MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome os👏
loved it 😳

"And thats why she now luv exams so much!"

haaye kaash mujhe bhi kisi se pyaar ho jaaye😭😳

i'm loving dis os😛

plsss pm me😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome


Thanks for wonderful party shona..

see palin, maine party di...
Diva ne diye jalaae...
Ab tum... Rangolii banao!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011


diwali update kaha hai

aapne manga tha kya???🤣
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I am trying...hopefully Diwali update, Diwali pe hi mil jayega...😊
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

aapne manga tha kya???🤣
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I am trying...hopefully Diwali update, Diwali pe hi mil jayega...😊

phele mangi nahi tho kya huva...abi sahi...
waise diwali mein ek aur din baki hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii!
Pehle toh...am sorry for the late update!
Was busy in all the Diwali works & peprations...but i hav tried my best to make for it with this "SPECIAL DIWALI...ICE-CREAM" Update...ab diwali pe muh toh meeta karna chahiye na!!
Haina??
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this special update is dedicated to my buddies...PALIN & DIVA!!
Love u both!😃🤗

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Enjoy reading and do like & comment!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-7

They both started walking...its 25 minutes walk to their homes from school. Again they were busy in their never ending talks. They talked about the day's events...all the masti & fun. And they both agreed that it was the best trip they ever had!

As they were walking lost in their chat...suddenly he asked her..
Maan-geet...kaun si ice-cream khayegi???
she looked at him confused...
Geet-Kya??... Ice-cream??
Maan-haan..ice-cream!..ab jaldi se bol na...
Geet-par..abhi itni raat ko ice-cream kahan se aayegi???
Maan-tu na...bilkul stupid hai...wo dekh...
and she turned to look in the direction he pointed...

There was a Ice-cream shop opened at the corner of the street...very few shops were opened at that time. Okk...she didnt noticed that shop...but it didnt mean that he would call her stupid...how dare he??
Geet-haan...tu toh bada "Smart" hai na..."MAANU"!!!
And it hit at the right place!
Maan-achha thik hai...i am sorry...ab tu bata toh sahi...
she wanted to dance on her little victory...but never mind...she can make him to monify her...haina???
So, she did wat she knew will surely work...ignoring him..she started walking!

Maan-arre geet...ruk na yaar...pehle ice-cream toh kha le...
But she didnt stoped...
Maan-dekh..agar tu nahi khayegi na, toh main bhi nahi khaunga...sochle??
she stoped at his nautanki...but she has her demands too...
Geet-thik hai...per mujhe do ice-creams chahiye...aur usme se tujhe toh bilkul bhi nahi milegi...okk???she saw his efforts to hide that smile...
Maan-Achha baba...tu bata toh sahi...kaun si chahiye??
awwa...he is so sweet...
Geet-ek Butterscotch..aur ek Choclate ice-cream!
Maan-aur kuchh???he asked with that cute smile...
Geet-haan...aur ek Choclate Cone bhi!she added to irritate him...
He noded and went to get their Ice-cream...and she waited outside.

After few minutes, he came back with ice-creams...they decided to sit at the steps of a closed shop near by.
What surprised her..that he had brought all the three things...she had asked him!!
She never thought that he will actually buy all these for her...she was just teasing him with her demands...but he took it seriously...and actully fullfiled her demands!

Geet-maan...tu tino chijhe kyun laaya??...tune toh do promise ki thi na??
Maan-Per tujhe ye tino chahiye thi naa!
Geet-arre nahi...main to mazak kar rahi thi!
Maan-achha??
he paused for a moment...
Maan-dekh...ice-creams toh main waise bhi laane wala tha na!...aur ye "Cone"...sochle ki ye mera sorry kehne ka naya style hai..."maan special"! and gave his cuteste smile to her!

She couldnt stop her own smile at his cute gesture...he is really something...
And then they shared their ice-creams with eachother...snatching the cups from eachothers hand...teasing eachother...sumtimes complaining that they didnt get their fair share!
It was the bestest "Ice-cream treat"...she ever had!!

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
Isolophiliac00 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice n cuty update
n i've hit like at all parts😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fabulous stuff

Lovely writing

Continue soon

Waiting for more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally we got ice cream treat ..
Omg..itni sari icecream..I am sure they would freeze geet's blood ...😆..you are increasing "cuteness" with every part dear...
Can't imagine story had actually started at a sad note..and honestly telling i don't want to imagine that..right now i want to enjoy icecream with maaneet...😛..
since maan has lot of money to spend{i am assuming that}..can i add my demand too??
I want "black current.."..promise i would eat separately and won't disturb these cutie pies...

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

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