REVENGEFUL LOVE UPDATED PT 19 PG 102 19/1/13 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update dear
loved a lot
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">nice update dear

Again Maan was forcing on GEET, gud tht Soumya come at a ri8 time.

MAAN coming home at 5.30 in the morning n nobody at the mansion know abt it 😲

they r fighting for bed like a kinder garten kid 😆 😆 for the bed

Arpita n Soumya are showing emotional n caring bond wid GEET which GEET need a lot now

now tht called Revenge from GEET by disturbing the peaceful sleep which MAAN was having -- gud job GEET 😈

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice...
poor Geet...
Maan is so rude...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

~REVANGEFUL LOVE~
PART - 13
MAAN wake up with a jerk and saw her
smirking. He stand up,clenched her wrist
tightly nd pulled her 2 hm. She falls against on
his chest. Both luked in each other eyes
angrily. Maan shouts on hr angrily.'ye kya
batamezi hai?pagal ho gayi ho kya?',he
grinnd his teeth. He unknowingly grasped her
wounded wrist. D pressure he put on her
made her wound bleeds again,but made her
strong enough. She dosnt broke 4 a sec.and
make fun of him.
'oppsss mr Maan to abi b usi k khayalo me
khoye hue the.bt Mr.Maan ur mom ordrd me
2awake u. or agar tum 10min me ready hokr
mere sath neche nai chale to khud papa
ayenge hume lene.',she threat him and enjoyd
his helpless condi.
Maan wid bigger eyes:u.
Geet:behso mat time bahut kam hai.
He sw no choice,so gt up nd mvd2 washrum.
Both came down 4remaning rituals. Somya
orderd both sit on marble floor. She placed a
bowl containing milk,rose water and rose
petal.
'now both of have 2 find a ring which i m
going 2 placed in it. We do dis 3 times.ok
guys?'Somya tells dem what dey have to do
now.
'Y?'.Maan asked irritatingly.
'coz this is a ritual.this game decides who rule
ovr d another 1 in married life.samjhe now
my lion go and show d girls that we r
Khuranas.',Piyu sh calmd his queries and boost
him 4 playing.

Somya:achhaji ye baat hai.dont worry Geet jeetna to tumhe hi hai bolne do inko.

Both put hand in d bowl and gave a challanging glance 2 each other.

Maan murmured:jeetunga to main hi.

Geet:lets c.

Both searched and Geet found d ring b4 him. She wins d first round nd all praise.

Arpita:c my DIL wins d first round.now its sec turn.

She again mixed ring in the bowl and both again start finding d ring. They played as it was d que of deir life nd death. Both searching nd their fingers collapsed against ech othr. Aftr a little struggle Geet again put ring out. She won again.

Piyush:kya kar hai yaar?

Somya shouts loud nd show her happiness. She show thumbs down sign 2 Piyush:now wen she won 2 rounds den 3rd 1 to sirf formality k liye hai.

Arpita again put ring in bowl and Geet also found this time 2. Everyone cheers 4 her.

Piyush:koi baat nahi mere sher.chalni to waise bhi patnio ki hi hoti hai.

Piyush trying 2 boost him,as he aware of his anger. Maan nt easily accept his defeat so he made hm chill.

Geet whisperd slowly 2 Maan:ab adat daal lo coz aaj k baad tumhe roz aise hi muh ki khani hai.

Maan:is chhoti si game ko jeet kr zada khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai.2 din sirf do dinn me tumhe in sabki nazro se gira dunga.

Somya:are are kya gupchup baate ho rahi hai? Geet b ready. ab sare guest aane wale honge tumhari muh dikhai ki rasam karni hai.

Family frnds and relative start coming and gave many gifts and blessings,aftr seeing her face.

Relative:Maan beta u r lucky. Tabi to itni beautiful wife mili hai.

Every1 praising Geet which doesnt like by him at all. In evening all memebers planning a honeymoon trip 4 both and Geet listen dis. she start thinking how she can avoid dis trip. Suddenly she saw Samarth is coming up stairs,she immediately went to her room.

Geet:Maan aap gussa kyu ho rahe ho,main to sirf itna chahti hu ki aap b bhai ki tarah office jao.honeymoon to baad me b ja sakte hai.

Maan cmpltly gone out of mind hearing her strange and wiered talking at sudden. Geet said loud enough,so dat Samarth hear all dis conversation.

Maan:bhang pee hai kya?stop talking like a fool.

b4 he completes Samarth entered in their room.

Samarth:kuch seekho bahu se,ab to responsible bano. kal se tum mujhe office me kaam karte dikhai dene chahiye ho. Samjhe tum.

Maan:lekin dad.

Samarth:keh diya na.or kal se jaldi uthna start karo. nd no arguements.

Maan:ji dad.

Geet smirked on her won. Samarth leave d room.

Maan:badi hasi aa rahi hai na?lekin ye mat samajhna ki baat yaha khatam ho gayi.

Geet:its not ovr yet Mr.MSK.lets wait and watch wat i ll do 2 make ur life hell at evry step.

Next day Geet switc off his alarm so he dont wake up on time. At b.fast table. Samart enquired about him.

Samarth:Where is he?

Geet innocently:papa wo so rahe hai.

Samarth:oh dis worthless will nvr change.

Geet:papa aap naraz mat ho.aap log chaliye main unhe utha kar office bhej dungi.papa ye kheer maine banai hai aap sabke liye plss khaiye na.

Samarth:beta abi 2 dinn nai hue or tu kitchen me ghus gai.were r all servants?

Somya:papa hum sabke liye to bas aise hi taste karne k liye hai.actualy ye kheer to Maan k liye bani hai uski fav jo hai.

Every1 praise her. At 11am Maan came at break fast table wants 2 scold her as he knew his alarm is turnd off by her only.

'Geet.. Geet..',he shout loud.

Arpita:wat happnd beta y u shouts so loud?

Maan:mom where is she?

Arpita:kitchen me tere lye b.fast bana rahi hai.lo aa gayi wo.

Maan:how dare u,tumne jaan bujhkar alarm band kiya,taki main time pe office nahi ja saku.

Arpita:Maan behave urslf and leave her wrist injured wrist.

Reluctantly he jerkly leave her.

Geet made cry face:bhala main aisa kyu karungi?maine to apko kitna jagaya par aap jage hi nai.

Arpita:stopit Maan,we all know u.so stop blamin her 4 ur mistakes

Maan:mom trust me she had d 1 who did all dis.

Arpita:achha theek hai gussa baad me kar liyo pehle kuch kha le.

Maan sat 4 b.fast.as he start eating kheer he threw d bowl instantly.

Maan:ye bakwas kheer kisne banai hai?

Arpita:now wat happnd?

Maan:mom kheer kis bewakuf ne banai hai?namak hai kheer me.

Geet start crying tantrumnly and ran from dere.

Arpita:enough Maan.main dekh rahi hu tu koi mauka nahi chhod raha Geet ko tang karne ka.kya hua hai tujhe?

Maan:mom kheer sach me khrab hai.


Arpita:kheer Geet ne banai thi wo b sirf tere liye. Wo bechari aaj tak kitchen me koi kaam nai kiya jisne ,sirf tere iye usne cook se puch2 kr kheer banai.lekin tujhe kadar kaha hai kisi ki feelings ki,or jhoot mat bol hum sabne b khai hai kheer bahut tasty bani hai.ab ja or maafi maang.

Maan:mom main sac keh raha hu.

Arpita:chal or maafi maang main or kuchh sunna nahi chahti.

Maan:mom main mafi nahi manuga.

Arpita:to theek hai main b tujhse tab tak baat nahi karungi jab tak to Vishu se maafi nahi mangege.

She leaved from dere and in her room Geet is so happy on her win over him again.

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one..
Fight begin
Round one won by geet..
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
its 2 gud richa
geet ne to maan ki band bja di
ab maan kya karega
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Oye he lol Maaneet fight begins...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part maan ab kya karoge
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan's life is gng to be hell
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow, wht a lovely update 😊

Geet is in full form to irritate Maan n not leaving a single chance in which she can trapped him

Maan getting scolded from his own parents

Both r in the world of taking revenge from each other one mentally n one physically
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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