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i read this last night and found it deleted this evening ...
i cannot comment on other members' view n i have no rights to do the same but i wish to appreciate your effort
It was an awesome attempt and it takes courage to write a sad work with people who wish to have happy ones around you (a crowd that includes me too 😆)
I liked the flow of the story , the way you showed her helpless situation and even died efore she could taste the flavour of happiness
She lived in her place where people hardly loved her , she got engaged to Dev at her parents' wish , got married to maan again on her parents' wish , Fell in love in him ,molested by him , beaten by him . She had a miscarraige just after she came to know that she was pregnant . She was thrown away from the home by him without being given a chance for explanation and found true gentleman who worshipped her yet she was never alive to feel his love .
You have sketched every character in the best way and every character remained in the same way throught .
Geet's life had been miserable and it was never in her hands . I wish she was lucky enough to stay with RK all her life .
To be frank , i did not like the ending part at all . Geet's death was acceptable , maan's repent was good but geet forgiving him was not nice (atleast for me ) , eventhough it was just his illusion .
I dont want maan to stay in heaven (only if he oes there ) with her . He never deserves her in hislife , be it on the world or hell or heaven . I just wished to see him rotting in pain everyday without mercy .
It was just my POV . Sorry if it had hurt you or anyone else
@Author : Consider posting it again . It definetely deserves to be appreciated . If you wih, put a warning in the title bar or at the beginning of the post .
This was truly touching . Hoping to see more works from you ...
with regards n best compliments
Niti 😆
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