Dard-De-Dil: Maaneet SS Thread 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is a different story on our Maaneet. Hope you guys like it.
Please click like button and give loads of comments.
Please continue to shower your love on my writings it is what keeps me going
Thank you Payal for the title and banner dear 😊🤗

I have added translation to Hindi dialogues in English in bracket in purple color

Note: It will be a 7-8 part SS 😊

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Dard-De-Dil (Pain in Heart)


Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana - He is the MD of Khurana Construction. A shrewd business man who had the whole world at his feet as he was the best entrepreneur India had ever witnessed. The youngest business man of the year, just the perfect guy, the most eligible Bachelor in the whole of Delhi but he just wasn't interested in any relationship till the day he saw her. He was hard on the outside to the entire world but to his Dadi and his younger sister Annie he was the best grandson and best brother and just Maan.

Annie ' Maan's younger sister, his kiddo. She is a sweet, bubbly, happy go lucky girl and her brother's favorite and she too adored her bro like anything.

Dadi ' What to say, the sweetest, bestum best Dadi.

Geet ' She was the only child of Mr. and Mrs. Handa but unfortunately had lost her father when she was a kid. She and her mom had really struggled and faced the worst phase of their lives but they were always together and fought through everything. They used to stay in Hoshiyarpur with the good for nothing Mama Brij of hers but finally she got admission in the best university of Delhi that too on scholarship and she moved to Delhi and on her pestering Rano (Mrs. Handa) too agreed to join in a few months.

Rano ' Geet's mom, the best mom anyone could ever dream of. She understood everything, every feeling of Geet without even her voicing it.

Concept

She was his angel, his world, his love, his life. She had entered his colorless world and lit it with her laughter, her love, her care till the day she destroyed his very existence on Earth as she accused him of lusting her but could he ever lust or was there more to it than meets the eye.


Please press the like button and let me know how you find the concept. Should I continue guys?????

Eagerly Awaiting...

Will post Part 1 as soon as I get 100 likes guys 😉, so like fast 😊
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mishtiritu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely concept... and I knw u r best at pain.. Emotions
U express it very well...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes very different concept di
awaiting for the part 1😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch and concept is good. Waiting for it to start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super interesting concept arpi i luvd it as usual 😊
bt han plz updt soon han as u knw i cnt wa8 na 😳
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW SS
SOUNDS INTERESTING

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Originally posted by: love2_soma

interesting concept...



Thank u sooo much dear 😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Lovely concept... and I knw u r best at pain.. Emotions

U express it very well...
Continue soon...







Am truly honored and humbled dear 😊🤗

Will be updating soon who know maybe tom tom 😉

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