To Sir, With Love(5) - END - PG 44, EPOCH - PG 57 - Page 23

Originally posted by: ritzy09

hello dear...please don't mind but I kind of felt little dissapointed with this track...first I felt Geet overreacted...girl who had so much faith...how could she disbelieve Maan to an extent only because he allowed Sasha to stay back...i mean Maan married her...so basically now she feels Maan is suing and cheating her...baat toh wahi hui na...i felt for her character in this FF that was a complete U-turn

Next Maan...again today I felt he over reacted too...he who undertsands people and thier psychollogy so well could not talk to her...what kind of love and trust this is where two people married to each other...can not talk and clear one misunderstanding...the whole idea felt too dysfunctional...as if something basic was broken

I did not mind Dev's appointment as CEO per say or whatever happened in the update...that was good...but it would have been relaistic if Sasha would have quit without notice rather than pinning it on Geet's mistrust and Maan inability to talk to her and finally now the guilt which Get will feel...i just mind the basic damage to the foundation of thier relationship which was the star for me in this FF from beginning...whatever was ther past and background thier unconditional love was beautiful which is now destroyed...

The chain of happenning is fine but the starting point was dissapointing to me

Please dear this is only for the story. I love your work and just mentioning this as it evokes such emotions in me. It is very much possible that I may have to aplogise and eat my words because most of the times in this FF, there is a bigger picture which we miss and you are a fab writer who writes complex and layered story...

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh okay... IDK how should I take in this update. It had me admiring and hating Maan at the same time in the same frame of reference.

He appointing Dev as the CEO was a pleasant shock, but he is at the same time taking up a new post wherein he is included in the team of people that are going to be guiding Dev... a good & calculative step by the MSK a business magnet. His basis of explaining the changes did make some sense to me at a different level, one which I perceive him just as a bussiness man wanting success & achievements for his co. & purely professional attitude maintained to retain his power, at the same time trying his best at least in the eyes of his own employees to redeem the co, & take steps towards damage control that will be needed to be done in absence of Shasha the way he had envisioned it. Somewhere I feel he knew this is going to be coming in the wake of the events.

At the same time if I see Maan appears to me a total failure on his personal front. All said & done I don't get it why doesn't he just come out in open to Geet. The whole physical union that they achieved in this part was a complete let down for me. I'm not saying that I expected something very romantic & mushy... but this was a very crude way of him. He controlled & tortured himself so many times from just having s** with her in the earlier parts stating he will taint her with his darkness, & then doing the same in this way was something that defied those moments. Even Geet here is equally responsible for it. I feel what Daadi said was something these two needed to do, sit & clear out their argument & insecurities. Geet can't altogether expect him to become all changed from the moment of getting married to her, she is somewhere forgetting he is the same person with whom she feel in love due to being his admirer. She was someone who had least expectations & now when she has started geeting attached to all these materialistic needs she is loosing out on her original self ( just my view... might be in the next part my this understanding will be out for a toss).

I guess I'm making no sense of what I'm trying to convey... I'm all jumbled up with this part I suupose. But yes I really love your writing ... & I suppose this whole scenario is going to be just a small view of the whole actual picture that's in your mind in regards to this track... that I would have to revert back upon my views on the characters here.

Please ignore the length of my comments... can't help it as once I start giving words to my views in comments I forget it becomes too lengthy & boring... 😳

Originally posted by: yash21

Sheeesssh !!! How was the trip ? Hope you had a great weekend 😛.

DEV, the CEO. Wow !! That was a master stroke by Maan. Seriously I'm still not able to figure out how this brain of maan functions . Have to be kept in a museum n researched.

I don't want to jump to conclusion with this update. I'll wait till maan speaks/defends himself about his behavior and absence from scene for those couple of days. Probably there will be one 😕.

I have this feeling that with each update, through this fictional character of Maan my thoughts are being manipulated. One update I feel like killing him n in next one keep nodding my head n sympathies with him.. grrr !!! hate this feeling 😡. I think you have some magic wand with you.

I'm clueless about where this story is heading but this is want is unique in your writing 🤗. Love you for that ❤️.

As always waiting for the next mind game (update 😉).

Management 101 and Relationship 101 all in one day... Maan seems to have had a busy day.