahi hoon i agreed to you it doesnt mean ki aap aisa kuch kare she raised her hand warning dev with a serious tone.


Maan ka jhoota main nahi khata!! Toh tum kya cheez ho I hate you the most coz you were the one who had been a support for him and the way you gave him support, you landed into a mess with an extra burden right?? He said hinting what kind of relation she shared with maan.


Haan jhooti hoon maan ki and I am happy with that and the burden you are speaking about woh mere liye toh aabadi hai don't say anything about the life which isn't born yet itna paap kiya hai ek aur paap mat jodo with these low talks of yours...Dev clapped his hands taunting geet's every word, god geet you are still day dreaming did you for once think how will you feed yourself?? Kya bologi apni maa ko?? If she gets to know about how you tried to save your mother she will be shattered


Uska aapko sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai I know what is in your brain this is a possession for me lekin isse aap maarna chahte hai toh aisa main bilkul nahi karongi that was a reply dev least expected. He did not understand the fact that he was speaking to a mother not an ordinary girl. All her patience died long back, till now geet was calm just for the sake of her mother but now she had an extra responsibility. She is a mother of unborn baby and that was giving her courage to speak the heart out.


Fine save your child forget about the mother for whom you lost everything!!! I thought I will give you options but you have already chosen your child over mother, not a problem geet you will find your mom on the death bed she snorted his nose moving his head sideways with an awkward smile on the face.


No you will not do anything to my mother, geet held his collar shaking dev with a fear that came back in her and he harshly separated her hands from himself ... don't lay your filthy hands on me geet I said already I don't touch things which maan uses, and I don't want to waste my time on you talking ...you will get your mother back only on one condition abort this child. Kal hospital mein aajao, doctor will wait for you, the moment your child will die you will see your mother agar aisa nahi kiya toh tum jaanti ho what can I do and for now you may leave the mansion.


As geet reached downstairs dadima was waiting for her eagerly, she wanted to ask geet the reason as to why she had given a wrong statement but when her sight fell on dev who came behind her she mind got tossed onto the other side ... toh yeh sab dev ke kehne peh kiya tha tumne haina geet?? she asked with tears in her eyes, mere pote ne tujhe kachre se uthaya aur tune apna aukaad dikhadiya geet... if you wanted money you could have asked me I would have given you iss dev ke saath milke tune maan ko jail bhej diya?? Maan hamesha kehta tha dev ke baare mein lekin kaise maanti?? Dono mere hi bache the par aaj dev ne saabit kardiya hai maan ne aaj tak jo bhi iske baare mein kaha tha sab sahi tha just leave the house dadima held her head looking at geet walking away with the suitcase in hand.


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She looked at the fire crakers in the dark sky that were burning yet giving a kind of illumination in the dense atmosphere too, the chillness around did not bother her. Had it been the other day of life with maan, she would have been in his arms cuddling into him like a child,


kuch aatishein aasman mein hai kuch uske andar, kya kare uss aatish ka jo uski jindagi ke sapnon ko sach karne duniya mein aane ko tayyar hai??


I cant keep you with me not at the cost of my mother's life!! She decided for an abortion after a long thought process


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main batati hoon maan ki kya hua, sameera said holding dadima....jiske baare mein aap bol rahi hai na woh main hoon and geet she is an angel it was me who was playing with maan and dev akhir mein dev ne mujhe dhoka diya!! You know what dadima?? Maan has got geet from rags but he had used her!! uski majboori ka istemaal karke, uska sab kuch cheen liya sirf tees lakh deke (30 lakhs) kitna aasan tha na maan tumhare liye?? Jis ladki ko tum pyar karne ka daawa karte ho yeh bhi nahi jaanne ki jaroorat nahi samjha ki geet kyun aayi thi uss party mein to sell herself?? You bought her right?? APNI MAA KO BACHANE!! USKI OPERATION KE LIYE!! She had given all the money back just look at the table you have used an innocent life for your desires sacha pyar tumne nahi geet ne tumse kiya but your revenge, your anger had spoiled her life!!! Those words hit hard on dadima, so geet was trapped and she had accused her. Dadima's hand automatically rose to slap maan but she couldn't do it her palm turned into a fist...Please get her maan I want her meri bachi ko pata nahi maine kya kya boldiya I want her back go she said falling down on the bed repenting the words she had used for geet.


Maan turned back to look at the paper on the table, Sam did know about the pregnancy of geet but she wanted maan to apprise it on his own as she understands his mind how bad can he feel. His fingers quaked fearing he will have to read something he cant bare!! And then tears brimmed his eyes.


Jaa rahi hoon maan aapse dur, yeh letter iss liye likh rahi hoon kyunki main chahti hoon ki aap apni jindagi mein aage badho marry someone who deserves you and I know for whatever I did to you uske baad main aapke liye kuch nahi lagti. Aap mujhse jafrat karenge par jiss nafrat ke wajah se mere paas aaye usme You gave me things I could never even imagine in my life, you touched me and gave me a reason to live my life maan... yeh kuch paise hain jo aapne mujhe diye the I don't need them now!! He looked at the money that he gave geet that day placed on the table. His heart began to bleed realizing what had he gone and done to an innocent girl.


Now I have got a reason to live thanks to you aapne mujhe woh diya hai jo kabhi nahi mil paata, ek aur baat I gave into you just for my happiness and ill never regret this, the letter fell down from his hands and with that maan too sunk on the floor feeling ashamed for the deeds he had done!!


Ill get you back geet no matter what ill get you back, tum mujhe iss tarah chodke nahi jaa sakti main bhi dekhta hoon kaha bhag ke jaogi mujhse!! His mind had decided to get her back into his life!!


try giving me 250 likes anyhow this story is ending in 2 more parts 😭


PREVIOUS PART:
PART 17

NEXT PART:
PART 19

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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oh god wow lovely painful update.. te way geet leaving km and my maan was so painful.. te way dev threatening her and te way she decide to abort her child for her mother was so painfull.. destinty is playing in geet ki life and making her to struggle as mother and a daughter.. te way sam saying abt geet to dadi and dadi realizing her mistake was so emotional.. now my maan cum to know wat he did to his geet in his revenge for dev.. maan get ur geet soon, before u lose ur feel of fatherhood.. te way my maan deciding to bring his geet back was so lovely.. bechari geet ki life was struggling coz of khuranas..i love te update so so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*EDITED*
first tym m commenting here 😆
Finally Maan got to knw whole truth...
i knw Maan will get his Geet back at any cost😊😊😊😊

and hoping Maan will save his baby and Geet on tym no abortion plzzz 😕

i want Sameera to be punished as well 😡😡😡
4 whatever she did with Geet be it coz of dev's plan😡😡😡

i have a confusion🤢🤢🤢
does Maan knw that Geet is pregnant..????

awesome update loved it 👍🏼👏👍🏼
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do update next part soon that too with Maaneet's reunion...me waitinggg

u ending AI in 2 parts.???
i was expecting 5-6 parts more aftr Maaneet's reunion full of romance




Edited by tanvinangia - 12 years ago

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