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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome parts valli dii and suha

love it

i m feeling we r writing a combo ff in pm's

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

part 17

she finish her lunch and take phone and dialed maan number

********mai tera hero *************mai tera hero*************

but maan is not picking her phone even after 5 min of ringing

"see baba ji how angel forgets me... and see not even picking my call also idiot dushat danav" geet talked to babaji or say crushed maan.

but phone ring disturb her talks with her babaji

*********pari hu mai********la la la*********

geet saw this is maan call so take immediately

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

man i love it
this shall be fun
you all are gonna continue with this
am dying to read more
this sure is different and interesting
cheers for pm

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

PART 18

she didn't even waited for a second and blasted on the poor guy...

geet: how can you do that angel ...why you were not picking up my call ... you are alright na...how was the meeting...did you sign the deal...were the clients impressed...
she was just asking in super fast speed...

maan st: you can't change fairy... you will remain as it is...

maan : geet..geet..listen to me let me give a chance to speak atleast...

geet: hmm...after taking a long breath...

maan: how was your exam geetu...did you had lunch...and yes i signed the contract had my lunch...that you must have known by know by nakul kaka...

geet: hmm...so when are you coming angel..she asked making a cute baby face...
though maan can't see on phone but yes he know her every gesture through his heart...

maan: i am coming in sometime geetu...now i will talk to you when i'll reach

geet: hmm...bye angel...

maan: don't sulk fairy...

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

part 19

"stop stop angel" geet said hurriedly.

"now but happen shona" maan sighed and asked.

"can i come office now with driver chacha" geet asked with so much sweetness.

"no u r going to prepare for next exam ok" maan said sternly.

"please angel i m feeling bore here in nakul kaka company" geet said in baby voice.

"no means no fairy" maan said in hard voice.

"pleusee angel i m missing mumma papa" geet said in meek voice.

other side maan close his eye to listened geet painful voice who is telling him how much upset she is and trying to smile for him.

"fairy said to nakul kaka come here with u and take ur book also ok" maan said in stern voice.

"oyee i love u i love u my angel is real angel" geet said and jumped from bed and shout nakul name.

"nakul kaka ... nakul kaka" geet shouted and decreasing from stairs.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

part 20

oyee i love u i love u my angel is real angel..maan heared geet saying..he though knew its becoz of her excitement..he wanted to hear those words from her truely by heart..when she grows up n knew the meaning of i love u...he cant live without her..n he wants her to be with him..he is more matured than his age..but he knows what he wants..

here geet called nakul

geet:kaka,angel said me to come with u to office..

nakul:but beta tumhara exams..

geet showed her bag,which she has packed..

geet:i have my books with me..i will read in office..angel will help me too..

nakul:then its ok..but its office so u must behave properly n must not annoy ur angel..he has lots of works in office..

geet:promise..i will be a gud girl..

both went to kc..

Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

PART 21

although geet has promised but still a child will be a child...but maan he actually made his cabin suitable for his fairy knowing he will have to help her and side by side he will complete the project file of the deal signed today...

here geet was over excited...enthusiatic ... she actually checked her self..her dress two times before entering KC...
its not knew for her but now her angel's pride and prestige also matters to her...
and nakul kaka was just following her...

geet greeted karan who was coming with the budget files to show maan...
geet: hii karan bhaiyya...
karan: how are you gudia...

karan asked ... she always adressed him as bhaiyya...so now karan also feels his responsibility towards his little sis...
he very well knew that geet is in KC...
that means its for maan...

so he himself lead her to his cabin...followed by nakul...

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

part 22

geet open the door of maan cabin with thud in excitement and see maan is talking with one of client their as the client is old so he dont mind with disturbance but maan dont like it as this is about kc reputation.

maan glare geet for which she hang her head down... went and sit on a side couch with her bag. she is little scared and disappointed to see maan reaction.

as she is the small one in both family so all pamper her so much may be she is 14 yr old but her antics like 10 yr old girl who dont understand how to behave in professional way as whenever she came here this is only for fun but now situation is different.

"so young man i must say u r just like ur father" said that old client.

"thanku sir kc will not disappoint u" maan said and shake hands with client and leave him till door as in respect.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

PART 23

the client took there leave but maan he needs to make her understand...and being short temper is not easy to keep his anger under control...

maan: geet..what was that...don't you know how to behave...
his voice was strict...and it was seeming rude too...
tears brimmed in those hazels... her head was downcasted and silently every single tear drop was making its way through her cheek..making her cute nose , lips and cheeks red...

maan closed his eyes in frustation...why did he have to shout at her knowing how childish she is ...
he slowly kneeled down and lifted her face by his chin...

she immediately hugged him and sobbed loudly...
maan was on the top of his guilt..he shouted on his baby princess and made her cry...

geet : ( still sobbing) angel...( sob) i am sorry...(sob) i won't repeat it...( sob) ..i promise... please don;t be mad at geet... i can't bear...
a tear escaped from his eye too...and he didn't even wiped it...

maan : i am sorry fairy...please forgive your angel...
geet looked at him..with a cute baby face...

geet: its okk... wiping his tear..and she wiped her tears too ...

geet: i promise i will knock first and then after getting permission i will enter...

maan: that's like my princess...

geet: hmm...fairy...

maan: yup... fairy...

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

part 24

"wait... wait" geet said and stood up from couch.

"now what happen fairy" maan asked in laziness.

geet is standing with her hand on her waste with cute angry expression. maan saw this and rolled his eye as he knows some childish demand is on way for him.

"u angel ... u just scold papa's fairy now u have to bear punishment" geet said with a frown.

"see fairy but i have a reason of scolding dear" maan said in protest.

" no ... no ... no excuse is expectable" geet said in finality.

" now tell me what u want" maan said as he knows there is no way other than this.

"angel u r so sweet" geet shout and hug maan in excitement.

"kk now tell me" maan said and hug her back.

"tomorrow is my last exam can we go out for little outing" geet asked in hope

"hmm let me think but we will go in sunday as u know naa i have to look after office also" maan said.

"k " geet said and smile.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago