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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

kyu hota hai aisa ,

koi chu jaata hai dil ko

bas ik pal main !

kyu hoti hai halchal ,

is dil main

jab hoti hai woh mushkil main !

kuch toh baat hai ,

kuch toh usme khaas hai !

kyu woh hokar hum jaisi ,

phir bhi hum se alag hai !

kya yeh sach hai ,

par phir kyu yeh dil har pal ,

dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko

jisse ab bhi kahi ,

jindagi jeene ki aas hai !

kahi kuch to aisa hai ,

jo main jaanta nahi !

tabhi toh ,

jab sab kahte hai undekha kar usse ,

toh yeh dil maanta nahi !

abhi abhi to milla hu usse

phir kyu lagta hai ,

kuch to mera juda hai usse !

kyu yeh dil chahta hai

sun na usse

aisa kya hai usski hasi main

ke jab woh muskurai to laga

hai bahaar aayi

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

wow wonderful part...

loved it...

i am feeling bad for poor little girl...

while reading i have tears in my eyes...

that chocolate wala scene was very tochy...

maan didn't eat his choco so that he can give her choco...

haaye maaneet became friends...that was cool...

she feels some what secure in maan's presence...

oh no maan again anger in precap but on whom he is anger...

waiting for the next part...

continue soon

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

AMazing update

awww maaneet mein dosti hogayi wow ..

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

awesome awesome lovly story...loving it a looot dear...loved the way maan spoke to her today...continue sooon plss

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
kyu hota hai aisa ,
koi chu jaata hai dil ko

bas ik pal main !

kyu hoti hai halchal ,

is dil main

jab hoti hai woh mushkil main !

kuch toh baat hai ,

kuch toh usme khaas hai !

kyu woh hokar hum jaisi ,

phir bhi hum se alag hai !

kya yeh sach hai ,

par phir kyu yeh dil har pal ,

dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko

jisse ab bhi kahi ,

jindagi jeene ki aas hai !

kahi kuch to aisa hai ,

jo main jaanta nahi !

tabhi toh ,

jab sab kahte hai undekha kar usse ,

toh yeh dil maanta nahi !

abhi abhi to milla hu usse

phir kyu lagta hai ,

kuch to mera juda hai usse

Awesome heart touching poem dear.. so very beautiful.

With ur permission will post it in my next update...

Thank you so much

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

wow lovely painful update.. te way kids making geet to run for every small things and geet scaring of my maan was so lovely.. te way my maan pulled his geet to his room and giving chocolate and offering his friendship was so lovely.. te way dev touching her and te way my maan felt angry was so lovely.. maan dont show ur big big eyes and scare ur geet bechari geet.. te way anni making her to run here and there and my maan making her free from them was so lovely.. te way geet feeling secure in my maan ki presence was so lovely..i love te update

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jsweetyj

@jsweetyj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

awesome ff

nice story

just luved it

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

m feeling pain to see that little geet working like a robot on other's orders

being a child herself she was doing all the household rather enjoy like other kids

only maan is d one who can understand her pain

awesome update

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

so geet is having the secure feelings around Maan. awesome.

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

beautifully written ! maan is soo caring towards tiny geet...loved how he gave his favourite chocolate to her saying he doesn't eat chocolates and then shared it with her ! she started trusting in him...thats a good start...and dev ...is disgusting even in that age...