Untouched Desires#5 (Thread 6 Link @ Pg 152)

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

res funtabulously fab updt...OMG!!!geet is having nightmares of maan leaving her and she bcuming an orphan again...both maan and geet are in pain but maan wants geet to go and fulfill her dream...OMG!!!!OMG!!!she slipped down the stairs...interesting precap...continue soon...

Edited by ushankitvc - 12 years ago

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

nice update

they pain was just t00 g00d t0 be expressed

bt maan wants her t0 be wat she dreamt

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Loved it it was very painful and emotional

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

that was a fab update dear!!!!!!!!!!!

the pain of separation was beautifully written... i completely loved the way you have portrayed the fear of Geet, pain of MSK, their emotional turmoil...

one of the best updates till date... continue soon the next part...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Wow lovely painful update..te way geet imagining herself and my maan was so painful..te way my maan seeing his geet and piercing his heart was so painful..te way my maaneet is hurt but sacrifacing for each other was so painful..te way my maan is crying and geet controlimg her sobs was so tearful..i love te update

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

BOTH ARE DYING AT THE THOUGHT OF SEPARATION

BUT MAAN WANTS HER TO ACHIEVE HER DREAMS FIRST

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Emotional part.
Pain of separation described beautifully.

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

awesome update, both want to live with each other, yet have to depart.

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

awesome👏 painful 😭update

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#660

wow that sure was some night mare she had
she really doesnt wanna leav him and yet she has to
after all its his dream to see her being successful
and she will do anything to complete it
ahhh the things one does for love
even if it gives them pain
wow now thats some love there

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