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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
hi dear
me again here
with few lines
from maan ad our geet


yeh hai maana ,
ke sabse alag tha uska meri zindagi mein aana
uske aane se ,
dil ke darwaaze par aahat hui
khayaalo mai koi aa basega ,iski sug-bugahat hui
hal pal usse bas mein hi dekhu,
yeh chahat hui
uske jhumko ki jhnak dil ko chui
uski sahmi shaksiiyat se bhi meri baate hui

aur ab to uski har uss julf se hai mujhe ,
nafrat si hui
jo khud to chue usske surkh gaalo ko,
aur kahe mujhse ke mein
yuhi bas dur se dekhu usse

ooh mere khuda ,
bata mujhe zaraa
kya yeh sab tere ishaare hai ,jo mujhe pukaare hai
ke yahi hai woh ik phool , jo hoga mujhe mere daaman mein qubool

STILL TO WRITE




Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
awesome!

rahul is so cheap

continue soon
PaintedSky thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
uff people like rahul should be taught a tough lesson.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
First half is divine n awesum. It felt heavenly. Bt that leacherous rahul made me feel disgusted.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Beautiful song selection.loved d way u used t 2 show maan's restlessness.Loved Maaneet scene.That rahul is so disgusting.u r rt.ladies get harassed like this in their work place.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
maan givng himslf a chance...rahul hell bent on makng her uncomfotble...awsome prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Maan is slowly understanding he feels something for Geet... Hope he will understand his feelings soon...Rahul surely gonna trouble Geet..
Nice update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
amazing update...
loved the dargah scene and maan trying to realize wt he feels fr geet...
hate that rahul...hope nothing bad happens to geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
finally updated my comment sorry for late again
check my comment on page 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was awesome and great and regarding not voicing their fears i just don't get why they don't trust their sixth sense and help themselves

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