Pt3'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd2 Pg1 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Jubilant

Update kab mile ga 😭

Originally posted by: srirad

Congrats for new thread👏

Eagerly waiting for update😊

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Firstly Sorry for Late comment... I was out of station...

Sobsss mein ek week bahar kya gayi aapne kitna kuch likh dala.. A NEW STORY...

Mummmyyy... Huh I m angry on u di... sobsss...

Ab rote huye comment kaise du aapko..???? Fir bhi Here is my view...😉

Okies firstly the prologue... Gosh I was like what is this.. I was dead reading it...

The first thought came to mind was "Am I reading a novel...??" and nodded in yes...

Actually thought it to be the novel like writing.. and I know it is... U r best di...

This is a unique story of

7 Deadly Sins that she had committed

This is a new story of

7 Capital Virtues that he ought to commit

But in the end

This is a simple story of

Love...!

and I loved the above lines... Just awesum they are...

First part:

From Geet's POV... Hmmm Interesting...

Wow started with 7 deadly sins name...

Aapko Idea aate kaha se hai...??? To write story on all 7...

U knw I m thinking instead of writing story they will really happen in her life... 😉

Seniors... Aapke clg ka kuch jyada asar hua hai kya aap pe...????

I m thinking agar aap 6 months clg jaake aise likh sakti ho...

to socho when pura clg karogi... Hayeee Fir to bahaut kuch read karne ko milega... Haina di..???😆

Geet Maan Khurana. Sahi mein first time she did something stupid actually cute sin.. 😳

Loved the start of story... it was really impressive... U knw First impression is last one.. Hehe..😉😆

Second part...

Hmmm... Kamine dost hai uske... Mere aise nahi hai hai na...????

Stealing the book... Hayeee clg ki yaad dila di aapne to di...

( U knw jab hume aise books milti thi.. We used to take and write jokes or anything abt that person on his notebook as if in teasing manner and use to give it back like a innocent child... 😆 )

Awww... He is such a cutiepie handsome MSK... what to say abt him..

Oyeee jhut bola mere msk se... Greedy ha to read a book...

And usne maan bhi liya... wah ji wah... Why he smiled..?? as if he knws she has the notebook...

and then geet reading the book... Is he so serious padhaku type ke kuch nahi mila book pe...???

Mila mila...😊 Haila... Uska hi name... Geet Maan khurana... What the...?????

Di... Cliff hanger pe choda... I want to knw why he wrote that name...

Bechari geet ko kitne din aise rakhogi... Thinking position me...?? 😛

Wo to kya kya sochne lagi hai... Hayeee second part was Superb and I m greedy to read nxt part...

" U will make us do all the 7 deadly sins with maaneet by this story " 😉

Continue sooon di... Luv ya... Hugsss...