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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#361

hi mitu
fabulous update ...love it to core ..
i like the way u write it ..perfect ly balanced hindi ..it was like i was in some palace ..the pics were too apt with whole update ..i am like this daring wife geet who know how to stand for her rights ,what she wants and how she will be going to get it ..she saved bhavani from snake ...the way bhawi welcomed geet i am sure they both will have a great bond which could make maan jealous at one point..samaya warned geet but geet gave her words back ..why savitri devi is jealous of geet ..she is mother of maan na not wife...want to know number of wives maan have in this story ...

thanks for fantastic update
eagerly waiting for next one

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Darling love story

A good start

Of mk and geet in palace

Waiting fr more

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Amazing update just loved geet beauty with brain maan already fallen for her beauty im sure soon he will fall for her intelligent n brave nature what an entry she saved maans sis n she instant likes geet loved geets answers to samaya lovely update thnx 4 pm

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Part 26

This Was A Pleasant Surprise ...Thanks For Updating

Maanveer realizes his wife not only possess beauty but she has brains too and she certainly is not scared to talk back to him it angers him but even he has to admit this is the reason he was so drawn to her that he married her .
Princess Bhawani is so sweet and now she too welcomes her new Bhabhi with the lotus garland which in turn makes the other queens jealous .
Geet on the other hand firstly admires the brother and sister bond and also knows that the other queens are jealous and they would feel insecure too
Samaya comes to speak to Geet and she tries to make Geet aware that she is Maanveer's first wife while Geet too tells her that she is his last wife
looking forward now to see when Geet is taken to Maanveer chamber what she will do what her reactions will be like

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#365

thanks 4 da pm 4 Daring! commented on blog

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Daring Love Story part 26

Superb update

Always love geetanjali answering back maanveer
U wrote ceremony royality brilliantly

Wow...geet saved maans sister... his dearest sis...awesome start
Bhawani is cute... Love her with maaneet

Geetanjali answering samaya... aaahhh love it very very much
Geet is indeed smart, humble n strait forward... completly Amazing person

Precap... eagerly waiting for that

Hoping we will get next part soon

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Reads haq part

Reaaly nice to redd sum thing of your writing after many days.

Wow what h welcome geetanjki received.

Aate hi maanveer ki sbsbe kahas insane se dosti ho gai ''bhanvi''.

Ab toh maanveer mil hi jaynge.

Loved d way she answers everyone

She has brain and knows how toh get her rights

Looking fwd to see how she handle now

Wat will happen on their first ni8

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#368

all welcoming Geetanjali as robots in Maanveer's kingdom but Geetanjali welcomed herself into the heart of Maan's sister by saving her life from snake...and the most admirable thing is that she didn't do it intentionally to make her place in Maan's heart...she did it because she is a generous person by heart...she didn't knew that the girl in danger is Maan's sister...

so now preparation for first night...yaar ab jyada intezaar mat karwaana...waise I know nothing will happen as Geetanjali is not Maan's coward wife and secondly Maan married her with his own will so she will have some place in his heart and he will surely keep her dignity...

awesome update...

thanx for many pms...

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#369

Fantastic update!!!Geetanjali entered Maanveer's kingdom and admired to seeing the beautiful Royal fort will be shined with moon light in the embrass of the night...She saves Bhavani who is Maanveer's sister from snake...Maanveer loves his sister so much...he can do anything for his little sister's smile...Bhavani puts Lotus garland on Geetanjali and she welcome her Bhabhi to Tilakghad...Geetanjali's meeting with Maanveer's other wifes are not so pleasant...she took it positively and understand their stand and pain too...Loved it so much...waiting for the next...Thanks for the PM and PW dear...

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#370

sorry for late reply...thanks for pm

part 26

nice update

maanveer ke rajya mein pair rakhte hi jis tarha se geet ne jadoo chalaya...awesome!

maan ko jawab dena...bhavani ko bachana aur samaya ko mirror dikhana...geet ne bahut achhe se sab kiya! aisi chalak nayi raniji ko koun nahi apnayega?

mujhe lagta hai ki dhire dhire samaya bhi geet ko apna legi!

interesting precap...waiting for it...

par pata nahi aisa laga ki yeh raat normal si sr nahi hogi!!