VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 02

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

seem like some one is hell angry

mere bina tere kya hogaya deear

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

yaar pls dont break your loyal readers heart by summarizing the story😭😭 we know it is not a easy task to write update sacrifize the time,energy ,mentaly but we love your work..pls be with us...

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gurti.angel

@gurti.angel

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

w8ng dear.am already read this part n coment bhi phelay he krdia tha

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Hey dear,
gussa mat ho plz...

Dont spoil such beautiful ff by wrapping it up due to sum non-intrstng readers.

Bt i too wonder whr maaneet ff readers hv gone?????
Evry writr is complaing.

KYA SACHE FANS HUM JAISE THODE SE HI HAIN,BAAKI SAB TIME-PASS KR RHE THE?????

If so then i feel too bad n vrry sad.

Well abt me.i try comment proprly evrytym bt unable to click like frm mobile,sry abt dat.

Bt plz conti n dont end ff in hurry

plzzz...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

awesome passonate update di☺️

maan made everything in his own way naughty maan😉😆

lo they again ended up in their passion but iam loving the way how maan is showering her with his love evry sec making her realise that he loves her so much n he wont leave her side what may come in future..and she belives on him more than her wonself..these lines shows all..Di'aap jitna hi koshish karo..mera Maan..sirf mera hi rahenge woh aapki kabhi nahin ho sakte'.!"

waitig eagerly for next

iam so sorry for late di.i was stuck with exams so iam late😭

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Awesome update..
Maan is making every minute sssooo beautiful for Geet..
Loved it to the core..

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

nice update dear😊

waitng fr twist

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Awesome updates
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

TEASER

Maan saw Geet standing near the window and staring outside while he got up and came behind her.Geet got conscious feeling his presence and the manly scent.Maan without saying anything entered inside her blanket and caressed her tummy making patterns and kissed her shoulder and softly bit it making her wince in pain.Then his hands travelled towards her curves inside her blanket and started playing with her curves squeezing it harshly.Geet moaned his name when he started giving wet kisses to her shoulder and her bare back.He wanted to love her all over again.Because he never was satisfied with her though he did love her numerous times.Every time he loved her the thirst and hunger to love her would become high.

Geet moaned badly while Maan askes still giving wet luscious kisses,"What were u staring outside?"He now made her to lean on his broad chest and caressed her tummy skin lovingly making her moan his name once again.Geet panted,"Mein baahar ki khoobsoorati dekh rahi thi...!"Her chest heaved when she answered due to the sensation which was developed by Maan due to his busy hands on her soft body.Geet asked pointing towards a place,"Maan...what is the place?"Maan saw the place and spoke,"That place is the hideouts for me and Veer only...!"Geet said,"Mujhe wahan jaana hai...!"Maan said pinning her to the nearby wall,"If i have to take u there then u have to give me a gift...!"Geet shied sensing his gesture while Maan immediately took her swollen lips once again making her face flush with redder resembling the apple fruit...

Iske aage u have to read my updates and when i get my range of likes and comments then only am gonna give the update nahin toh issi teaser se kaam chala lena...😛

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago