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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow beautiful ritz
loved it ❤️

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

love it

and d poem u wrote was beautiful

m in love wid ur poems...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hii Ritu...Beautiful yet Emotinaol Os

Loved it very Much😳

That song s my all time Fav ⭐️
Maaneet emotions were Awesomely Written

For sharing and Pm

Hugsss

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow!that was so touching...
their love was just simple and perfect..!!
lovely os..

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Very beautiful Ritu

I loved your song choice...it is one of my fav

Poems at beginnign and end were true expression of emotions they were going through

Loved the whole structure actually...pain of present, turmoil of past and finally happiness of future...very well etched and written as a OS...

loved it a lot

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awsmly written Dear...

Lvd the poems you hv penned dwn in betwn...

The OS though emotional at start par end mein di le gaya...

Brilliantly written...

Thnx 4 d PM...

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supernasahu

@supernasahu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Amazing Os...👍🏼

Excellent song which is beautifully blend with the story...👏

Loved it...😊

Keep writing...⭐️

Edited by supernasahu - 12 years ago

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Oawww lovveddd it totallyyy
U really write beautifulll poems di. Ummahhh
And aoww kya concept hai yarr,
Maneet college besties, WOWW... but yeh kya Anvi😲
Uff!!!!! Yeh maan humesha dusre direction mei hi kyu bhagtaa hai jabb itnee soni kudi hoti hai isske pass 😉...
Yayyy!!!! Papaji ne Maaneet ki shaadi karwaa di 🥳 Yiipppieee
Lekin ufff yeh communication gap, humesha kaand krwata hai

Ae lo!!!!! Yaha pyaar ki shuruat huyi aur waha Geet bhaag gayi 😲
Uff yeh maaneet bhi na 🤢
But accha huya, finally maan ko Geet ki value to pata chali.
Andd aoww, stalking stalking... 😆
AND FINALLYYY Geet mill gayi 👏 Yeh MSK ka dimaag pehle kyoo nee chala bhai to hire detectives????? Buddhhooo kahi ka

Haayeee kya confession tha, Wah Wah!!!!!!! Loved it.
Hush! Finallyyy Manneet together... AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER😳

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow...ritu...loved it...

Very beautifully written all emotions

Very sweet & simple

Do write more

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wow

loved it totally it was so sweet and mesmerizing its simplicity was it power I loved the geet character she was so innocent and yet caring towards maan it took so much to left him but she did it for his sake more rather than hers and maan loved her wow

it was superb

and the poem was superb as well

waiting for more work from urs