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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

part 20
nice...
Geet is possessive...
idiot Maan...
cont soon dear...

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

dadi and geet planned maan make trip cancel

geet heard from pinky maya meeting maan

she went to his office seeing her j

geet hurt maan insult in front of another woman

nice update

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

loved it

Maan is dead dadi n geet will twist his ears

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

story is confusing

who is dhruv?if he is devendra's son how come geet can get marry to him ?even in muslim also they dont get marry to their own brother's children as it is one blood,onlu they can get marry to sister or daughter side og family as their gotra changes but they never get marry i same gotra that is sounds absurd to me.

story flow is so much confusing that there is no head and tail of story is matching.i will say i read 4 part but got bore by not understanding so i am living this ff here in future i may come back to see if there is any improvement.thank you i dont want to hurt you but i feel that story is not flowing nicely -u are showingdev,than maan than dhruv and pinky and addi but dot know what is going on with story i think i will need to read from scratch again but dont have time will read when will get time.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Felt sorry for poor geet
both her n dadis plan backfired
i hated how he shouted at her
Poor lassie was jealous of that maya
wonder how dadi will react when geet tells her what happened
will maan feel guilty at all ?????
he still thinks of her as his fake wife when will the fake disappear n he will want her perminantely as his ????
As for Rid both bros know she is missing n r going to find her hope they do soon
Thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

i'm gonna edit this story as i also feel it is getting too complicated..

i have decided to change the whole story...

sorry if you liked the older version but i guarantee you that this one will be better than the last one.

i hope all you guys will stay with me till the end of this story.

thank you.

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

U changed the main thing which bound me to this story!!

The Prologue

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

WOW!! that was awesome...I loved this storyline too...So Riddhima thought that she is marrying armaan , but she got dev...poor dev confused...😆...& that armaan may be knows that Riddhi likes him & look at his nerve , he is enjoying her pain...😡...hope geet figures it out soon...Missing maan...introduce him soon...😳