Ek anjani dor PT 17 PG 138 AUG 18

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

awesum dear😊

geet got a new job👏

maan knows the truth of surbhi😡

Quote

dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome

fabulous

liked a lot

continue soon

waiting

happy new year⭐️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

intersting concept plz pm me whenever u update

Quote

@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sweetsaloni
~UPDATING~

waiting

Quote

suhana_maaneet

@suhana_maaneet

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

~EK ANJAANI DOR~

PART 5

Geet reached the head office.,. She was glad that she was not alone there her friend who suggested her Malhotra & Group was also there... Geet looked at nidhi.. Nidhi smiled seeing her she looked at a shy and cute dhruv in her arms..

Nidhi : mujhe toh laga ki tu aayegi hi nahi .. Aur bata baby kaisa hai.. She tried to take dhruv from geets arm but dhruv he first snuggled more into geet refusing nidhi not to even touch him and how can geet not get into her baby's terms .. She securely wrapped and covered him with the baby blue duvet hiding from the chilly winds biting cold that once had made her to loose this tiny life in her arms...

nidhi cutely pouted seeing naughty baby playing with her , he clearly refused to go to her like he knew that the person holding him is not only his guardian or mom but the ultimate saviour of his life...

Nidhi : no wonder apni mom par gaya hai.. Geet stiffened a bit listening to word mom... it was the bitter but real the reality that is capable of loving soul.
..DHRUV IS NOT HER CHILD NOT HER'S ...

Geet looked at the baby who was nearing dozing she slowly patted him to sleep gazing lovingly his pink cheeks brown hair geet was lost in the lines what nidhi said and nidhi also looked at geet who was lost in dhruv ... So to bring her out of her reverie

Nidhi : geet kahan kho gayi jyada mat soch tera beta tujh par hi gaya hai dekh kaise mana kar diya mere paas aane se bahut shararti hai par bahut hi pyaara hai...

geet smiled and gave sleeping dhruv to nidhi

geet : lo jee bhar ke nihaar lo mere baby ko ...

nidhi very eagerly and lovingly took dhruv and caressed the sleeping baby .. She was the one who is with geet since they were twelve she is the only support and family geet had till she met her little angel . It was nidhi who was angry with her decision to keep the baby .,

FLASHBACK

Today was the most chilly and cold day in shimla the temperature had a sudden drop making it impossible for the folks to continue with their work ... It was just seven in the evening still everything was so calm and still tiny droplets of water along with snow were falling ... Geet looked upwards she loves to play and get wet in slight drizzling ..but at the same time protecting herself in getting caught up with sneezing and cold .

She was wearing all the warm clothes a scarf covering her head and neck , a long brown fur coat .. Geet was going it was just few minutes walk for her to home .. Today she was two hours late usually her office hours gets over at five in the evening but today due to increasing work load she had to spent two extra hours at office...and now going home ...

geet was going when a dog's bark caught her attention .. The dog was pulling something and geet being curious went near the bench which was having the cloth dog was pulling , seeing geet the dog went away getting scared and when geet touched the cloth she got startled it was a baby who was so small compared to the babies she have seen .. She immediately took the baby in her arms cocooning the dying soul in the warmth of her love .. Geet looked around to see if she could find baby's parents but no one was there nothing except dark ..

geet : babaji ye kiska bacha hai kon chod gaya iss nanhi iss jaan ko yahan dekhiye iska blanket bhi geela hai ..
. Geet was looking for his parents but couldnt find anyone

geet looked at the baby his eyes was closed she didnt knew till now if he is fine

geet : baby aapki mumma kahan hai kaise chod ke chali gayi aapko acha aap mere saath chalo phir agar aapke parents aayenge aapko lene toh hum pehle unhe ache se daantenge kaise woh apne baby ko chod ke jaa sakte hai theek hai...

geet cooed the baby and took him with her...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
thank u all for likes and comments

waiting for ur review

DIPTI & SUHAANA

Edited by sweetsaloni - 12 years ago

163

Quote

kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

loved the update ! how could a mother leave her baby with such utter indifference that too when she knows, baby's father is craving for it ... she could have given the baby to him... thank god that geet took care of the baby , saved it from dog... what not... continue pl...

Quote

@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz... but one ques why u stop the pen at rt time

and in precap u said maan and baby but there is no scene of both lovely

continue soon

Quote

Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Quote

Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

dhruv soo cute yaar..geet is an angel.. so the baby is maan's..very interesting..pls cont soon..

Quote

sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Very Nice Update. felt bad for dhruv. how can a mother leave the premature baby in that cold weather to die. god has send geet to save that baby. so sweet bonding between geet and dhruv.