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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 12:
WARNING: strictly 18+!!!


It was late night probably 2'O clock, MAAN!! she moaned as he pulled those sour buds of hers into mouth with teeth, sucking them. Thrusting into her deeper and deeper, their passion started in the afternoon after maan finished all his meetings in the wake of two week schedule, today he reached home early only to be on bed with geet, to enjoy the victory of life. Finally the moment arrived when he would see dev on the road loosing everything that too on his wedding night with his so called girlfriend sareera. JUST THREE DAYS!! He thought, in three days he would declare his winning moment. Once he comes back from Mumbai with all the formalities done, nobody can stop him. he smirked at his thought looking at geet in his arms. This moment felt so complete with her he thought, jaan ill leave to mumbai in a day kuch kaam hai, its urgent something which geet did not like, she hugged him even more tight telling him!! she did not want maan to leave her and go, bus do din hai geet uske baad main tumhare saath rahonga pehle se bhi jyada (ab kya kam rehte ho??😆) finally dev bhai ko apna sab kuch khote hue dekhonga!! He will be out of the house. Mujhe koi bhi nahi rok payega he said so confidentally that geet's heart thudded against the rib cage wildly hinting her something bad is going to happen. She wanted maan to stay away from dev. This war between the two brothers will definitely land them into problems. She didn't know how to react, what to tell him exactly. First, him leaving for two days and then his intention to leave. All this was indicating her that something fatale will happen for sure'.. nahi maan please don't go. I don't want you to leave this way. Chod dijiye yeh badla kahi aisa na ho ki sab cheen jaaye humse please she cried bitterly which only angered maan, when he is about to win his sole support is trying to stop him!! why?? He was patiently listening to her sobs but when his last ounce of control got lost, he couldn't do much rather than bursting out, holding geet firmly, pinning her under him'' tum jaanti ho yeh sab kuch mere liye kya hai?? don't you dare stop me, saying this he sealed his mouth on hers silencing her complaining ones


The next day too went the same, whole day on the bed making love, they were just not getting enough of each other. Later in the evening geet's stomach started to churn with hunger, not even a single nerve of her body was working due to the tiredness and sourness of the body. She watched maan as he slept like a kid do din kaise rahongi aapke bina maan she kissed his forehead, aapki har kadam mein aapka saath dongi aapki jaan ke liye meri jaan bhi kurbaan hoga she rested her head on his chest taking in his aroma to live for two days without him.


After two hours maan woke to find geet dressing up in a beautiful saree. He wasn't sure why was she getting ready. Geet looked at him through the mirror, understanding his mind she said neeche jaa rahi hoon maan dadima ne bulaya hai, few of her friends have arrived bus half an hour ill be back he nodded and fell back on the bed half an hour remember nahi aayi toh sabke saamne utha leke jaaonga ready rehna you should be back in the room within half an hour he warned not even looking at geet but she knows how serious was maan ...ji she replied and went down


After thirty one minutes, geet found herself being picked up by maan, all the ladies watched the pair in awe while sameera burned literally out of jealousy


Dadima: maan behave yourself yeh kya tareeka hai?? Just leave her she said as if maan will pay heed to it, he rather retorted dadima waise main kal Mumbai jaa raha hoon tab isse dikha dijiye apni friends ko abhi toh main le jaa raha hoon he walked outside the mansion carrying geet in his arms winking at her who blushed hiding her face into his chest


Sameera(st): do din kamre se bahar bhi nahi aaye aur ab aadhe ghante ke liye bahar kya aagayi utha ke lejaa raha hai yeh maan kaha se itna romantic ban gaya?? Isse pehle ki yeh dono duniya ke saamne apne rishte ko jaahir kare ill have to separate them by hook or by crook!!!


Maan where are we?? She asked looking out of the car window as they were heading towards a restaurant tum chup chap baith nahi sakti?? Both of them made way towards the open space of restaurant where food was arranged with the decorations made near the beach side. Maan looked at geet's face which had no expression, it was a blank paper indeed. All he could make out was she was not happy, both of them sat to have the food. It had been a day since they ate and now geet was simply running her fingers on the plate, though maan wanted to question her still he expected her to say it out on her own


Aapne yeh sab mere liye kiya?? She asked finally as if understanding maan's mind... jaanti ho toh sawaal kyun karti ho geet?? he replied with the same sternness which geet's voice held


You are already doing so much for me aur iss sab ka mujhe koi haq nahi hai maan. Aapko pata hai ek waqt tha jab din mein ek baar bhi khana mile toh mere liye kaafi hota tha ek waqt aaj hai jab mere saamne itna kuch hote hue bhi kuch khane ka mann nahi kar raha... tum kehna kya chahti ho geet?? Tumhare liye main yaha aaya hoon and you are just spoiling my mood, he got up pushing the plate to walk away in anger towards the sea shore and stood watching the waves in the dark silent night. A pair of hands wrapped around him from behind, he didn't move even a bit when geet hugged him so tight I am sorry maan I know you want to celebrate, bus kuch baatein yaad aagayi so bol diya he didn't react. After a long time both of them sat down on the sand, geet held maan's hands in hers rested her head on his shoulder, you know what geet there were times when I used to cry all alone having no one beside me to share my pain aaj hoke bhi nahi hai.


Geet's eyes turned teary understanding the meaning of the words he spoke just then, her heart felt so heavy with pool of emotions running itna jaroor kehna chahta hoon once I come back from Mumbai bohut kuch badlega hamare beech he said it for good but didn't know that it can only go bad.


Kuch bhi badal jaaye maan main nahi badlongi, ab yeh jindagi aapki hai sirf aapki she kissed his hand while maan started at her


NEXT MORNING

She turned around to find the bed empty and got up immediately looked everywhere maan toh kal raat ko hi chale gaye she closed her eyes and then maa!!! Geet got ready for the hospital, in the past few days she used to go to hospital after maan left for office but since two days she hadn't stepped out of the house coz of maan's non-stop passion. And when she reached to the room where her mom was admitted in the hospital geet's heart almost stopped finding the bed empty. She screamed for sister who ran inside aapki maa ki toh death ho gayi ek din pehle, chamkeeli ne aapko contact karne ki koshish bhi kiya magar nahi hua!! Geet didn't had a phone with her, chamkeeli had no sign as to where geet stays. She only visits her mother for few hours, spends time with her and then leaves back!! Geet fell on the bed where her mom used to lay crying on the fate!!


Precap:

Aatish-e-Ishq Tu Sab Kuch Jala De
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She binned the strip of birth control pills, her thoughts drifted back to the day when her mother spoke those words

geet agar mujhe kuch hua bhi na toh tu chinta mat kar main wapas aaongi tere paas as ur kid. Ull give me birth again degi na bol??

I will get you back mom, jab tak tum wapas mujhe nahi mil jaati tab tak maan ke saath mujhe rehna padega she sunk on the floor crying


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PART 11

NEXT PART:
PART 13

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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awesome update didu
two days pure 2 din
maaneet with their passion
without anything itna kitna ghum ho gaye ahem ahem karne me ki khana bhi yaad nahi aaya
nd when geet came out only for half an hour
then also maan didn't wait another second as she was late
naughty maan thodi der ki bhi duri bardashat nahi kar sakta
but maan jaa raha hai
nd geet is not feeling good about that
but maan is not listening
maan said"aane ke baad bahot kuch badal jayega"
he said in possitive way but it will turn in negative
sameera ne toh plan bhi bana liye maaneet ko alag kane ke liye
nd the reason geet was with maan also left her
geet's mother is no more
nd now maan bhi ja raha hai
ab geet akeli ho jayegi


Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

ab sameera wat is she upr0
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Fabulous part
geet mother died waiting for next
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fab update ! waiting for ur 250 likes to get over ! 😛
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Loved the Whole Update 😉
Waiting For Next 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m feeling sad n scared...
pehle dev now sam...
nice update
cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Well written! Maan warns Geet n wen she does nt come he picks up in his arms! Sam jealous! Wat is she up 2? update soon
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raw passion of love was ozing out from this update...loved it so much...feeling very sad geet, she took such a drastic step in her life to save her mother and at the end she could not survive...its babaji's meher on geet that she got maan otherwise i dare to even imagine the thoughts...maan was so right to say that "bohout kuch badal jayega dono ke beech" after he returns from mumbai...god knows how much for good and how much for bad but yes one thing is for sure, no matter what happens, maan will never let go of HIS GEET...

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