Life partner 2,ch-20-pg131,Jan 2nd - Page 20

Originally posted by: gudmeet

excellent dear

how beautifully u r showing that maan and geet are coming closer

sharing ur pain and pleasures alwayas bring two people together

and what weird rules of navy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!{well don't say them weird..there must be some significane behind that..which i could not find on google..😕}

and what if some of ur teeth are not perfect ...u dont have to bite ur enemy😆😆😆

loved geet's valuable lessons on life

and i also did not allow the child in me to ( grow as i sometimes become impulsive)

(like yesterday i commented on maan and geet's closeness in this story though i know u r not comfortable with this, sorry for that dear and i have earlier said that ur portrayal of love is so strong and the subtle exprssions like hug and kiss are far more effective than a hot intimate description ){its ok dear..As a reader you have complete right to say what you feel and demand from the story..As a writer its my right to decide what i can give to my story to balance my own creativity and reader's expectation...so it wasn't childish at all..and i admired it..}

just like in this update when geet placed her head on maan's shoulder was showing their comfort for each other

and u have added some examples of not letting the child in u to grow from ur personal experience also{yes...😳I have shared biscuit thing with you long ago..}

loved that

and agree with all her reasoning

and loved the comeback of ravan in this story also and lessons which we can learn from him

sometimes i think ravan teaches us more than ram

as he teaches us what not to do rather than what to do{believe me after writing these stories i have come to know that there is lot of "Ramayan" in me...I think i am discovering myself in India fourms...😊}

lovely update dear