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Posted: 12 years ago
avi.. tu kya chahti hai..

subah subah ludak jau me..

yaa kal ka exam nahi du..

bata de tere iraade..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

avi.. tu kya chahti hai..


subah subah ludak jau me..

yaa kal ka exam nahi du..

bata de tere iraade..!!

Oye, kal exams hai kya teri?
Tu bhaag yaha se!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nahi toh Muskan kaan pakding as well as me!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow updating..

Waiting so eagerly😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 13

Maan didn't say anything.. it didn't matter to him the monitory loss it was more!! he didn't even know how it happened..?? how do they have the rights..
so many questions where thrown on the Khurana's.. Maan just didn't care to answer.. he didn't want to .. he could burn the person alive who betrayed him. They didn't know it was way to personal for him.. he wouldn't spare the person who tried to play with his emotion.
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He felt really low.. he went to the hill top where he usually spends loneliness.. his agony. Millions of question ran in his mind.. strange fear.. why did all this happen.. it felt like a strong negative feeling surrounding him.. like something stopping him .. pulling him away from his love.. from expressing himself.

Here Geet .. wished.. she would have never loved him.. the music only haunted her... oh god.. how she wished she never wasted all those time endlessly listening to his creations.. even now.. it seemed her life line. Why can't she stop worrying abt him.. stop caring abt him.. when he just ignored her.. she painfully bit her lips. As the tune played.. tear fell down her cheek... why her heart feels excited every time she heard it.. why it made her feel special. Why she feels like believing those unsaid words.. why is her hope all time high..yet again..she was here at this hill top.. like she knew he needs her.. she knows.. in the end its her who is going to be hurt!!!

he left her.. still she came here to see him.. why??? how she knew at this time he will be here??? he needs her!!!.. why he looks lonely.. heart broken.. yah off course his album!! she laughed sadly.
Maan looked stunned at her completely out of words about how he felt for her at this very moment.. how did she come here.. why is she here.. does he have any words to explain his act of flinging her all these days.. she silently inched closing the distance between them.. like t pain that vibrated through his heart killed her more than the inner war.. that kills her every living sec..
He dipped his head in shame instantly... he was guilty.. he had been hopeless.. irresponsible. He had left her for last few weeks.. without any word. Without any reason.. it was his own confusion first & then his junnon to express his love in some dramatic audio release.. alas.. everything backfired & today she was here for him!!!
her hand slowly slid around him.. making him twitch.. her head slowly rested on his broad chest.. to feel those pained heart..to sooth them.. to hold them, comfort them, all the while contemplating her act.. how can she still love him, knowing that he has already broken her heart a hundred times & yet ..here she was still deeply in love with her destruction. How much ever she tried to ignore .. her body..her soul, her existence gives away.. to his feeling. Wat feeling she fought back in anger at self.. making her hold tight around him, while his hand slowly tugged her in his embrace. She jerked out in anger full intention to push him off the cliff.. only to lose her balance... his heart just stopped...in that faction of a sec.. when he held his slipping life back into his cocoon safe & sound. They stood their frozen. She restlessly at the deep valley where she wanted to sink in with him... tears seemed to have dried..wondering ..how everything that was once a beautiful dream has become her fear.. her reason to live his her reason to die!! ironically even at death she didn't want to be apart.
How she hated her state of heart..mind.. & soul..that found tranquility still in his embrace. She could feel herself breaking, breaking with in..shaking..as he held her closer..making sure she was fine. Still she felt a pain deep within.. like a chain suffocating her, ripping through her soul..making painful holes with his concerning words reaching her heart that yet again starts tearing her apart...crumbling..trumbling a darkness self made to live with.. whom she wished to die with.

Maan shook her.. again.. tum teehk ho.. he hugged her again.. thank god tum teehk ho.. main tho dar hi gaya tha.. he cried..holding her close to his heart. Kissing her madly. Don't know when they reached car.. all the while making sure she was fine.. they were again close.. like never before..in peak of passion. He was more insanely loving her.. for now he knew she was the one he loved ..loved madly.. his jaan.. his Geet.. yes.. she had truly become the essence of his Geet!! melody. .. & this was act of love.. as pure as his passion for music.


was she supposed to be happy!!! she didn't know.. he left her..probably ..never to return. Then why did she had to start this confusion again.
When they came back to mansion ..maan wanted to tell her his feeling. He planned it all out.. this time simple & direct. He was going to get some roses & just tell her.. he smiled within.. sweet smile lingered on his lips the whole day since morning. Off course she didn't miss it.. her lips betrayed her.. smiling.. with him.. hiding behind t pillars watching him secretly. A hidden longing.. kash it was for her.. she still wished.
Maan hurried out.. & she just followed him. He couldn't deny her.. all the while through t drive.. he kept steeling glances at her.. how beautiful she looked in simple white suit.. he could sing a song for her every feature.. her every small gestures... he smiled.. & looked in front.. to see t car go out of control... Geet blankly looked at him.. & in secs.. there was complete darkness... last he remembered Geet pulling the steering '. holding him with in her... taking t brunt of t broken windshield on herself... Geet he screamed.. as he woke up to sound of drs.. Mr Khurana???
how r u feeling now?
Geet ..
he restlessly looked around
dr ' Mrs Khurana is still unconscious...
Maan just wanted to see her once. Wat did she do.. why did she have to come between & try to save him... why??? he hated this life.. that caused her pain..


Daadi came in .. her eyes filled up seeing her grandson with a bandage & a sling in the hand.
Dr assured Geet is fine.. she had suffered some bruises on her back & head. Nothing serious.
Maan worriedly questioned ' why is she still unconscious?
Dr tried to calm him down ' we r doing some tests & given her sedatives to sooth t pain
his Geet was in pain.. oh.. t thought itself killed him hundred million times.
He limped & reached t outside of t glass door, from where he could see her . She looked restless probably in pain. A thin bandage on her forehead, otherwise she looked perfectly fine, but the sight itself made his whole world go still. A slight sight of twitch on her face with pain made him feel as if his world came crashing down with no sound. Like it was not just hurt, his heart fell apart seeing her in pain. Every second that passed seeing her unconscious felt like hours all his emotions multiplying exponentially along. .. he stood there still!!!
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her dream!!! his realty
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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is one intense pair!
Their paths seem to twine them through so much pain and separation and yet they find themselves together tighter than before.
That scene at the top of the hill had me catching my breath.
Hope she soon starts recovering and is able to trust again and he cares for her enough that his past deeds can be forgiven at some point.
🤗
Thanks for updating!
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
why geet why u did dis...u should have cleared all d things with maan b4...i think some thing is missing...some puzzle is missing...plz let geet knw d truth...

superb n wonderful update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply Amazing...
It's still very hard for me to digest the fact that maan ra**d geet..
Hope some miracle will happen and everything will be fine...
Maan is in love with geet..
Geet loves maan like anything...
Despite maan's deed geet again saved maan...
Waiting for the truth...
Edited by ManeetGurtiMG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
me still confusion
pls clear the confusion soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just loved the update...

beautifully written... very painful... A love that is so painful to her...
He loves her... madly loves her now... And she cant accept the fact though she wishes the same in her heart...

And inspite of the pain and hatred, all she could think of before the accident was him... her love is so deep and true that even the hatred seems to be minute when compared to the love...

Very heart wrenching one muski.. and i really love the mystery in this story... Maan still remains a mystery to all of us...

thanks for updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Oye, kal exams hai kya teri?
Tu bhaag yaha se!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nahi toh Muskan kaan pakding as well as me!!!!


haan..sach me kal mera exam hai..!!

tum sab mil ke mujhe jaan bhooj ke pareshaaan pareshaan karing..! 🤢

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