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Shiya1206

@Shiya1206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Yaay... Was so sure it wasnt Maan... The relief... Yet poor geet... But maan hai usse sambhal ne ke liye... Happy life to them..
Awesome end...

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Very nice. Very good ending awesome... Thanks for updating for us...)))))))

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Wow Muskaan...I just finished reading diljale and that was the most intense FF I have read...every chapter was like a punch in the gut...

Geet's madness, betrayal, his psychotic behavior where she could not differentiate between love and hate, their wedding and confusing behavior, and the end when he found out the truth. His acceptance of her hatred because it was less than her love was the most intense thing for me. Part 17, where he brings her home in spite of her hatred was best for me...really intense.

As with your stories it is difficult to predict the end. Frankly speaking I was expecting this to be a story of a star who finally realized he was wrong and finding her love as a repentance... frankly speaking that is the true reality of this world. Otherwise Lindsay Lohan will not be in and out for drugs and Amy Winehouse will not die so young...but you ended it by bringing in Dev. Well don't know if that was how u planned not able to leave Maan tarnished or not. A mature reader in me would have liked to read a FF where he accepted his mistakes...but then maybe it would have been like Sati in a way...

Either way, I enjoyed the story a lot...it was truly very unique and intense from get go...only u could have written such characters and justified such a story so boldly...

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

very nice update but di why you ended so suddenly

its unlike ur work

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

not happy with ending at all , but would still congratulate you for completing it

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Saams

@Saams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

awww...so shocking..

finally happy for maaneet.

thank you for this wonderful story.:)

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

I was wondering when Geet turned in revenge mode from an innocent Girl but then I thought that may be that tragedy changed her but I was shocked to know that Brij helped her in all her plans. I thought that Maan will know about that incident from Geet's diary but u brought twist with Brij's interference. Happy to see that how much Brij loves Geet. And That Dev🤬 Uski toh 😡. Geet ki tarah Even I believed that My Maan is innocent. And finally It Proven at the end..

Edited by DevilClan - 12 years ago

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

OMG Di !!!! What should i say !! I am feeling like i myself am in a trauma !!! I was literally hyperventilating reading each & every update !!!!! It was sooo unique that only special piece like u can think !! LOL !!! I HATE DEV !!! Poor Maaneet , both were living a life of hell inspite of getting heaven in reality !!! Loved it di !!!! Love u for giving such a beautiful work !!!

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

Woow... d twist & d truth was shocking bt reliving dat geet's maan wasnt such a devil... bt dev was so cheap & disgusting... finally geet got d news she wanted all d while as he wasnt d culprit... thnk u so much for such a lovely stry jst simply loved it & did feel d pain of our maaneet too... will really miss it...

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

Part 15

Fantastic update Muski

totally gripping!!!!

Maan shattered by Geet's declaration

All his hopes and dreams to have a future with His Geet crashes down

but he finds a savior in Rajji

Rajji bridges the gap of confusion and doubts between Maaneet😊

The truth of Geet's deewangi comes out in open when Maan gets to know how madly she has been in love with him since...

Maan witnesses her room, her treasure, her inner soul😳

Maaneet confrontation was just flawless

The way you penned it down showing both their inner war to come up to terms with their emotions, extremity of love, hate, anger, pain, confusion, guilt all blended together

Even the descriptions of Geet's room and her priceless collection of her Maan's nishaanis😳

Simply superb Muski

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

A part of truth already out

Maan shell shocked with the revelation

Wonder how will he deal with the bigger blow coming his way

Off to read the next

😊

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago