'Lyf Starts Where It Ends'#4 ....URGENT NOTE @148

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saf24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#661

Beautiful update. Loved the way Maan was able to eventually manofy Seher. Also liked how he was able to help Geet overcome her fear of dogs. I really liked the way he thoughts kept moving to something more permanent for them just by looking at his interaction with Seher. That was quite a cliffhanger at the end and i'm looking forward to what is in store next.

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#662

😃 finally we got.. thanks ...

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#663

Superb update..

Waiting for next update..

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#664

Maan manofying his princess
Surprise gifts just loved it
Perfect family
Geet should come out her fears
Nice part dear loved it

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#665

nice pt reading after long long gap but gud u decide to complete it

but honestly the feel is not their first i was drown in character of maan geet its bcuz i mostly not remember whole story just

imp thinks which i wrote in my copy to remember wat story about

so decide to read at least three from 13 to know depths of maan love fr geet and sehar

maan loved aehar too much and wants to become officially

part of this family and he trying to confess his love too

hope he read dev mail before it's late

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#666

thax fr suggestion

but i think 'ts take time wen

it's go further making it interesting

just like now i curious to know wen he will read mail and wat

his reaction and how he protects geet and sehar

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#667

After a long time...new chapter...but very wrong timing for ending...hope that we will get now regular update

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#668

Wow wonderful update..

luved it.. continue soon

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#669

Geet has so fallen in love but her past isn't letting her acknowledge that. She doesn't even think she deserves to be happy and to move on. Be married again. It's heartbreaking. Until and unless she starts loving herself and respecting herself, she won't be able to stand for her. Sometimes one has to be selfish and think about their own happiness instead of thinking to be undeserving of love and normal family.

I loved the bedtime story telling and Geet stealing a secret moment for herself. Also Seher is indeed a drama queen. Gods! That little girl has Maan wrapped around her finger. He does become a kid with her and the bond he shares with Seher is heartwarming. It's good to see someone feeling the shoes of a father in Seher's life and giving her all the love she deserves. Maan is doing an amazing job. He is pampering her too much and spoiling her but she is too adorable to not to.

The end was amazing. But I have a feeling he will take Seher's name. Seeing how Geet is reacting, I reckon he will back off and won't confess. So let's see what happens now. Looking forward to the next part.

-Sanjana!