MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread3 - Page 78

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

very very very intense update...
last time didnt comnt properly..so i'd take my own sweet time...

i loved the way u portrayed maan's emotions here..
its always that we empathise with geet as the story is basically on her...but this was the perfect point to show maan's pov too.

and the song u used...it actually made me cry when i heard that along with each line,..

gumnamiyaan bhi do, naakaamiyaan bhi do
viraaniyaan bhi de do,

this line actually made me cry..the way he feels for her...
its so tough to find person like this in this world..and i think that helplessness made me so emotional today.
its as if he is just begging her to give all her pain to him so that he could see her smile forveevr and ever!!!!!

pareshaaniyaan bhi do, hairaaniyaa bhi do
nhigebaaniyaa bhi de do,

whatever happened with rhaul..he deserved it best. he should never get a chance to live properly..monsters like him make sum1's life a living hell and themselves live a kings life. its very rare that a girl gets justice...
this updt reminded me of the nirbhaya case..and u wont believe the minor who was involved.. was actually transferred to a juvenile court just because he was 17yrs and 6 months old..but it was him who had done the worst damage!!!!

khaamoshiyaan bhi do, tanhaaiyaan bhi do,
bechaniyaa bhi de do,

wish some one life maan exixted in real life too.. probably no1 would go to sleep crying her eyes out..not making a sound...still hiding from everyone...
this updt was kind of very very very emotional for me..and the end where a tear escapes his eyes...aaahhh...that just touched my heart!!!!!! you have done a wonderful job diii...
emotion-wise..i tell u this is the best update ever!!!!!!
eagerly looking forward to the next..probably their face off!!!!

Originally posted by: Susegad

Beautifull put Ash. That song was what made this update so very phenomenal.

Loved your poem at the beginning,. Your version of "Bebasi dard Ka Alam".😃