Right or wrong MGff part 7updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1 was good... So meera knows abt all tis... I knew tat maan would b taking over the comp...:/
Part 2 was very good... I'm worried for geet... I hope maan finds out the truth instead of punishing her...
Loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing parts
loved it
interesting story
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RIGHT OR WRONG



Part 3

In the evening

Geet's home

Maa why are u running like u are preparing for marathon geet asked rano while looking mischieviously at her dad


Geet tu mera mazak uda rahi hai asked rano


Nahi maa meri itni himmat ki main aapka mazak udhaon geet said giving her innocent puppy look to her maa


Waise maa aap ye sab kyoun kar rahe ho koi aa raha hai kya asked geet while helping her mother


Haan geet kal teri badi maa aur tere bade papa aa rahe hai told his father smiling widely at the thought of his best friend who is coming back

Aa raha nahi hoon aa chukka hoon stated loudly by akash singh khurana aur ye kya tu itna shocked kyun ho raha hai kisi aur ko expect kar raha hai kyat u are bol na mannu asked akash


Are tu sach mein aa gaya ashu par itni jadi kaise tu toh kal aane wala tha na asked mohinder to akash


Are kaisa yaar hai tu ek to mein itne saalon baad aaya hoon aur tu hai kit u pooch raha kii mein aaj kaise aa gaya dekha bhabhi zamana kitna badal gaya hai akhirkar wohi hua jiska mujhe dar tha dost dost na raha said akash making a sad face


only to be interrupted by


mohinder who said are nautanki ab bas bhi kar Buddha ho raha hai par teri nautanki karne ki aadat gayi nahi abhi tak ab ye bhabhi aur maa kaha hai


aa rahi hain dusri gadi se mujhe to meri pari se milna tha isliye mein jaldi aagya said akash


only to be interrupted by


neeti khurana hume waha akela chodkar par hum pehle milenge pari se suna aapne



aapdono se pehle hum milenge apni pari se came the voice of savitri devi


while all this was going on noone noticed the person who was there standing in shock and dreading the confrontation from his past this time but a pair of eyes saw it and hugged her yes it was meera who came here to ask help from geet about babysitting ansh but what she saw stopped her to talk to geet and she just hugged her to bring her out from the shock

Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yieppeee

i am first to comment

awesome update

loved it

all wants to meet pari but geet is too shocked to react
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Posted: 12 years ago
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next update by tonight or tomorrow but for that u need to like and comment
so make it fast as it will be on page 4
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RIGHT OR WRONG



PART 4

Geet r u alright asked meer . but geet replied with a forced smile that she is fine and moved on to welcome the khuranas., who were fighting over her for which she smiled seeing them.

Badi maa bade papa called geet smiling at them to gain their attention and in response got a tight hug from her badi maa and a cute pouting face of her bade papa who was seeing her for not being the first one to hug her, and for that she widened her arm to welcome others in the group hug.

After some time all were sitting in the living room of handas when geet spoke so finally u all got the time to be back and not to forget I m angry on dev and nt for not coming back with u all and yes where is annie I hv not seen her and don't tell that she is not back yet.

I m so sorry and we all missed u and ur pranks a lot pari but wht to do ur dusht danav he was not at all ready to be back so we were stuck there baby but when he said he is ready to be back we came here said dadimaa to geet who in response gave a forced smile to her as it was confirmed he is near to her

After some time dinner was laid in the dining room of handas and was the joyful affair as all were pulling the legs and talking with each other

In geet's room

Geet was trying to sleep when her mobile rang and she took the call knowing its meer otherside

Meera: geet are u alright

Geet: umm

Meera: geet I think he has moved on in his life and will not bother u

Geet : think so and hopefull also

Meera : if u want u can take leave I will inform boss

Geet: no meer I will be alright don't worry

Meera : goodnight geet and take care

Geet: thanks meer for being there for me and good night will see u tomorow

Geet was trying to sleep wen she drifted back to her past and thir first meeting

Precap : first meeting with maan

past and present

Edited by taptiarhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet all worried... waiting for their meeting...
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet is so close to his family. Then y angry & afraid for Maan.
Waiting to know their past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
geet is very closed ti khuranas...
then what's between her n maan!!!!!!!!
loved it...

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