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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Oh so finally Geet asked for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely lovely update.. te way my devil making his geet to respond of him, was so lovely.. how ever geet tries she cant deny him.. te way my devil touching his geet as he owns her was so lovely.. te way my devil making his geet to say her feelings was so lovely..i love te update so much. now wat will happen.
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
hot update
d devil finally got her flowing wid his passion
do cont soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

He's rightfully called DEVIL !

He just doesn't want her denial n refusal, her acceptance wud render him to do "things"

"I will love you till you ask me to do more instead of saying leave me or stop it" How strongly written Aniee , I wish I cud give yew more of the praisings but em kinda speechless 👏👏👏

Simply no one can even try to lie n deceive him !

He has again tricked her n she has again been trapped , this tym through an innocent child !

The more I am touching you, the more this fire inside me is burning me"

Man He's scary 😲

Seeking pleasure in burning 😕

Again she refused n provoked him 😲

He loves her for sure but this word is very small to define his love for her !

Ur poems just held the whole chapter inside it 👏

Em seriously falling in love wid Ur poems 😃

Having goosebumps reading them 😳

Coming to the devil, he wants her body but wid her heart, her heart but wid her soul, he wants to b in her existence ! To own her 😳

He's definitely very unique , to b the reason of her lyf n the same for her death too 😉

Finally he has succeeded to seduce her n she has been captured by his fire, forbidden fire N feeling the same burning inside her n said his awaited word "More"😳

Can't wait for more Aniee, please please make it fast 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
I hate him and yet can't hate him. M confused. And wht exactly he want frm Geet-to love him or to hate him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wot kind of devil he isss curosity increasing to know him ,at times sooo much caring n loving one and at timesss sooo danger , why he is like thisss ... wotever but love the devil 😆 ... awesomeee update waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Main Agayi 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aur kon kon hai yahan 😃
Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bara Ahsan apka sharmeen jiii hehehee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blushingqueen

bara Ahsan apka sharmeen jiii hehehee



Thankun Thanku 😉

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