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Posted: 11 years ago
this is gonna be good right
poor maan how will he handle her now
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Posted: 11 years ago
like button not working ! nice teaser ! waiting for the update...been long...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser...
waiting for the update...
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Nice teaser. Looking forward to the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan changing geet asmodern girl..nice tsr
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hiii alll i am here with part 9







EID MUBARAK TO ALL AND HAPPY TEEJ

PART 9

Maan: mom aap janti hai usko nahi na' kaisi hai,,,kya chahiye use ..this is the time she should have spent with her parents friends ..studying and enjoying but what you all give it to her a married life..mom use pata bhi hoga what does it mean being married' do you even know that she is not comfortable here' mom cant we do something use wapis bhej dijiye'.

Mamta was shocked her son was saying something that will destroy her life'

Mamta: maan don't even think like that she is your wife now and we cant..and do you know what will happen to her if you will sent her back' she wont be spared this society will not let her live'. You know what kind of village is hoshiarpur..nahi na' maar denge use '.

Maan was shocked ' his innocent wify was living with those cruel people .. he wont let them hurt her ' she is better than anyone and will take care of her and now his priorities are with her too'

Maan: fine.. but she wont do any household work' no cooking nothing promise me ' and if anyone will force her then I will see them..being elder doesn't mean that they can rule us mom'

Mamta sighed she knew that no one can change what man thought and what he will do '

Mamta : theek hai..now get ready you and geet are going to hoshiarpur ' pag phere ki rasam hai maan please don't deny baby ..

Maan smiled' and left to get ready '

Geet was still not aware of the fact that why did her husband had shown his anger towards herself..she was just like a innocent baby looking at maan who was again in his rummaging cupboard mission..well it was actually kind of his obsession no w that he cant let her In any kind of discomfort.. maan looked at her dresses in sheer disgust .. and finally a bright purple and white combination soft material came into his hand..it was light and soft that was perfect for his wife..

Geet was sitting settling her clothes in the bag that had with her ' she was looking at all kind of dresses that was having a kind of heavy laces and shiny borders..the next moment she found them out of her bag and maan carefully placed their clothes in the bag and along with that cherry color suit that geet was having in her lap.. well there was no need for him to know that she like the piece of cloth and he made sure that she was doing and looking what he likes along with her marzi involved in his'

Why not they were husband and wife.. a perfect combination which were termed as SOULMATES.. the two individuals who were tied in a lifelong relation that they have to bear and live with each other' hr likes and dislikes must be his priority and she should know about him and their life'

Maan looked at geet's eyes revolving around his '

Maan : mujhe pata hai ki tumhe wo acha lagta hai isliye rakh diya hai par inn sab main se kuch bhi mat rakhna samjhi..these are uncomfortable just like the on eyou are waering.. maan sat beside her and his hands reached her shoulder geet was straightly looking into her eyes ..she was not getting what he was doing but still she let him do what he was doing'

Maan slowly unpinned the heavy dupatta and removed the pins which were used to keep the heavy piece of cloth on its place.. he threw it away and geet looked away immediately..but maan made her look at him..he lifted her face with his thumb and made her look at him..

Maan: I am sorry..

He smiled as she had her eyes wide looking at him'

Geet whispered'

Geet: par aap kyun mafi mang rahe ho..galti toh maine ki thi..

Maan: haa waise tumhari hi thi..who told you to prepare the breakfast' agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh' do you know how risky is it to work in kitchen.. .. even I don't want mom to work there aur tum.. geet don't go in kitchen..you are not going to do any work now' just go and fetch water agar koi kahe toh .. I don't want you to cook samjhi.. and I ask apology for shouting at you '

Geet : haan nahi jayenge..par hume toh ye sab karna hi hai'phir aap mana kyun kar rahe ho.. acha nahi bana tha kya.. humne ek do baar hi banai hai kheer..aapko achi nahi lagi isliye gussa kiya na humpar..

Maan looked at her stunned after all his ram kahani she is still asking who is ram..

Maan st: ohh god..ab phir se starting se samjahun'

Maan making geet comfortable and threw that dupatta which she was twisting in her fingers..

Maan: geet dekho you wont work in kitchen because I don't you to work' I want my wife to live her life like you should live.. aur kheer achi bani thi..

His eyes went to the purple mark on her shoulder and immediately he grab the ointment and applied on her wound..this was bad and he was feeling really bad for his little wify'

Maan: now go and change we are going to hoshiarpur ' aur haan waer the dress I have kept for you '

Geet nodded and maan get himself ready'

The newly wed took the blessing from daadi and they left with mamta..

Maan was though having a learner license still they were having driver who will drove them maan was in the passenger seat and mamta nd geet on back..maan for his time paas was having his laptop with him he was looking at the happenings of his school' he had already taken a week off and now when his exams are approaching he cant take more days off'

Looking at his exam schedule his glance once settle don geet who was looking outside she was enjoying the nature and maan was feeling much more frustrated on him '

Maan st : how can I forget that she must be also having her school and studies geet ke bhi exams honge I have to ask mom to let her stay there and give exams uske baad dad can arrange her admission in my school..

Maan : haa that will be best'

It was evening and geet was dozing off on mamta's shoulder ..before mamta could wake geet maan's voice made her startled who was talking on the phone..he shouted on his friend and this made geet to getout of her sleep..she was still very sleepy and looked at maan with a pout but the next moment they were at the entrance of the handa haveli ..

Geet's father and her daarji along with her elder brother greeted them..as instructed by mamta ,maan touched the feet of elders (except brij ).. they were escorted inside ..geet's mother and her chahi were too delighted to see her ..she was looking like a cute doll but this doll was made to be deprived of her childhood'

Rano tooh her daughter in her embrace..geet didn't know but she cried and cried..this was bound to happen when you get your thirteen year old daughter married off' she was so happy back home..she look at her small brother but their was kind of apprehension in her to ask her mother to go and play..her all sleep had gone away seeing her family again..

Rano and her chachi veera took her to the room ..they were taking care of their daughter and rano made her eat all what geet likes while maan was struck with elders ..thank god that his mother was there otherwise he would have gone mad'

Rano caressing geet's hair..

Rano: geet beta tu theek toh hai' khush hai na wahan ..

Geet who was all lost in her doll with which she was playing just nodded in a YES'

Geet : sab ache hain ma.. then suddenly she looked at her mother with tear filled eyes..she hug her by her waist ' with tears dripping from her eyes'

Geet: ma ab hum wahan nahi jayenge' hume apne aap se door mat kijiye'hume wahan nahi jaana'

She looked at her chichi who too was having tears in her eyes'

She made geet to look at her she was having some kind of doubts.. but looking at geet she couldn't ask her'

Veera : geetu .. kya unhone tujhe chua tha.. bolo beta'

According to veera this could be the reason that geet was not willing to go back..she must be having fear in their physical relation.. but geet didn't know what she was asking so she asked'

Geet: haa chichi chua tha..aur daanta bhi tha.. jaanti ho kitna jor se chillaye the who'

She was still crying and here she was destroying maan's image completely rano looked at her SIL to stop questioning geet ..this shouldn't be the reason and the things that she was asking geet..this is their private matter..

Veera : nahi parjai ji.. hume usi waqt chup nahi rehna chahiye tha ..dekhiye kitna ro rahi hai meri bachi' aap dekh sakti hain geet ko aise par main nahi'

Rano : veera samajne ki koshish karo this is a part of the married life aur isme kya galat hai agar inme ek pati patni ka rishta hai' ye mat bhoolo ki hamari bhi isi umar me shaadi hui thi'

Veera tried to protest '

Veera : phir bhi parjaiji..geet bachi hai abhi'

Rano sternly..

Rano : ab hamari geet bachi nahi hai veera '

Unknown to geet what they were talking about she preferred to lie calmly and enjoy her mother's warmth' veera wiped her tears and geet smiled in return asking'

Geet : chachi hum bahar jaye.. um jaldi aajayenge pakka..

Rano : nahi geet kahin nahi jaan aab ye baat mat bhoolo that you are married'

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A QUICK GLANCE OF WHAT IS COMING NEXT

maan looked at her his cute innocent wify was suffering from high fever and here none cared for her' she was shivering just because she was told to get up early in the morning and had a cold shower.. well he did know what kind of mindset the people of village are having but this mush low he couldn't even think so'

though he himself was a teenager but actually having that much sense that the freezing cold water in the month of January will make her sick and moreover if would have known that these rituals were meant more than a person's life than he wouldn't have even brought her here and if it means upsetting his family than he is pretty sure he would have done than'

maan placed a cold water soaked cloth on her forehead ..she was burning with fever and here he didn't know where to find doctor at this time'

maan immediately called his dad..he was no soft and cool maan now but geet's caring husband who was very much worried for his innocent and nave wife'she was his centre of life within these three days that he couldn't afford any harm to her'

maan: dad we are coming tomorrow itself I cant let her stay here' and dad sent me doctor's number geet needs him now'

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Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AFTER SEEING THE WAITING SEEING THE TEASER YOU BROUGHT MY ZEAL BACK TO TYPE AND UPDATE PARCHAAI

KEEP IT LIKE THIS...
THANK YOU SO MUCH READERS

SUHAANA
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Posted: 11 years ago


Hiya... 🤗

How's you?

Ive missed you

:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Part 😃
geet ne anjane me Maan ke character ki dhajjiyan uda di 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan tu apna temper thoda control may rakho beta dekho geet kitna darr ne lagi hai tumse

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