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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyharika


half an hr more yaar dhamakaas in both the updates get ready 😳






in both the update means...which is another one...are u updating BM also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi






in both the update means...which is another one...are u updating BM also


ya sweety both in half an hr probably 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 25:


Early in the mrng maan woke up as somebody were knocking the door from outside, he looked beside himself got shocked not finding geet!!!


Getting up quickly maan opened the door aunty seemed to be in panick


Aunty: beta geet ko koi leke gaya I tried stopping them bt they were too strong


Maan was a way too shocked to react bt not wasting any more time he ran towards the direction shown by aunty screaming the name of geet madly,. It was a thick forest and more over the last night rain made the mud slippery even to walk. The path didn't seem to end, maan's heart started to beat errotically expecting something bad, something fatal to happen.


COTTAGE:

Geet was trapped inside a small cottage in the middle of the forest. Dev pushed geet into the room and closed the door behind


Geet: tum yeh galat kar rahe ho dev agar maan ko pata chala toh he will not spare u!!! she tried warning dev bt that only ignited his anger, he smirked


Dev: acha!!! Main bhi toh dekhon tumhara maan kaha se aata hai he held geets hair firmly in the fist, she winced in pain'.. tumhe mujhe namard kaha geet itni aasani se main tumhe chodne wala nahi hoon, do u know as to y I got u here?? Geet's mind got alarmed listening to dev that he is upto something. Dev observed the lost expression of her, that gave a satisfaction to his bruised ego..... I am goint to marry u NOW!!! The seriousness in the voice of dev made geet to shiver with dear..... kyun?? Ab darr lag raha hai?? an tumhe koi bacha nahi payega geet I really mean that nobody not even the god!!!, he shoved a saree into geet's hands..... take this saree and get dressed..... nahi pehenungi!!! Geet answered stubbornly


Dev: nahi pehenogi toh main pehena bhi sakta hoon bt u know main tumhare saath shaadi se pehle kuch karna nahi chahta. Tumhe yeh bhi toh pata chale ki main kitna mard hoon, he said placing his hand on geet's cheek, while geet turned her head sideways with pure disguist.... Tumhare iss inkaar se mujhe koi fark nahi padta, you will have to agree, u have no option left


Geet: tum chahe job hi karlo rahongi main maan ki geet sirf maan ki geet!!! she declared


Dev: acha!!! Kaise?? Did he eva say he loves you?? Geet lowered her eyes unable to take dev's question. He only loved simran not u!!! agar tumse pyar karta toh abhi tak bola kyun nahi?? Its only u trying to throw urself on him. Those words of dev pierced needles into geet's hear. Don't u even think that maan will come to rescue u, get ready I have no time, saying this dev left leaving an agonized geet behind


Geet was so drunk last night that she didn't even remember that maan confessed his feelings and moreover maan not accepting his feelings made her heart to bleed. She then looked at the saree, wore it as the deadly tone of dev made geet to understand he will not thik twice before doing something which he said. Cuddling into herself, fearing dev's warning geet sat in a corner of the room blankly staring at the ring in her hand. The diamond ring!!! Her mom's ring!!! She took it off her finger & decided to end her life making it into pieces. Bt somewhere sub-conscious heart was asking her not to proceed with it. geet looked around and found a stone, as the cottage was full of stones and sand. She took the stone and hit the diamond hard with it making it into powder, placed it into her hands, clutching it tightly wen *THUD* the door opened with a band. Dev came in holding geet's arm aggressively he dragged her out of the room.... Kabse door knock kar raha tha!!! Damn u woman!!! Aur der mat karo, don't make it tuff for me he said out of frustration as geet started to protest hitting dev hard with the other hand... U bas***d leave me!!! Dev pushed geet on the mandap..... tum jitna na bologi tummhare liye mujhe handle karna utna hi mushkil hoga geet get that straight, dev then glared panditji and said.... jaldi kijiye, he held both her hands in his making geet to sit forcefully, the moment he took the mangalsutra geet looked at her fist which has the powder, she was about to put that into the mouth *SLAP*


Geet raised her head to look at the person, and got a shock seeing maan with furious eyes. By now angad was done hitting dev badly dragging him out of the mandap


Angad: maan tu get ko leja main isse dekhlonga he said deciding to finish off dev!!!


Maan cudnt hold himself back he again slapped geet.... wat were u doing geet?? how dare u try to take ur life??... you have nothing to do with me Mr. Khurana, just leave me I hate you


Maan: hate me?? Issi liye u were trying to take ur life hai na?? maan asked spitting fire, geet laughed madly main aapki kabse bangayi maan?? main aapki nahi hoon!!! Nahi hoon main aapki, bematlab ka haq mat jataiyiye mujhpar


With the outright denial of geet, maan's anger rose, he just took the sindoor and filled her maang with it.... ab bolo kit um meri nahi ho??


Shocked?? Kitne log shocked hai?? shaadi thik se nahi hui haina?? Phirse shaadi karwa de?? Aunty ki kwahish poori hogi aur aap logon ka bhi!!!


Precap: maaneet ki shaadi!!! Next update after 220+ likes girls get to work!!! update short tha haina?? wat to do u arent filling my quota😡


I know many of u all actually wanted maan to break the bones of dev, bt girls at the moment it was infact needed by maan to focus on geet, angad will anyhow handle dev haina??


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 24

NEXT PART:


PART 26

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OHHH BALLE BALLE PEHLEEE BHANGRAAA BCOZ OF MANEET KI SHAADI
WHAT A DHAMAKA YAAR I M SOOO HAPPPYYY
YIPEEE AND I M 1ST ALSOOO AGAIN BHANGRAA😆😳🥳

AMAZING AND SUPERBBB UPDATEEE
Edited by maaniqra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

awesome update

challo dev is out of d picture...

next maaneet ki shaadi

Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Shocked!!!!!!!! 😲
Fainting...*thud*...fainted!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Dev he is such a Ba***** forcing her aur maa geet ki maang bardi haii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
shadi h0gayi

arre itni jaIdi

superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yupiieee finally update...🥳
amazing update...👏
dev kidnap geet...
iz dash dev se yehii expectation thii...
soo cheap...😡😡
geet try 2 kill her self...😭
haayee mera hero maan ne kiya entry li...😉😳
dev ki jaga geet ko slap...😲
unpredictable maan...
shocked...😲😲
maaneet married...
yupiiee...
eagerly w8ng 4 next...

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