WS: the unlucky girl (comp) removed sorry - Page 13

to tell u the truth, i am not a big fan of sad stories...but somehow, this one touched my heart...
love without trust is useless and maan understood that very late in his life...well, he atleast understood it...
finally he went to a place where geet is waiting for him...

'this is what i call hauntingly beautiful...very few stories have made me go teary eyed...and this is one of them...i dont kniw what made me weep, whether it is geet or maans remorse , but something just pulled the strings of my heart...my heart goes out for geet, a girl who disdnt deserve to suffer, and deserved happiness, but alas cudnt be happy for long...rk character has made a incredible impact and made a mark...maan is the main character who evoked pity, sympathy, hatred, disgust and finally ended up making me cry for him too, for what could have been ...for what was lost...his last words...absolutely haunting...nothing dramatic...just leaves u with a haunted feel...yet so beautiful...i must say the parting words were truly master play of words , that just summed up the life of geet...couldnt have asked for anything better to read on my favourite couple...though my maanu was showed in negative light...but i loved it... kudos to u for coming up with such a amazing theme and making this story one of the best stories to read for the readers...my big big thank you ... will be waiting for more such astounding masterpieces from you...keep writing...

Originally posted by: ar_art

Thank u dear... Wow tat was really a boster... Cos I was thinking I dissapointed all the readers for making geet die... I did change the last part as lots of people wanted maaneet together so oly finished it lik this...
thanku for liking it... I'll be giving intro to new story here by tonight... Check it out...

Hey u dont need a booster
u r an awesome writer
keep up d gud works

Maan deserve every bit of what he is getting. Happy for geet and RK at last she is happy

very touching epi😭😭😭😭geet died😭😭she left the world leaving 2 angels.

you were right dear that by the end of story we will ne emotional and will feel sorry for maan.

OMG... this SS is so beautiful though it made me cry. You are an awesome writer... I became your No. 1 fan yaar. 🤗. The way u narrated the story was flawless. I loved RK very much yaar and also Geet. and I also liked Maan in the epilogue. You should write another SS too. I'm waiting for your another work.

Just wanna say, this SS is one of the best SS i've ever read. 👏

very emotional ending dear.

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painful...
realluyy really painful update..
cryyiinggg...
need more tissues... mine got finished... :-(

maan dont deserve geet