'Lyf Starts Where It Ends'#4 ....URGENT NOTE @148

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Happy New Year! pls bless us with an update

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#682

any possibility of an update???

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#683

pls dnt leave this incomplete! 😭

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
pls dnt leave this incomplete! 😭

Sweety This won't be incomplete... Don't worry...😊

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Sweety This won't be incomplete... Don't worry...😊

thanks 4 da reply! will wait 4 updates! hope u r well!

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#686

New thread starts when earlier ends😃

Waiting

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GurruKiDeewani-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#687

When you will update this one? Plz update this also

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Preethi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#688

Waiting for your update dear continue soon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#689

pls update this as well

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#690

I mean Wow... Such a beautiful story that has made me speechless...

It's first time I am not able to express my feelings...

Geet who is tarnished by one man who was ruthless...

Geet got angel in her life in the form Sehar...

They were living peacefully in their safe abode in london...I just love the way you introduce Maan. After reading I was curious to know how will you introduce him. how their second meeting will be...

How they will connect I so much like the way you connected them and Geet never minded the interaction actually...

I so loved the garden scene, school scene...

Hospital scene was so dreaded noone can expect (Why do i feel that it was not an accident...) Then Geet saying harsh words too Maan... and Maan getting furious and feeling hurt... I feel bad that he has to go through but I was glad that the thing i wanted to express in comment you expressed in the form of Bhavyata...

So, the danger is in coming in Geet's life and both Maan and Geet are unaware Dev is trying to communicate but Fate is not letting them meet...

I so love the way you connected the destiny and coincidence of Maan's sister as the same lady who helped her and the Dev asMaan's brother who is in love with Geet's friend Meera...(Glad you didn't make Dev as villain here too I never wanted the Avinash Shukla as villain i find him cute)

I so like the way you let Maan know the harsh realty that Geet had faced on the rainy night frankly speaking I wanted Maan to know as soon as possible before the entry of villain... and you made my wish come true... I also intended to include the scene where Geet letting her inner self outburst hold his shirt and bend down I was imagining that too but the hug did the magic on me...

I so like the cute talks of Sehar... and the moment with the whole khurana family... I so like the Dadima who respected her grandson's decision and was proud on geet to face the harsh thing...

My heart went out to Sehar when she expresses her inner turmoil about her father that he never comes to meet her... I was like that knowingly or unknowingly she suffered because her father is a monster and Maan even cant say that he would want her father to be with her... Maan really understand how much she craved for her father and she cant even voice out her feeling because in corner of her heart Sehar too knows that her mummy will feel bad and she will cry... I really feel melancholy and sad...

I have summarised the thing i have find in your story isse jayda what should i say... You made me cry...

With Regards

Ila

Edited by IlaTanwar - 8 years ago