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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
maan taking care of geet...
loved the update...geet very innocent n naive...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii alll i am here with part 6












PART 6

Maan: chodo use..

(leave it..)

Geet nodded in a NO…

But maan was quick to pin her hands and pull the dupatta to get a clear view of that view which was still a light red and big portion had turn blue…. He lightly touched it ..but geet flinched in pain…. Somewhere today he will not ask her from where she did get it… but to give her medical aid….

The pain and the result of something brutal could be seen but certainly it couldn't be voiced out now..situation needs to be handled with care….

Maan brought the warm water and first he smoothened her place where there was a slight redness … her dupatta was off … though thinking about her age it doesn't matter but geet was concerned her upbringing was something that made her different amongst all which actually her dear husband was adoring ….

Even there was a clot in her arm… he gently dressed the place and made her lie on the bed .. he tucked her on the bed giving her a good night kiss …. Well a sweet peck on her forehead ..all the while geet couldn't got the courage to see towards him she was scared … what if he tells his family and his mother about all this ..her bruise ..she tightly shut her eyes and in an attempt she forgot that to realize that he had for the first time had expressed his concern towards her …

Maan settled beside her … geet was having her face towards him.. she out of her fear hold his hand and kept under her cheek… she was sleeping one sided so that it wont hurt her and maan noted to take her for a full checkup..he had some doubts about her being having a fracture .. or a muscle pull…

The new morning a new commencement of a new life … the cool winds were blowing out of the pen windows.. the blue curtains following the tune of the wind.. well the sun was a little lazy or say he was a little restless to wake up and saw her first …

IT IS TRUE THAT DESIRES AND FEELINGS CANNOT BE SUPRESSED THEY JUST NEED A SMALL DROP OF LOVE TO GET THEMSELVES FORM INTO AN OCEAN OF LOVE ..

Here the young hearts were at the beginning of experiencing something new …. Maan opened his eyes.. well first he stretched himself just like the morning routine and not having any idea of what occurred last night … he was just in his life his view… but something caught him… her long hair…

Well well geet's pretty long hair that she tied in a braid were falling off and were touching his free hand… first he felt ticklish … but ignored next when she pulled his hand again he got the shock ad all the incidents came rushing to his mind..he slowly caressed her face.. there was a small smile playing on her lips.. she was looking indeed innocent and like a child.. that she was actually … that his mind confirmed..

Maan's mind: she is a CHILD maan .. ek bachi hi toh hai who …. A mere thirteen year old with whom you are tied with a lifelong relation …. The truth was bitter very cruel that can make anyone to fear of the after life but still there was a bliss in the relation that they were sharing .. there was a deep relaxation in his heart after knowing that what he is going to do next…..

The beauty was sleeping next to him…she was like sleeping getting unconscious ….he couldn't find anything more to do except staring at his cute wify..who was so innocent and pure like milk….. her white skin was so tempting ..her red cheeks…

Was it natural ..he asked himself but couldn't get any answers…

Maan slowly made her comfortable with his pillow and left for his morning routine..he needs some fresh air …

MEANWHILE AFTER JUST FIFTEEN MINUTES

Geet wake up from her contented sleep..from last few days she hadn't sleep this much and now she was feeling so much relaxed ..she looked around and found herself in a new place… when she remembered that she was married now ….

She sighed knowing that her life had taken a three sixty degree turn … she looked at herself..her sindoor had given a new meaning to her life now this was what said to her by her mother … geet got freshen up and was struggling with her too heavy dupatta she was not getting what to do with this annoying piece of cloth.. she was trying hard to pin it but failing miserably …..

Geet looked at her babaji for help …

Geet : babaji..dekhiyena iss dupatte ko ..kaise gira jar aha hai..ma ne na hum ek bhi acha wala dupatta nahi bheja.. ye sab kitne bhari hai… aur phir hume der bhi ho rahi hai….

Though it was just seven in the morning still geet was feeling intimated about her first day at her place….

Mamta , geet's mother in law and maan's mother In short her saasu ma came .. well mamta was not the hard types saas she was also somewhere against this type of alliance but couldnt voice out as she herself was married at this age… she saw her daughter in law struggling to pin up her heavy dupatta … she knew that the girl was also suffering but she couldn't help her either ….

Mamta: main iss bachi ke liye kuch kart oh nahi saki par abb ise yahan koi takleef nahi hone dungi..she will be like my own daughter..aakhir bahu beti hi toh hoti hai.. agar dil se maana jaye toh …

Geet looked at her mother in law … she just hung her head down..while mamta came and caressed her cheek softy…

Mamta: laiye main kar deti hun….

She very lovingly helped her to tie her heavy dupatta ..even she made her hair… she was having no second doubts that her daughter in law was no less than an angel…

When mamta was about to go..geet stopped her ..well mamta was having a question raising in her mind that why did her daughter in law stopped her but before she could ask… geet bend down and touched her feet for blessing and even apologized which made mamta to avert her eyes feeling shame on what they did with the child ..whose whole childhood was spoiled just because of some old running customs that needs to be changed now…

Geet: sorry wo hum pehle pair chuna bhul gaye the…

Mamta hugged her dearly giving her blessing which made geet happy….

Mamta: khush rahiye aur aapko ye karne ki zarorat nahi hai… theek hai..she asked him..to which geet nodded…

Well according to rituals the new daughter in law will prepare something sweet… and according to daadima that she instructed geet will make.. mamta was unsure how to say to her mother in law that how can a thirteen year old be made to cook in the kitchen…

She was about to protest … when geet came..she touched the feet of dadaji and daadima..and they blessed her… they were having no regrets for their choice ..

Daadima :(to geet) beta aap kuch mitha banaiye … job hi aap ka dil kare..

She was though polite but when it comes to traditions nothing can change what she said…

Geet politely obliged…

Geet: ji…

Mamta had taken sugar in a bowl ..she had actually thought to made geet touch the things and then she will prepare herself but geet's question made her stunned…

Geet: ma hum kya banaye….

Mamta was in a pleasant shock her DIL knows how to cook…. She asked holding her amazement….

Mamta: beta aap banayengi..do you know how to cook….

Geet nodded in a positive making a super cute baby face.. yeh she knows everything.. girls of their village knows everything.. she knows every single house hold word and she really does cook well …

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NEXT : WHAT WILL COOK..

Question to readers what do you want geet to cook..

1.makhane ki kheer

2. halwa ( gajar or moong daal) choose any one

3. anything of your choice ( but brief description de dena)

apni choice bata do.. I am bad in selection





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shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Geet us so cute
Let see wht see prepare
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10

Awesome update
Love it
Geet us so cute
Let see wht see prepare



dear why dont u tell me what should she prepare
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Part
geet is such a cute doll mamta will shower her motherly love to geet
me want maakan ki kheer
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
feeling bad fro maaneet as they r tied with each other at this tender age
but love the way maan is taking care of his cute little wify
mamta is also feeling bad that she can't do anything against this rituals which is going in our country from god knows how many ages
love mamta that she will consider geet as her own daughter
not like geet's daadi saas soft but strict
waiting for more
i will go for gaja ka halwa or rassugula 😆
both are my fav

update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWEE WAISE ME FALLING IN LOVE WITH MAAN😆😳.
MAAN TAKING CARE OF GEET SO MUCH 😛😛.
GEET KI SASU MA SO SWEET.❤️❤️
SHE WILL HELP GEET LIKE MAAN ALL THE WAY👏👏.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved geet
she is cute
nice update
cont soon
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
superv part.kheer banaya jay,,wt say,dear?
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely maaneet moments..maan and his mother is sooo sweet...u can make the dish of your choice yaar..pls cont soon..

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