MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#3 Link thread 4/pg154

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26_chaitra

@26_chaitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Superb update!!!!!!

Loved it a loadzz :)

precap😊 just can't wait long for it...

plzzz do update soon )

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Awesome update
Loved it
Haye maaneet dancing on kurbaan hua... awesome awesome
So much intense...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting

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lehr

@lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Amazing dear, hope to see maaneet MU getting cleared and want to see their most awaiting SR soon.

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

beautiful ! both lost in each other... fogetting everything else... beautiful depiction of both their feelings... waiting... waiting...

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

superb one..
Kurbaan hua dance sequnce beautifully penned with lot of emotions
loved it..
Eagerly waiting next update..

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

breath taking pics and update. Kurbaan huan was made only for Maaneet. both burning in desire and love. continue soon

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angeesh

@angeesh

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

Mind blowing update

Maan is losing his control

Can't wait for the confrontation

Update soon

Ange

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

awesome.

Very beautifully written. Totally could see it happening the way you described it.

Thanks for updating.

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

That was a fab update Anu...

i just loved the way you had but the whole sequence... Maaneet lost in each other and yet maan trying to hold self... And adi was so sweet... he noticed the tension and did something that could get Maan out of his control...

Loved the dance part... you had written it so well... The innermost feeling and longing, everything came out in their dance... and now Maan is in trance... he is not able to accept the feeling nor deny it...

And for geet, she cant hold anymore... eager to see the confrontation and confession...

Loved the update anu... thanks for updating inspite of ur hectic schedule..