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punam2712

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Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

LOVE THE CONCEPT

WAITING FOR YOU TO START

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_Maaneet_

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

congrtas on the new ff!!!!!!

waiting for it!!!!!!!!!!

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--ANGEL--

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

nice concept...looking forwrd to it...plz start it soon

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Infinity.

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Congrast for new Concept🥳
Wow! Di really different and that too social issue⭐️
i am so loking forward to this
really happy that u gonna give us different story👏
Amazing poem...Loved it😊

It is a cold winter morning,
I love to sleep cozy in my bedding
there is a strong knock on my door
I get angry and want to throw everything on floor

Mamma why have she to come so early
I asked my mom, angry and still sleepy
irritated I cover my self in quilt
Make myself cozy and sleep still

I woke after half an hour later
yet irritated by the noise she create
Anger in me go up seeing a messy her,
Dirty clothes and no slipper on her leg

This is the morning view I get,
I give her angry glare and say
Press my cloth and pack my lunch
I need to leave for school and don't have time much

What I never realize is this girl
10 yrs old, 2yrs younger to me
walks in winter morning
with messy cloth and leg so bare

Does she not deserve to go to school
does she not deserve to sleepin morning
does she not deserve to keep her bare leg covered
And above all does she not deserve to preserve this childhood

Lovely lines di
Awesome

Eagerly Waiting for start
Continue super soon
Thankx for Pm
&
All the Best👍🏼