REVENGEFUL LOVE UPDATED PT 19 PG 102 19/1/13 - Page 54

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Truely superb & amazing update now maan got to know what he is done to geet wid his damm ego or his socolled anger huhhh not so soon maan u hv to pay for it what u did it's not a mistake u hv commeted a big sin maan feeling soor what he did to geet
chalo ab dekhna ye hai aage kiya hota hai


Edited by brandgurti - 12 years ago
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ufff richa sweet ab ye teaser kya hai ???
im confuse ab kiya hoga ?😕
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Maan is repenting, but will geet understand him???
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[SIZE=5]PART - 19[/SIZE

All are waiting for Samarth to come and announce what he wants. Samarth came and sat with other. All wished him mrng.

'Papa aap kuchh batane wale the',Piyush asked the reason y he summoned them all in hurry.

'hmm. I summoned u all to reminds u about tommorrow. Kal maa or papa ki shadi ki salgirah hai or har saal ki tarah kal bhi havan hoga. So every1 b ready early in the morning. I dont wanna hear any excuses from any one. Want everyone on time. Understood',he cleared his issue in a commanding voice.

'Samarth we all remember so dont worry.'Arpita assured him.

'Geet beta told RP also and invite them personally. Somya k parents to nai aa payenge but u asked RP.waise b tum dono ki shadi k baad aaram se milne ka mauka hi nahi mila.ek get together ho jayega.',Samarth ordered Geet to invite her parents for Havan also.

She nodded yes and all finished their breakfast. Samarth and Piyush leave to reach office. Arpita and Somya get busy in preprations for tommorrow. Maan also leave as his guilt feeling not allowed him to take a relief breath. Sins nver leave,always followed a man. As it with Maan. Geet call at her home. Ayesha ans her call.

'hi Angel how r u?',Ayesha asked about her well being.

'bhabhi i m fine.ghar pe sab kaise hai?',Geet ans her.

'sab theek hai,bas tujhe miss krte hai.or tu to waha jake hume bhul hi gai hai achha ye bata aaj humari yad kaise aa gai?'Ayesha teased her again which pierced her heart unknowingly.

'bhabhi kal ghar pe havan hai or papa ne sabko invite kia hai or unhine kaha hai sabko aana hai.',she told the reason.

'oh ok.waise bhi humne abhi achhe se Maan ka thanx bhi to nahi kiya hai,achha ha isi bahane wo b ho jayega.',while talking Ayesha touched the topic.

'thanx Maan ko kisliye?',Geet asked amusingly.

'Maan ne tujhe nahi btaya kal raat k bare me?',Ayesha too amused that she is unaware of that incident.

Geet denied and Ayesha told her everything about last night. Geet eyes filled with terror,coz she can understand,which pain she is going through if Maan not saved her. She put her palm on her mouth in shock.

'Geet r u dere angel?',she call her name,coz she doesnt say a word after hearing everything from her.

'ha bhabhi i m ok.bhabhi main apse baad me bat karti hu.aap yaad se kal time pe aa jana.',she cuts the call hurridely. The revealtion by Ayesha now disturbs her. She cant able to understand why Maan help her bhabhi. Ruthless person like him can help someone is not believable for her. Whole day she only thinks about this. She was standing on terrace and sawing blankly in unknown direction. Continous dual of thought violate her mind. She wanna know how she will react now. Will she thanx to him for saving her bhabhi's life or ans him like before. What she don now. Cold wind oozing madly,and made her shiver. She sat on swing while thinking and rubbed her arms with her palms. But she dont want to down stairs. Right now she was not in condition to talk or decide something. In eveng when Maan came she found his room empty. He sighed as he dont want 2 face her accusing eyes,which alwys asked him y he act so low in his rage. Maan changed and relaxed in his room but when she wont came so long,he feels unusal uneasyness in him, those eyes he wants to avoid,now there absence send him insane. He search her in whole mansion,and when he dont found her anywhere,he reached to terrace in her search,and found her sleeping on a swing. He went to her and raised his hand to awake her,but his mind stops him to touch her He stroked his messier hairs and thot what to do now. She shivers due to cold atmosphere. Maan forgot everything and quickly scooped her cold body in his arms and moved to their room. He placed her on her bed and put duvet on her. He tryung to move away from her when he hears her babbling. She is babbling something

'Maan pls leave me. Maan pls forgive me,pls leave me',Geet babbling in sleep as she scared in dream about that night. Her fists tighten,body stiffed and she throwing her legs constantly as she tries to shove him away upon her. He scred seeing her condition and her babbling filled him with pain and guilty. His shudder ran through his body and heart turn heavy. His muscules stiffed and jaw clenched.

'Geet,geet wake up.,He utter her name in a broken voice and patted her cheek to awake her form her sleep. Coz he cant see her miserable state,which is torture to him.

Geet awake with a jerk and saw herself sharing proxcimity with him. He sat near her. Geet's forehead is drenched with her own sweat and body shaken badly. In a swift momnt she slipped far away from him and stood up from his bed. She took her pillow and stepping towards couch. Maan stops her.

'Geet pls stop. U can sleep here comfortably,main couch pe so jaunga.',Maan requests her politly.

Geet saw him with fire emitting eyes. She glance him and turned her look.

'tumhare aage hi bahut ehsaan hai,ab ek or karne ki zarurat nai hai.',her voice is harsh and rude. She went straight to couch and laid on it. Maan leave the room in frustratiuon and showerd his anger onto his punching bag. The moment he saw her trembling in terror few moments later,he wanna hurt himself for being the reason of her sufferings. He wants to blow out all his rage and recent which is very deep in his heart.

Sun dawn all get ready on time as per Samarth's instructions. Priest came and do all the preprations. Singhania's also game. Seeing them a smile crept on Geet's lips. She hugged her parents and brother and Ayesha. All met warmly. Samarth and Arpita sit in havan and do as pandit told them to do. After pooja is done, all sit together and enjoying spending some time together,except Maan. He dont bother any1's presence. His eyes only glued to Geet only. Each and everytime his mind only asks him how he get rid from the burden of his sinful act.

Samarth:RP u r very lucky as u have daughter like Geet.ye nalayak tere ghar aata to tu to pagal hi ho jata.

Avantika cuts him in btwn:nai bhai sahab aap galat keh rae hai. I wish that every mother get son like him.

Samarth:kyu bhabhi aisa kya kar diya is nalayak ne jo aap itni tarafdari kar rai hai?

RP:kyu Maan ne bataya nahi?

All sw him in astonishment.

Avantika:yahi to gunn hai iske.he never praise himslf.

Avantika told them everythng. All was stunned hearing this.

Arpita kissed him proudly:dekha or aap yu hi uske pichhe pade rehte hai.

Brij:pehle meri rai galat thi Maan k bare ki wo Angel ki care nai kar payega.but who respect other's dignity will definatly cares of his own wife.

Piyush:welldone mere sher.

All praised him which is not tolrable by Geet. She felt suffocated in btween them. The reason for which they praised him,was d reason for her suffering. She wanna shout and shut their mouths,by telling them the truth. But she cant do it. His prasiing words seems hot lava to her ears. Her skin is burning and head strt spinning. She clenched her hands tightly,due to whch her nails pierce the soft skin of her palm. She wont take it anymore and rush to her room. Maan noticed her only so he very well aware what pain she is going through hearing his praise. Maan also excused all and followed her in their room. Geet was sitting on his bed.

Maan:Geet..
he utter her name to bring back her from her thoughts. He touched her shoulder tenderly. Geet stand up on her feet and jerkly remove his hand.'Geet pls i know how u feel now,but this time...'

Geet who glance him furiously burst on him and cuts him before he completes.'[COLOR=red]dont tell me that u understands what i m going through. Isse badi nonsence baat koi or nahi hai. The person who responsible for destructing my life,today claims that he can understand my pain.',she taunts him harshly while sobbing.

'Geet i know,but pls..',he trying to calm her. Maan held her shoulders tenderly,which is jerkly removed by her.

'dont touch me.i hate ur touch,ur proxcimity,ur presence,everything which reminds me how u spoiled my life on that night.her voice turn heavy as she is crying constantly.'kyu kiya tumne mere sath aisa bolo? In hall every1 is prasing u coz u saved Ayesha bhabhi's life.but what about me?
what u have done to me? she fists his shirt's collar and crushed them in her fists.'y u spoil my life? Ayesha bhabhi ko bachane to tum aa gaye the.but mujhe bachane us dinn koi kyu nahi aaya.bolo Maan y no 1 came to save me on that night.',Maan's head lowerd as he had no ans of her accusations. His lashes turn heavy with guilt and he cant met her gaze. Geet shake him and made him look at her again.'Maan u wanna take revange from me na?then y u leave me alive. Y dont u end my life after raping me. Atleast i get rid of my shameful life. Speak up.dont stand like a statue.',her eyes is filled with tears and vision go blurred. No more strenth is remaining in her as she feels weak at her knees. Geet slowly slowly falls down,holding his shirt in her fists.due to which his all buttons teared off with her falling on ground
She was hell crying,which is not bearable by Maan. He wants to supports her,console her and wiped off her oozing tears,but her words lefts no courage in him to touch her again. His fists tighten and muscles stiffened. He felt as someone grasped his neck tightly. He cant even able to breath properly. His dilemma is that he neither saw her crying nor stop her from crying. He closed his eyes,feelign his helplessness...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional part
poor geet



Edited by mitzi11 - 12 years ago
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Nice part
Geet can't take everyone praising maan...now what will maan do after geet spoke to hm...me waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum...loved the way u hav written their emotions...loved it...poor maan feeling guilty but pooor geet cant cum out of the shock...what will maan do now????updt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i can understand geet's pain
ek rapist ko kisi ki ijat bchane ke liye praise kya ja raha hai toh geet ko toh bura lagega hi
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Emotional update

Geet pain is now understood by Maan but he is in guilt now n don't know how to console her

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