ANOKHA BHANDAN maneet updated part-20 14/11 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
when are you gonna update????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ar_art

when are you gonna update????



iam wrting the story dear
actually iam trying my level best to come to your expectation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART: 3

They rescued mohinder and took his statements

Mohinder could not identify the persons who has kidnapped him,

He saw person who was standing , there was something in his face which attracted him

He went near him

What is your name

Arjun….

He was replying with a attitude

IT IS PLACE WHERE ALL LOWER MIDDLE CLASS PEOPLE WILL LIVE….

IT IS LOOKING LIKE A SLUM… LOTS OF APARTMENTS ……NARROW STREETS …. THEY DID NOT GIVE SPACE FOR EVEN ROADS, CONJUSTED HOUSES …

In that area, in one of building, one could hear lot of screaming voice …it is looking as if some are shouting ….

All neighbors settled near the door to hear the shouting's, it is normal tendency for everyone… the curiosity to know what happening in the next house… this made all of the them to peep near the door.

The owner of house is

Shanker… retired teacher , he is very calm, kind person….

But his wife pammi she is of a different character , even her husband could not understand her , from the last 15 years the neighbors who are staying near by could not able to understand her, she will change according the circumstances , when doctors told him that it there is no scope for kids , he did not fell bad , he thought his sisters kids are his, he tried his level best in bringing up the kids…but pammi could not tolerate this… she tried a lot of ways to send away rano and her kids…sometimes even rano tried to suicide, but when his brother told her that to think about her kids…she should not think about pammi words.. from that day onwards rano never tried to suicide ,but pammi always leave a scope to taunt her…

Since morning when paami heard these news that arjun was arrested , she was in foul mood.. she does not want to miss this opportunity, at any cost she want to send away the rano and her kids…

Is that true that arjun was arrested ..

Vo.. tumko kaise pata hai..

Vo dadi hai haina vuska pota anji vusne bataye tha ,

Vo sab chodiye .. ye sach hai na ..

Ha…

She .. ranged with anger now …

You have not told any thing…

Hamara ghar ka izzaT

Now you decide whether , they should live in this house are i… you send them away

Shanker tried to pacify her..

See paami..

Dekho na arjun hamra beta jaisa hai ..see

No…vo kidnapper hai aur pata nahi…one day he will become murderer also , he should not live in my house ….

Shanker tried to convince her , but she was not listening to him

But pammi was not listening to him ,she was in her world of cursing rano and her kids …

Paami mere baat suno phele …

Nahi.. iam not going to listen…

Pammi…shanker hands raise to hit her…

At the same rano came between them

Bhai app kya kar rehe hai …

Rano… leave me today.. ab muje nahi hoga…

I am going out if I stay here … she will talk like this only…

It is habit of shanker … whenever he gets angry on his wife he will just leave the house and go….. and return back after 2 days….when his anger comes down….

Seeing shanker going away from the house .. all the women folk who are outside still now entered into the house….

What happened paami…why you are crying like this …one lady was asking so much concern

You do not that …that arjun he was arrested

What

Ha for kidnapping some one …

How do you know..

You do know that ….

It came in the papers …..

Rano was hearing their discussion from the room.. she could not dear to come inside the hall…

Why he is behaving like this….

Padayi khatham hogya tha… acha sa naukari karsaktha par nahi…

Tumko pata hai… every time he will fight with every one …jab dekho ….

Paami ka bhi vahi chinta hai….

Paami was just listening to their discussions

Bache paida karna hi nahi… vunko achi tarha parvarish bhi karna hai..

One lady was talking staring at ranno door

All are laughing at her statements

Ranno was just listening to their words…

Tears.. were not coming…it has dried up since long time ago… now

She got the habit of listening to these type of talks

Paami see your bahteji has come

Vasie bhi…vo…kaha se arhe hai….

Patna nahi….vasie bhi vo kahi bhi jassakte hai….

Tumko pata mere beta bolo raha tha ki pichele din… vo kise ke saat dekha tha movie hall me..

Shhh …she will listen

The girl who has stepped from the taxi ….will be around 21-23 years… but she will looking just like a 18 years girl…having correct figure ….if any one stares at her… they cannot remove their eyes from her … her eyes… just like a fish ones…..big one..

If she miles…. The lips rose like petals.. small dimple will appear on the left chin makes her more beautiful with the smile , but she won't smile ….

In this life…..she has faced many hard ships …life is not like a bed of roses…. But full of thrones…. This is reality for her….since childhood she struggled hard .. she has to fight with everyone..

If every one comes near her thinking of her beauty… but soon they will recognizes that ..the hard core shell of her heart

It is said that rose have the thrones …

When geet came out from the taxi she saw the ladies batch sitting near her maami and talking one moment she thought of going back again…but again she tightened heart which was slipping away

She gave the money to taxi.. without any hesitation she entered into the house , she greeted warmly to them..

What happened chachi… aja to apaka apka meetings jaldi start hogaya hai

How shameless you are geet …the chachi was murmuring herself

Kha chalegyathi itene subha subha

Suna hai tumhara bhai ka arrest hogya hai..

Vasie geet … why cannot your brother do job….why he is roaming like this and kidnapping others for money..

Hearing those words.. at one second geet felt very bad… but.. again she adjusted herself…. She lifted her chin and looked straight into the aunty eyes….

Kya kare cachi…

Bhagavan ne… jab beje tha dharti par sabko ek cheese dalithi .. app sab ko dosra ghar me kya horahe ye jane keliya bahut intrest hai.. you want some topic for gossiping

Hearing these words chachi face became very pale

How shameless your are geet… your brother was arrested for robbery and kidnapping but you are talking like this

Hearing these words geet turned back….

Cachi don't judge any one character with out knowing… if my brother was arrested for kidnapping and robbery .. then you should have been arrested for murdering and cheating .. I know when your widowed sister-in-law came to your house.. you have taken all her wealth .. and with in six month when you told to all of them that she died with heart failure… with out proper police investigation you did the funeral function ……

Aur ha radha chachi.. I came to know that while doing your cantering business in the marriage and other function , you will steal all silver and gold articles…..

Hearing those words from her.. all became stunned … they could not able to talk…

Geet … you come inside…

Hearing her mother words

Ha maa…

So chachi before you blame others… think about yourself ….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks you guys for your lovely support and likes...
sorry for the late.. actually i am trying differently to introduce geet character...
hope i came to your expectations. ...
it is big update,...
so please give me lot of comments and likes

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Oh i so loved geet ek dum sahi kaha usne i want this ff update soon di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
superb update
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awsome update loved it 😊
conti.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Loved it...
Wah kiya jawab diya geet ne sabko...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Kya nose cut diya... Very good... Loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
loved this part..
geets way of answering..
all mouth shut
haha..

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