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Posted: 12 years ago
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AKAS YA ATMA




I am The Great Maan Singh Khurana who has a charm in arrogance , innocence in hatred, smile in rudness and style in falling , falling for a such a person who is completely opposite to me .

She is a beauty from heaven, angel in form of human , a wind that touches ur soul and pours evry little content of simplicity , humbleness,and a art of making everyone with a glimpse of her .

I fell for her and fell very badly , I see her in mirror as my AKAS , I feel I am having her in my self as my ATMA.

Its been three days I saw her at a stall of panipuri across the road with some kids .she was wearing a white churidar with little work in red colour ,it was matching her completely, simplicity with a passion. She is all in my mind these days and nights .i wake up feeling her near me and sleep to see her in my dreams.

On the other side a girl is laying in bed thinking of her prince who behave like a devil but had a heart of angel . he show that he is rude arrogant and strict but I have seen his humblness , softness and charming smile which is reserved for very few people . he use to come to orphanage to donate evry month and come very week to play with the kids . I also come there to teach the kids music and to give them some love. He never saw me there as I dnt want to come infront of him , I am afraid if he looked at me once I will break my promise and will run into his arms and will loose myself there , I want to be his in every way , every sense but I dnt want to myself to prove to the world(him) that I am a cheap middle class girl who is after his money rather than his love.

I am Geet Rathod and I am completelyin love with The Maan Singh Khurana . its been three days that he saw me with the kids at a panipuri stall . I went out with the kids to give the treat of geeting my fathers home back from my stupid gawar cousin. I am wnjooying my self with the kids unknown of the two eyes gazing at me strongly. I looked around but didn't found anyone ,I threw my thoughts aways and started feeding the kids panipuri ,I used to put a panipuri in eah kids mouth and will get a kiss on my cheek fom them .it was amazing to get that love but the gazing feeling grew stronger and turned back to see him , my devil looking at me with such a hot gaze that I felt my knees going , its was a strange that we both had a such a distane between us but we were so close to ach other.

I was melting under his charm . he was looking at with somuch love . there was something different in his eyes in our first meeting ,his eyes were showing his love , need, and his soul to me . I couldn handle his charm anymore I instantly turned and pay the stall man and took the kids and left .

There are two cupids sitting at the sky looking at the new couple who ar longing to be with each other , in each other arms . the love arrow has hit them but their journeys has to become one .lets see what we can do for them

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So how was first part friends should I continue with it there will 1 or2 more parts of it



with love

maria

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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that sure sounds interesting
hope you do continue with more pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great new story plz update soon
my name is alicia pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing story
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful start buddy.

The Name---- Aks Ya Aatma,itself attrckted me,i read it and loved it.

So pls cont.soon and pm me the next parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice dear.. .update and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing, loved it too much.
Do continue!!!

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