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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update

maant tried to talk to geet

geet is so nervous...

loved it...

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome, nice ,amazing part

loved it

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maaniqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

yeppiee after along time

awesome update

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow.. its lovly update

both r teenagers.. Geet is so cute & innocent😊 thanx for pm

waiting for update

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

THANK GOD MAAN DID NOT BLAST HER AND TRUSTED HIS INSTINCTS

HE IS TRYING TO UNDERSTAND HER

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

Maan making Geet comfortable

geet is scared

thanks for pm

continue soon

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maanluver

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful update di

geet is so scared

that maan will scold her

n maan is utterly confused

as to why is geet behaving so odd

elders r not alwayz right

n what they did now was very wrong

what if these two don't want to live with each other when they get older

is geet's family going to take her back no na

they could have destroyed 2 lives

i admit maan n geet r made for each other

but child marriage is that right

maan does understand her

or is at least trying to do so

unlike her family

being a teenager he has alwayz respected his elders

n their words

but even he knowz what they have done is wrong

geet is so small right now

and at such a age being a wife

geet is so naive n sweet

thinking of her momz words

n not looking at maan

what impact must have this marriage n her family's words made on her mind

she is trying to understand her relation with him

but marriage is something she must have only heard n read in books

she is still trying to cope up

n maan will be there with her to help her na

update soon di

waiting eagerly

muahhh

luvvv yaaa

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 12 years ago

its the first work of yours..i'm reading suhana dii..

and i loved it..

soo beautifull concept..

moni..

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan is so sweet try ing to friendly with Geet

Really loved it ...

Contiue soon

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drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one

maan tried to make her feel comfortable but geet trying to be typical traditional wife

as told by her mother and elders ...

nice part

waiting for more

thnx for pm

do cont soon

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