Dil ka rishta...Part 3/ pg 71 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
so much for the comments...
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PART 3

Daadi got a mini heart attack ...watching maan smiling...her eyes turned bigger watching him actually laughing...she pinched herself to make sure , she wasn't dreaming...but this she never dreamt even... maan smiling...
"hey babaji..!! please fulfill this wish...mere maan ki shaadi karado...mein pure 10 din Paris chali jaungi..matlab aapko 10 din mujhse chutkara mil jayega..babaji please...!!!"

Maan went to his room still in thoughts of that girl...she was definitely angelic...her innocence..that was the first time he was thinking about a girl, there was something special in her that completely captured his heart...he was lost in her..sitting on his bed..a slight smile playing on his lips...


Daadi who was waiting for maan downstairs got worried as this was the first time maan got late, she came to his room to check why was he late..and was shocked to see him still smiling lost in his thoughts...she couldn't believe her eyes..

She coughed to get his attention but it seemed as if he was too much lost in his angel..now daadima was getting worried for him."babaji..kahin mera pota pagal to nahi ho gaya..".she shouted.."maan..!!"

uff..his trance was broken so brutally..he looked fiercely at the intruder , who has the dare to enter his room without a knock..but when he looked at daadima, the smirk on her face told him that he was caught and now she was not going to leave him without teasing...
He smiled at her..and ran to washroom before daadi could make a move...she smirked.."hmm...kuch to gadbad hai..pata lagana padega babaji..mera laptop ka deewana pota aakhir kiske khayloon mein khoya hai..."
She waited for him at the dining table, not even thinking about the other two persons in the mansion.."Nakul, wo.."
"daadima, sahab to abhi buisness trip se aaye nahi hain aur madam raat ko 4 baje ke pass hi party se aayi hain..to main ne unhe disturb nahi kiya..ab agar aap kahein to..."
"nahi nakul, tum rehne do, meinhi unse baat karti hun.."daadi was pretty excited about telling maan's changing behavior to his mom, may be she is interested in her son, may be little bit..!!


She knocked her room..maan's mother lazily opened the room..her eyes little swollen signifying lack of sleep.."mummyji, ye kya hai...aapko pta hai..mein kitni late aayi thi...can't u let me sleep for few hours without disturbing.."she said rudely...
Daadi was too excited, so she ignored her tone.."beta, mujhe aapse bahut zaruri baat karni hai maan ke baare mein.."
"mummy please.!! abhi mere pass faltu baaton ke liye time nahi hai..mujhe sona hai..aaj raat ko mujhe party me jaana...so phir kabhi..."
"aapke pass kabhi apne bete ke liye time b hota hai kya..??"
"hogya apka lecture shuru..."she shut the door at her face...


Daadima didn't reacted much..she pouted "meri hi galti hai..jab inhe koi fark hi nahi padta, to mein kyun ise bataa rahi thi..."
Maan watched the whole scene...his hatred for his parents only seems to increase with time...but he can't see his daadi sad.."daadi..kya aap bhi subah subah mood kharab kar rahi hain apna..chaliye.."
"phir bhi..this is not anyway to talk.."
"daadi, u know na..they don't care..they never did...so why do u think they will change ever.."
"umm.."she pouted.."in this house..no one listen's to me..neither you nor ur parents...no body cares about me.."she sat at the table making saddest face ever..
"ohh, here she goes again..."but still he couldn't see her sad..."okk daadi, i'll meet the girl u have chosen.."
Daadi became excited..."but after 2 weeks..i am too busy now days..soo please..."
"nahi koi zarurat hi nahi hai.."she was too annoyed..
"daadi please.."maan requested.."okk,thik hai.."
"abhi mein chalta hun..will meet u at night..."
"but beta... breakfast.."
"daadi, mein office mein le lunga..okk..."maan went to his office and daadi thinking about the girl, she met yesterday...

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Vicky and an annoyed geet entered the handa haveli...She sat at the table grumpily...rano who was serving breakfast to mr. handa looked at her..
"kya hua bache..?? subah subah roni si shakal kyun banai hai.."
"mumma, maine inke aashiq ko daant diya.."😲
"haww.."geet made a complete O face.."i didn't knew him..okk.."
"achcha, isliye he was smiling looking at you.."
"mumma..!!" she whinned..
"vicky..bas karo.."
"achcha wo chodo..were u staring at him or not..."geet's face was red with anger..looked like she will throw all the plates from the dinning table on him.."say yes or no.."vicky smirked...
"bolo na chup kyun ho..."geet was trying to form words..all of them looking at her curiously..
"nahi nahi nahi..!!!"geet shouted and ran to her room, cribbing to her babaji..
"vicky, ye kya tha...aaj uska interview hai..aur tumne subah hi mere bache ka mood kharab kar diya..now go, get ready fast for college.."
"yups dad..."


Geet came down after getting ready for her interview..dressed simply, minimum accessories but still looked beautiful...completely calm forgetting all about the stranger and vicky's teasings...
"mumma.."she gave a dazzaling smile.."jaldi khana do.."
"haa..iss moti ko jaldi khana do.."
"papa.."she cried..
"vicky..."mr. handa glared at vicky...geet showed her tongue to him
poor vicky pouted.."sorry dad.."
"geet beta, stay calm and be confident.."geet smiled...
"its ur first interview, don't be nervous..okk.."
"okk moti.."vicky interfered..
geet wacked him.."chup reh.."vicky laughed.."okk mum, i'm going.."
"bye behna.."geet completely ignored him..he went towards the door..then came back..kissed geet's hairs.."all the best dii...perform well..i know u are the best.."😃
geet smiled at him..They all left for there respective places..
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next part tommorow..for sure😃
i know smallest part possible..😭
but haven't written much..
and the person responsible for late latifi here is me..sorry..🤢
we had discussed this part nearly months ago..😭but here i'm updating today..
and sanu is soo cutiee..😳..doesn't even says me anything..
bt if she would have been elder then me..she would have probably killed me till now..😆..bada hone ke bhi bahut benefits hote hain😳
but you all are welcome to throw chappals at me..😳..no eggs please..i'm vegie..
SORRY to alll..specially to sanu..😭


moni..😊
Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
Isolophiliac00 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated..chotu sha part...😆
if anybody would like to read😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
😲😲😲

tu yaha hai...😡😡
aur mai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kitna chotu sa update...
bndariya itne din wait karane k baad long long update dena chahiye tha to...tune long k baby chotu sa update kar diya...😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so lovely update..
daadi is such a nautanki..
loved vicky- geet's bond..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update...
chota sa bt cute sa...
i jst want to close door dat too 10 tyms on d face of maan's mom...😡😡
how dare she...😡

dadi maaa...i jst luv her...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so lovely update

Vicky teasing Geet n she getting annoyed with his teasing

is Geet going to Maan office for interview???
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally update mil gayi 😛
n di sorry kyu boling aap koi baat ni hota hai 😊

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