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Posted: 12 years ago
part 57
awesome part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply superb updt...so geet challenged maan...she ia now going to b J and very very sherni mode...continue soon...
Edited by ushankitvc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no...humein nehi lagta k maan train karne k liye maan jayega...magar yeh lo kuch zaada hi nehi maang rahen hai...aisa lag raha hai k khane ko mila toh sone ka soch rahen hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome & so lovely update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb lovely dear
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting
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(Okay , Need one suggestion. Should i turn my OS Waiting For You into SS or FF. Please who have read this , give yours advise )



PART 58



Maan came out, going toward meeting room when a girl collided to him. "What the hell, can't you see'' girl yelled without looking up and when looked, her heart sunk, deep down. She found Maan red dark eyes on her, glaring with complete aversion. He was to shout on her loud when she started pleading "I'm sorry sir , I didn't see you''

"Who the hell are you'' Maan spoke stringently. He watched her steadily and found, she was one of the trainees. "What are you doing here?''

She was shaking with fear. Somehow, collected her courage and said "Actually, I-I was looking for training room, can't find so .. So was going to ask someone .. Please forgive me sir, i really didn't see you''.

"Hmm'' He replied thinking if he shouts her again Geet would take her side. "waise bhi wo mujhse gussa hai. Aur gussa ho jaayegi'' thought. "Leave from here'' he ordered her and turned to leave. His, not yelling on her, gave her more courage.

"Maan sir.. Please can you tell me the way?'' She stopped him, asking from back. Maan turned to her. She was smiling, fluttering her lashes, showing her fake shyness. He very wanted to kill her then and there. He was really annoyed with this stupid girl and her fake antics. He knew she wanted to gain his attention and very well could understand her intentions. He always hated this kind of girls. His petiance was sliping down very fast and was very tough to control his anger. In consequence, he fisted his hand tight to suppress boiling anger, opened mouth to reply, when found, Geet was coming to same direction. He closed eyes to calm himself down and when could not, left before she could see them, as he didn't want to create any scene there. Girl smirked "Not bad Sara!'' she patted her shoulder mentally.

"Hey Rajji'' she called Rajji who was coming to her.

"Where were you Sara and were you talking to Maan Sir?'' rajji asked amusingly.

"Yup Rajji. Did you see, how he was talking to me? Did you hear what he said?'' Sara very well knew Rajji could not see Maan face as his back was facing her, so she intentionally asked.

"No Sara I could not. What did you guys talk? I saw you were smiling"

"Nothing , he just said I'm beautiful" she faked blush

"Really !!! No it cant be posible. You must be lying'' she was shocked that Maan, said this

"No really Rajji, I swear, You had seen how I was smiling. You know na how strict type he is , yet, he talked me and I did not fear also. Rather than I called him back again and asked way to training room and he replied me too. Don't you know he doesn't talk anyone but he talked to me yaar. "

"woww Sara, lucky girl''

"Yes, I'm'' she winked. Both laughed and left from there.

In Training room, Everyone was excited, Maan was going to instruct them himself. Some appreciated Geet, knowing only she could make him agree. Some was happy they are going to see him again, would get a chance to drool over him. Here Geet, was total unaware of what she was feeling inside. Indeed she wanted to let Maan instruct them but, a unknown feeling was growing up in her heart, like she should not do this. "Wase what I did?'' she thought. "I didn't say him to train them. He own took this as challenge.. Don't know why I do not like this. uff !! leave it. Let's go inside'' She stepped inside training room, only to witness, Maan was standing near a girl, bending down and showing something in book. She fumed but controlled and settled on her seat.


Maan was watching her every move with concentration. He smirked, knew she must not be liking his being near any other girl. It was really a see-able sight for him to see her fuming and cribbing to herself. He enjoyed it. He went on, making her jealous more. Sometime called random girl and sometime, self went to her but every time, avoided Geet intentionally. He very much was enjoying her restlessness.

"Maan sir" finally when she could not bear this more, called him from back, as he was standing facing his back to her. He turned. " Hmm!'' he replied.

"Wo.. actually I was not getting this question'' she asked, haphazardly showing a line, without seeing it, which was not at all any question but a author note, written in book. Before Maan could say anything Sara started laughing "Geet its not question, can't you see. are you blind'' her laugh made some more to accompany her. "Maan sir did you see how silly she is'' she spoke in between, deliberately held Maan shoulder. Maan entire body burned in fire. He was seething in anger. His dark and heavy glare was enough to shut anyone and everyone. Sara shivered, pulled back her hand and looked down, moved away. Maan looked to Geet. She was not there. "Geet, where is she'' his mind flashed question and eyes started to search, and in few seconds, found her sitting on her respective seat, engrossed in book. He was worried for her and she, felt his eyes on her. She looked up, met her view to him, peeped inside his eyes. She knew what he was asking . They were talking through eyes.

"Are you okay?'' His pupil shrank, worriedly.


Her eyes were soft, without any stress. She nodded, smiled, slightly, invisible to all.

"Geet I can't see your insult. I will kill everyone here, who laughed on you'' His eyes were moving slightly, walking back and fro. Getting red in anger. She shook her head "No Maan, forgive them. I don't want to waste my time in this all trash. She closed her lashes slow, saying him to be calm. Then opened it, showed him she was alright.

"Are you sure?'' his eyes was statue, confused. Forehead had thin, worry lines

"Hmm!'' her eyes shined, twinkled, showing him her being alright. He smiled her back, after knowing she was not hurt but had learned to be calm in every kind of situation. She did not cried or felt bad but, resumed using her time which, was the most important treasure of her, she had.

He could not stand there for more, it was impossible for him to breathe in same air where, she had been laughed on. He rushed to her, held her hand which was rested to book. Raised her, made her stood and dragged, out of room, making, leaving everyone gasped behind...

(Oops again stuck on same precap 😛 .. okay this time something new & more than one 😉)

Precaps:

1."why dont you guys think about marriage? If Maansir doesn't take first step, I think, you should do this Geet '' Pinky said


2. '' Dare you Sara!!! ek shabd aur nahi Maansir ke baare me '' Geet slaps her hard, fuming with grave eyes


3."You all wanted to know who he is to me. He is my Maan, my parent, my teacher, my Savior , my owner and my... "

4. "Bolo Geet'' He was waiting eagerly ...


(Chalo.. now i think its enough for you to guess 😛 )


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu awesome update...grrr how dare that girl 😡...sara ki bacchi😡...tuje toh...hayeee maan n aur geet talked each other through their eyes ...😳...wowww lovu wht a lovely emotion create ki tune...beautifully written ...love u lovu...muahhh...its only can happened when two pairs blindly trust n love each other...eyes shows everything don't need to words...wowww waht a precap...iska matlan confession😉
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wow lovely update.. te way my maan is boiling wen sara was talking to him was so lovely.. te way he is controlling himself for his geet, oh god my maan is scared to show his angry coz of his geet , geet only u can do tis to him.. te way my maan making his geet jealous was so lovely,. maan soon u will meet ur sherni.. te way my maaneet talking through they eyes, and geet making him calm was so lovely.. now sara have to face my maan ki sherni ka avatar...i love te update

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