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Posted: 12 years ago

😆😆

srryy didnt know itna baichani se waiting for me.. srry yr i was having dinner 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank you so much for all lovely comments 😊


Part 9


Geet slow, quivering feet touched the marble floor of Khurana Mansion, with the jumping heart and palpitating heartbeats inside her stimulating body. Unknowingly, customary with her tradition, she covered her head with Dupatta, with her nervous hand. Her eyes met with the white well polished walls of mansion which was giving it the complete imperial look. The huge semicircle structured stairway in middle of the great decorated living hall, was the most glamorous piece of this royal palace. Each and every decorative arts exhibited there could be counted in millions. Geet eyes stuck on the glorious, breathtaking golden glassy Chandelier which was the brilliance of entire grand hall.


The entire surrounding was mirroring in her brown hazels when "Kya hua beta?'' Savirti Devi called her and found her completely lost. Geet trembled. "Ji.. nothing Da.. ! ..wo kuch nahi '' she looked down felt embarrassed.


"Aayiye.. ander chaliye'' SD made, let her come inside and said to have seat. Geet hesitated.


"What happened Beta?''


Geet kept stood there for quite seconds then, when could not hold more back she walked to dadi, stopped in front of her. Dadi looked her confused. "What happened be... !!'' could not complete...


Geet bend down and touched her feet. Dadi overwhelmed with her gesture. "Jeeti rahiye '' blessed Geet with her elderly grace. Geet smiled slightly and sat on couch, after Dadi took her seat. Dadi was noticing, she was not so comfortable and was so hesitating. She also noticed her marks of marriage. She guessed she was from good family. Finally she asked



"who are you Beta?.. why're you standing outside , at this time of night?''


Geet scared what to give reply! She could not say truth as maan had said and of couse, could not lie also as it was not in her good nature. "Ji!.. wo mai..''



"Boliye Beta?.. achha ye bataiye what's your name ?''



"Geet!!'' she sweetly answered.



"very sweet name Beta!! .. where is your family?''


"They're in Hoshiyaarpur Da.. '' Geet did not do decided what to call her



"Aap hume Dadi kah sakti hai Geet.'' Dadi smiled. "So are you with your husband here ?''



Geet nodded slightly, smiling, tried to hide from Dadi but she guessed that the girl had new marriage, and so she did not ask further, more about her wedding. "Where is he Geet.. your husband. Kya karte hai wo".. "Nandu!!'' She called her servant in between and ordered to get some thing to have.



"Ji.. he is businessman.. bahut baree '' Geet was being very uncomfortable to hide things from Dadi. It was not feeling good and to tell about her own Grandson, like this , it was feeling odd.



Dadi saw her uneasiness. "Kya hua Geet.. why are you looking so worried. And you didn't tell me why're you standing out !! sab thik hai na''



"I was waiting for Maan... '' in hurry, edginess she uttered.. then instantly looked Dadi who was equally shocked. "Maan se!! do you know him? Have you guys met before?''



"Ha..ji.. wo.. we had met in Hoshiyaarpur!''



Dadi- HP me .. oh.. toh ab samjhi.. you must have been met him when he was there for his site work. Yahi baat hai na!!''



Geet- Ji '' .. "dadimaa I should leave now!'' Geet was feeling on verge of high of emotional turmoil. She tried to stood up.



"Aree beta how will you go alone? Give me your husband number , i'll call him and tell to take you from here with him''



"But I've not his number''



"Number nahi hai? Beta does he know you've come here?''



"No''



Dadi started doubting something was wrong. She was observing her hesitation in giving answer about her husband. "Kuch toh garbar hai'' she thought. Geet wanted to run away from Dadi questioning eyes. She finally stood up "dadima mai chalti hu'' she started to walk out..



"Ek minute Geet!!'' Dadi stopped from back, made Geet feet fix to the floor.



"your husband has left you here, alone !!! Yahi baat hai na!'' Geet shocked, could not turn and face dadi. "Nahi dadima.. asi koi baat n..''



"I know Geet.. I can see you're in trouble and so want to meet Maan that he could help you to search your husband right!!'' Dadi came near Geet. Kept hand on her shoulder, supported her and made to face her. "Geet you dont need to feel embarrass Beta.. I promise my Maan will help you. Mai unse kahungi aapki madad karne ko''



"No Dadi aap galat samjh rahi hai. He had not leave me.. wo toh mai hi..'' tension was very noticeable on her face. She was hell shocked with all this spin.



"Geet you calm down Beta. And dont take tension. You can stay here till your family or husband come here to take you back. Maan aate hi honge.. you come and take some rest Beta''



"No Dadi you listen me please.. dadi!'' Geet had no help. She had to do what Dadi was telling her to and she was praying that Maan do not take her wrong.


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"Where is Geet!!!'' Maan yelled, clutched manager collar, making him jumped in shock... "Where is she Damnit!!!''



"Wh'who are you.. how did you enter in my cabin without my per-permission!'' Manager trembled, spoke within skipped breaths.



"Permission haan!!.. permission!!!!! who gave you permission to throw my wife out from here you bas***d!!!!!! Who gave you permission to ask her questions about her personal life that whom she is married or with whom not hann !!!!! Who gave you permission to ask her where I work What is my number and all those things which she did not know!!! what did you understand of her that she is some fraud!!!'' Maan eyes was burning in flame of pain and anger.



"why didnt you check the name of which your booking had been registered here!!! Why didn't you check the number, which had been mentioned on time of booking you fool!!!! why didn't you wait for me to come back or call you back!!!"



Manager was gasping him with wonder eyes. Was he looking, hearing true!! was he really Maan Singh Khurana ??? ohh!! it mean she was really Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana .. wife of him!!! '' His wide eyes got closed when felt a tight slap on his face from the iron-like hand of Maan and then a force which made him trembled, fall back pushing chair behind of which he tried to take support of. He winched. Maan was mad. He had gone insane did not understand what was he doing. Was it wrong or right not mattered at moment . The only thought of Geet, her missing was rocking his mind and this, made him furious in rage.



"If something wrong happened her , I will kill you !! I'll not leave you .. will kill you bas***!!! '' He lifted Manager clutching his shirt, was about to push him hard when "Maan stop it !!'' A middle age man appeared.



"Ruk jaao Maan.. what are you doing '' He was Commissioner of Police Mr. Madhava... a family friend of khurana's. He came and took manager in his charge. "Maan you go from here. I'll see him'' He ordered his police-men to take charge of entire hotel. Maan was not ready to leave but Madhva insisted him to go as it would not be good for his own reputation. Finally Maan started to leave "Maan Beta'' Madhva called him. "Dont worry she will be okay. My men would definitely find her. You did good to call me and told everything. Dont worry man! she will be soon with you'' he tried to cheer him up. Maan without say left but did not go Km but again, in search of her...



Precap :" Geet!!! Thank God you're fine.. you dont know how much worried I was '' Maan took her in his embrace..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

me first 😳,vil cment aftr rding😊

Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww bechari geet,hope dadi koi garbar na ker de hehehehe.
maan poor baby go home,geet tumharay ghar phunch gayai hai SMART GIRL,
PRECAP,,,wowww dadi ke samnay JHAPPI ya akelay main?hahahahaha.
awesome update dear,loved it a lot.
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet she is so innocent... Maan took Geet in his embrace that too dadi ke samane kya?😉😆Nice update..
Edited by CutieTeju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part😊
precap...interesting
will be waiting for the update of the new FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum...geet in KM and maan is searching fr hr evrywhere...isko kehte hain...bagal mein chora aur sheher mein dhindora...interesting precap...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

p00r geet she cant even say tat maan is her husband
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
geet trying hard to lie and dadi also mistook as maan's business associate wife
maan blasted the manager
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update loved it
& precap...interesting 😳

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