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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no ye kya hogaya😭
mu pe mu..ab kya hoga..how will geet win back maan??
maan kaha gaya hai ab?/
stupid meera n dev..they have wrong timing😡
precap is more scary
waiting for next part di
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Here is the last update of this FF the next update will be the epilogue 😳


PART 23


Geet: I will write this article as I need to honor the man of my life who beautified my soul with the essence of his unconditional love... I still love him and will continue to do so till death embraces me... He deserves to know this; yes he does...

*****

Geet started working on her article by putting her heart and soul in it.

She was penning down the true majesty of love with the ink of her heartbeats

Days were long and nights never seemed to end such was the dedication of every word that was glorifying the pages of her article

The flow of time, the mischiefs of nature, the bliss of youth everything appeared alien to her

The ripped photograph of her love gave her the strength to write with more determination

It was true she had allowed herself to get drowned in the intoxicated passion of her sacred love

After one whole month of hard work Geet was successful in completing the tale of her heart in the form of a beautiful article

Her article gained immense popularity among youth as well as elderly people but she was waiting for a special someone to read her article but to her dismay this time destiny did not bless her with any accidental coincidence

Finally she decided to take a crucial decision of her life

She resigned from her job and gave the first copy of her article that she had kept carefully with her to Amrita and requested her that if at all a day arrives wherein Maan wishes to know the real feelings of her heart then this copy should be handed over to him

Geet believed that she might not be there with him at that time but atleast the purity of their love will remain untarnished till the very end

Amrita tried to stop Geet from leaving but Geet was firm on her decision; she had not written this article to gain fame but this article was the last hope that maybe she could gain back something that was always her possession, the love of her Maan but this wasn't the case

Geet decided to go back to her parents who were settled in America permanently as she didn't wish to be associated with a job that had cost her the most precious blessing of her life

Geet handed over the first copy of her article to Amrita and walked away from the office.

Amrita: (monologue) Somewhere or the other I am also responsible for this situation Geet and if there are chances then I won't stop myself from reciftying my mistakes

Amrita placed the article in her purse and confidently went to meet Maan

***

After half an hour,

Khurana Constructions

Amrita: May I come in Maan?

Maan: Amrita Mam are u here to celebrate the success of your article that made a mockery of my true love?

Amrita entered Maan's cabin and closed the door

Amrita: I am here to make u realize why this article gained popularity

Maan: Listen Mam you'll have already played with my emotions now don't u dare act smart with me or else'

Amrita: Forget about the future Maan; a man whose present itself is gloomy can't have any control on his future.


Maan: What do u mean?

Amrita: If there was a day in your life wherein even for a second you loved Geet with your heart and soul then read this article

Amrita placed the article in front of Maan's eyes and continued

Amrita: U questioned Geet's love and declared her love to be fake without understanding the situation but you will make my job easy to declare that you were the one who were playing with her feelings if u hesitate to read this article

Maan took the article from Amrita's hand as he was in no mood to insult the beauty of his love

Amrita: Read this article Maan maybe u will get a chance to grab an opportunity before its too late'

This last sentence of Amrita had a great impact on Maan for reasons unknown to him he didn't allow his anger to dominate him this time and simply sat on his chair and went ahead to read the article

His heart skipped a beat as soon as he read the title of the article. The title that Geet had given was, "Without u Oh MY LOVE'"

Amrita placed her hand on his shoulder and requested him to read ahead

Maan startsto read the article

Without uOh my LOVE'

It's yet another day, the golden sunbeams are tracing the path of my eyelids and making me realize that its time to perform morning. The melodious sounds of the birds are trying to convey the majesty of a blissful day to my eardrums. The dancing waves of the mischievous breeze is moisturizing my skin; by embracing me in its folds.The ornaments of nature are trying their level best to convince me that finally the dark clouds of uncertainty and fear have made way and its time for me to laugh and smile with the same bliss and the same happiness that had the potential to erase every minute trace of grief that my life possessed.


The warm embrace of this delightful morning appeared another illusion to my lonely soul and thus I could not greet nature with the same joy that it wanted to see in me. Adorning myself with a stole I allowed my feet to kiss the dust of my room I didn't even realize when my legs carried me closer into the loving folds of the sunrays thus giving it a chance to light the hope of a new beginning in my soulless life.

As soon as my fingers committed the crime to separate the curtains of my room, the blessing of the sun beams bestowed the shower of enormous soft innocent kisses on my entire body in an attempt; to ignite the fire of an admiring feminine blush into my soul. But can u expect a dead man to stand alive in front of u? Can u even dream that a day will arrive in the history of universe that the unision of sky and earth will take place? Some questions are better if left unanswered; my life is no different as I fail to recognize my own individuality today. It seems I am more of a machine that is accomplishing its daily task mechanically as I have forgotten the art of smiling, laughing, blushing, crying or even reacting to different situations. There is an unconfessed pain that is haunting my days as well as my nights; such is the intensity of this grief that it does not allow me to wake neither to sleep. In short every morning of my life has turned into a cruel night.

After a moment's hesistance I went and stood in front of the mirror inorder to get a glimpse of my lost identity. To my horror I couldn't see any reflection in it thus giving a feeling of emptiness to my life; to my every breath. The feeling of this dense loneliness taking over me completely made me shiver in fear. I couldn't afford to lose my identity I had to do something; yes I had to see a reflection in the mirror that would be a proof that I am still alive. I wiped the mirror with my trembling hands in an attempt to prove myself right. A tear drop rolled down my eyes as this action of mine revealed the true face of my identity. A smile decorated my face making me look angelic thus allowing the happiness of my heart to get reflected through my expressions.

Yes I was happy not because I saw my reflection in the mirror but because I could once again see his shadows comprised in me making me realize how incomplete I am in his absence. This realization opened the chapters of my heart wherein every word every sentence was penned down with the ink of his love; his unconditional love'

I considered myself beautiful but his one admiring look made me feel I was not beautiful but I was beyond it. His love was so sacred that his mere presence could bring the best out of me. Every unheard wish of mine was fulfilled the day I met him. Destiny was the main cupid in our love story but the bond that kept us together was his selfless and divine feeling for me.

All my mornings began with him; the evenings in which I would wind up myself to him had a special romantic rhythm to it. Nights were spent in endless talks; forgetting about heavens taking refuge in his arms he taught me the true meaning of life, trust, faith, loyalty and eternal love. He cherished me like a precious gem, he worshipped me like a holy prayer infact his love was so divine that HE LOST ME FOR THE SAKE OF MY SUCCESS'

Tears flooded my eyesight as my heart bled with the pain of his love. Every love story has its ups and downs; there are cases of perfection as well as instances of flaws. In our case it was me who was on the wrong side as today I realized it's good to be quiet to maintain the beauty of a relationship; but too much of silence can destroy the strong foundation of every magical bond as well.

It was my fault that I didn't confess that without him I have no existence; there is a prick in the air without him as I fail to believe in myself without his presence. He was my religion, my faith, my holy words and with his departure till date every prayer of mine has been left unanswered. I wished I could have conveyed to him that he was not only my world but also the light of my dreams and my thoughts. He was my sparkling star in every dark night as well as the first fresh morning breeze of my heart's delight.

I wished he could understand that I wanted to live but WITH HIM

I wanted to see a bright future but ONLY WITH HIM

I wanted to breathe but only in HIS PRESENCE

I wanted to walk but by holding HIS HANDS

I wanted to fragrant my body and soul but only with HIS FRAGRANCE

I wanted to have a special place for residing and it was none other than HIS ARMS

I wanted to live in his memories and wake up only IN HIS DREAMS

I wanted to be successful but only by losing my heart and soul IN HIS LOVE

Had he understood that I NEVER WANTED TO LOSE HIM THEN TODAY MY IDENTITY WOULD NOT HAVE BEEN INCOMPLETE'

"True love does not mean having your love by your side

It means to be assured that your love is happy and smiling in whichever part of the world he is

I love him that's my Honour

Once upon a time he considered me as a friend that's my Pride

I would consider to die with the happiness that I love him rather than living in the pain that I forced my love on him

I will wait till eternity in the hope that maybe one day arrives in my life before my death that he will happily confess I LOVE U TOO'"

He has every right to hate me but till the last breath of my life I will live in this hope that he will realize one day that I AM AWARE HE LOVES ME EVEN MORE THAN I DO'

*********************************************************

Maan had tears in his eyes.

He collapsed on the floor as he died a million deaths by understanding the depth of his mistake.

How could he be so foolish to allow the light of his life to roam alone in the dark tunnel of life?

Amrita: Maan u commited a mistake by mistrusting Geet and now Geet is making the biggest mistake of her life by settling in America permanently. Stop her from going Maan prove to the world that Maan and Geet's love happens once in a lifetime and distances can never separate them'Stop her before its too late

Maan hugged Amrita and thanked her for showing him the mirror of truth

Maan left for the airport without wasting any further second to get his life, his Geet back in his life

Meanwhile,

At the Airport,

Geet was admiring the ripped photograph of her love

Her eyes were still weaving the hopes that maybe Maan will come and stop her from leaving but she knew some prayers are always left unanswered

Geet: I always believed Maan if your love wants to walk away from your life let it go; if your love is true it will return back or else it was never meant to be yours' U didn't return Maan maybe u deserved a better girl; but for me u were; u are and u will always be the only one; the one and only man whom this heart worshipped upto a stage wherein love touched the heights of divinity'I love u and will continue to do so till the rest of my life

She kissed Maan's photograph and placed it in her purse as the final announcement of the flight departure was been made

She took her luggage and started walking towards her new destination that marked the beginning of her life

By the time Maan reached the airport the shadow of Geet was also not traceable for him' it seemed Maan and Geet were never destined to be Maaneet or was destiny planning to gift these love birds a second chance?

Only time had this answer'

THE END

Precap: Epilogue: Jahah, dua [World and blessings]

Writer's note

Okay guys I know this ending is a question mark but all the questions will b answered in the epilogue just trust me I am sure there will be a smile on your face as the epilogue will be the first of its kind in all FFs till date.

This was the last chapter of this FF and to be honest enough it was one of the most difficult chapters that I had ever penned down as it was a challenge to write down the meaning of love from Geet's pov. I hope I was successful in touching the chords of your heart with this update.

I would request you'll to tell me about your thoughts regarding this short yet different journey of Maaneet. This FF had everything craziness, love, pain, fun, romance almost every emotion. Tell me which was your fav character? What do u like abt this FF? Which was the best scene till date? How were the last 4 chapters of this FF? What do u expect from the epilogue?

I will update the epilogue once I get a good response from you'll. Hoping to see a detailed comment

Once again trust me you will fall in love with the epilogue

Love- Divya (aka Piya)


Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cool udpate dear
loved it
so mk realised finally tht geet did nt cheat him
w8 fr epi
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Posted: 12 years ago
for the first time, I'm first soorry can't give detailed comment now..I am feeling dixxy seriously! like I will falll with my head on keyboaard..I need to get medicines...LoVED your Update..eerr..Last part
👏👏👏👏👏👏This for you writing..I can't write more now...My conditon is getting worse...SORRY!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... meaning of love frm geets pov was mindblowing...waiting for an epilogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago


at last Maan realized that Geet loved him from the depth of her heart...

but Geet left...and Maan can't even stop her...

yaar itna mushkil hai kya...Geet ke paas mobile to hoga hi...he can call her to stop...ab bhag bhag kar airport jaane ki jaroorat thode hi hai...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..superb ending
loved it very much..gonna EMAET
waiting for Epi..cont.soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
Geet laid down her feelings in a form of article
Maan feeling ashamed of himself
Update epilogue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
very deep meaning and beautiful thought you had wxpressed her heart beutifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
please dont separate maaneet😭
i will write long comment after reading epilogue
till then reserved for my comment
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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