If Only You Saw Me (1)

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Comment updated from the land of dreams

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

BOTH LOOK AT EACH OTHER AND TURN AWAY

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Super update

Finally some progress😳

be it in the name of their speeches

but their eyes meet

some apprehensions,some revelations

but may be a beginning

😃

Continue soon

😊

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Lovely part...😊

So finally she noticed the mesmerising eyes & the charming smile that did make her pause & contemplate somewhat about it... yet she said that though they are dreamy but not much as others have exponentially described about him ... sure sure ... ab aur kya chaiye isse...😳

They did make some progress... 😉

Reading this one I am feeling I'm again loving the emotion called love... Hayee... So simply you put it in the part yet it left a tingle behind.

Continue soon...

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

aww it was wonderful as usual...
plz update the next part soon... 😊

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Nice update.

The uneasiness felt by two different people expressed in different ways. One just macho-ing his way through it, the other holding onto the support offered and putting on a brave front.

When you decide you don't want to look at a particular someone does that not become the hardest thing to do. Very well expressed.

Thanks for updating...

No thap, thap, thap today.