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wow..this hubby wify r so cute..sweet..he is removing heavy jwellery & duppatta & she was asking to remove flowers 😆 .lovely couple.

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hiii alll i am here with part 5











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PART 5


Geet: aap ye phool nikal dijiye please hume ye bilkul ache nahi lagte'

( can you pull remove these flowers from I don't like these '..)

He couldn't help but smile at his innocent and super cute wify and now like the loving and an obedient hubby he removed every single flower from her hair.. along with the hair pins and accessories only to get a clear glimpse of her waist length long hair'

Her silky brown hairs were cascaded like a pure and fresh waterfall..even there were slight natural curls' she turned only to get collide with him' although the bed was actually quite spacious but they were like sitting in each other embrace'. She was now only in her choli and lehenga' looking absolutely like a princess'..

Maan: why don't you change '. She looked at him.. getting shy. There was no dupatta to cover her'. She quickly tried to get off the bed only to get tripped and land on him again.. she closed her eyes again' she was lost in her own thoughts..eagerly waiting him to shout at him'. But he was so lost in his newly found life partner that very conciously he pulled her ..with lifting himself ' and made her lie on the bed'.

Maan was quick to get off the bed' she was she there now sitting looking at him.. messing the room' maan quickly get his track and vest to change and was now searching for her..while she was sitting keeping her one hand on her chin looking at him intendly'.

Geet : hum unse puch hi lete hain ki unhe kya chahiye' kahin wo naraaj na ho jaye'. Haan yahi theek hoga'

she clutching her lehenga skirt from both sides lifting a little to walk with ease came to his side' already half of the wardrobe was out ' the clothes that she was given by her mother were out..now the remaining that his family given were coming out'.

Geet looked at the beautiful pink saree came from her wardrobe just to get dump on the bed' next was a red anarkali..then green saree' followed by a peach colour churidaar'.

Geet very meekly'.

Geet: ye aap kya kar rahe hain'.

(what are you doing'..) she peeped through his side '..

Maan: I am looking for your night dress'. Mom ne pata nahi kahan rakh diya hai'and you 'what have you brought where is your luggage'. Geet looked at him like questioning' what do you mean'.

Geet looked at him and then at the dresses on floor and bed' maan was following her gaze'. Geet quickly looked to other side'.

Maan finally got two of her night dress.. he choose a pink one'.

Maan handed her the dress'.

Maan: get yourself changed.. she nodded and went to get changed' since maan had already done her half of the work of taking off those jewels' so it took less time for geet to get ready ..she was thinking to clean the mess that maan had created' she quickly braided her long hair and came out' just her parting filled with the red sindoor that he filled today and an engagement ring with her black beads '..

These were the things that were told to her to never remove' being a sleeveless kurti geet took a pink chiffon duppata to cover the blue bruise that was still as fresh as it was that day' though maan had not seen that wound on her arm'. And she cleverly tried to cover that arm by her dupatta'

Geet came out of the washroom' only to see a clean and tidy room with no clothes ..no flowers on bed' their room was so tide and neat.. no jewels were there'.. and even her husband was missing'.

Geet looked around first time she saw the spacious room'. There was a big picture of maan holding a cup ( trophy ) In his hand that was hung just above their bed'. There was a separate small room that was attached ' the room was all white and blue combination curtains'.. even she saw ' an empty photo frame on the dressing table'.

She was just looking at him' ( obviously the large portrait of winner maan) .. when her gaze fall on the books that were lying open on the side table' geet looked at them.. she could relate with them but still she now couldn't complete her vision of being educated' least she knew that she is been given an angel to fulfill her dreams'.

Finding no maan in the room..she was scared that may be he left her on their wedding night'. She was fearing that she will be living alone with all the allegation of not being a good wife' she still remember her mother saying.. that SCARIFICE that's all she needs to learn'. Tears were on the verge of falling from her innocent doe shaped eyes'.

When maan opened the door ' he was carrying a tray in his hands' he was not obvious to her condition and casually called her to have something'

Maan: geet aa jao..kuch kha lo'. No one cared for us during all these ceremonies' he was having a perfect scowl on his face'. She didn't saw him saying her to eat..but she sat beside him' looking at him..she touched his hands with her shivering hands only to feel that he is here'

Maan saw her lost and thought that may be she is missing her family'. He smiled at her and forwarded a morsel of chapatti to her mouth..and without any hesitation she had it'. Next maan had for himself..he feed her..and she being total lost'.

Even her bruised arm was clearly visible to him' first maan didn't saw it'. But when she saw him clearing the plates..she quickly took it from him only to get herself jerked with a sudden gush of pain'

Geet: aahhh'..

Maan didn't know why she suddenly yelled'. But he quickly took the plates..and made her sit on the couch again and lifted her dupatta that she was holding so tight'. She was twisting the cloth and was not allowing him to look'

Maan ( in an angry voice..)

Maan: chodo use..

(leave it..)

Geet nodded in a NO'

But maan was quick to pin her hands and pull the dupatta to get a clear view of that view which was still a light red and big portion had turn blue'. He lightly touched it ..but geet flinched in pain'. Somewhere today he will not ask her from where she did get it' but to give her medical aid'.

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That was so cute
maanet taking care of each other

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