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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
felt bad for maan...hope things work in der favor bt its too early to say...want madhubala to knw d truth...
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Posted: 12 years ago

The Palace of secrets Part 10

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At night...

Maan went near Naintara.
M:Naintara...is everything ready?
NT:Yes jeeju.Dev is aready ready.Now i just have to change my clothes.
Maan looked around to see if Geet was there.There was no Geet there.He was relieved.
M:I guess Geet is having a deep sleep now.I will go there before she wakes up and become Madhubala.

NT:Ok jeeju.
M:All the best Naintara.
NT:All the best to you too jeeju.I am sure that your love will make our drama successful enough to bring Geet back to her life.
He smiled.
He went to the bedroom and lay on the bed. Maan pretended to sleep.Geet woke up.Her eyes shone.She walked to the mysterious room not aware of the surroundings.She wore Madhubala's dance costume and ornaments while Maan dressed up like Rameshwar.
Geet's body shook.She started dancing.

'Raa raa sarasaku rara
raa raa chentaku chaera
praName needira aelukoraa dora
swaasalo swaasavai raa raa ..
Raa raa sarasaku rara
raa raa chentaku chaera '



Her heart longed for Devendar:Devendar….where are you?Are you in heaven?I know that you are killed by that devil Rameshwar.I will kill him.
She started crying loudly.
Maan who was watching this through the window shed tears.The other family members were also watching it.They were very upset seeing Geet in this condition.Rano and Ganga tried hard to control their tears.

Suddenly he heard a voice:Madhu…my Madhu….
Her face blossommed:Devendar?You are alive?That means Rameshwar did'nt kill you.That was only my nightmare.
She moved the curtain to a side which divided the room into two.
There she saw Devendar from behind.It was Dev who was dressed like Devendar.Aloknath had made a sketch of Devendar which helped Dev to dress up exactly like Devendar.
Geet(Madhubala) was very happy to see him.She sang happily.
'thom thom thom
thom thom thom… '

She started dancing with joy.
'aaa...dhiranana...aaa…'

Suddenly Naintara appeared there wearing a dance costume.She was smiling at Dev.
She danced singing.


nee pondu nae kouri abhisarikai naenu vaechaanu sumanohara (She started swaying her body while singing)
kaalana marugaina aananda raagalu vinipincha nilichaanuraa

Dev's (Devendar)eyes were fixed on Naintara.(Devendar)

Geet(Madhubala)was confused what was happening near her.

Dev(Devendar)joined Naintara in dancing.He held her hand.He kept his arm on Naintara's waist and sang dancing.

D:tanana dhimta dhimta dhimtana ||3||
NT:vayasu jaalamopaleduraa
marulugounna chinna daanni raa
tanuvu baadha teercha raavera...raavera
sala sala ragilina paruvapu soda idi
tadi budi tadi budi tapanala swaramidi
ra ra ra ra ...
raa raa raa raa

Geet(Madhu)was shocked seeing their intimate dance.
She was reminded of Rameshwar's words:

R:I know that you are angry with me.But believe me..i did'nt do it purposefully.I decided to unite you and Devendar.For that I went to his house.But I found her with another dancer girl.He was cheating you.He does'nt deserve you.That's why I married you.

Her heart pained.She covered her ears with her hands and closed her eyes.Her tears flowed down.Then she opened her eyes with anger and looked at Dev and Naintara.
G:Devendar!
They stopped dancing and looked at her.
G:You were cheating me.You pretended to be in love with me.But now you are flirting with some other dancer.
Dev and Naintara smirked.
G:I trusted.But you betrayed me.Poor Maharaj Rameshwar…I misunderstood him.I hurt him a lot.
Maan who heard it from outside became very emotional.He got relief as Madhubala's misunderstandings about Rameshwar have vanished.Aloknath smiled at Maan.
Maan entered the room.Geet became emotional seeing him.She fell at his feet.Maan did not know how to react.
G:I am sorry Maharaj.I misunderstood you.You are right.Devendar is a cheater.He betrayed me.He broke my heart.
Maan made her get up and wiped her tears.
G:You are great.I hurt you a lot.I insulted you a lot.Still you are not angry with me.But I deserve punishment.
M:Live as my wife.Love me.That is my punishment for you.But this punishment is not compulsory.I just suggested.You accept this punishment only if your heart allows.I won't force you.
She became emotional.
G:You are a King.But instead of ordering me you are giving me the liberty to do whatever I want.You are great.
M:Madhu…you did'nt reply.
She raised her eye brows and looked at his eyes.Slowly she blushed.
Maan was very happy.
Aloknath said in his mind:Thank God.Madhubala has accepted Rameshwar as her husband.
Dev and Naintara smiled seeing the romantic eye lock of Maan-Geet.
Suddenly Geet's face became dull.
Maan:What happened Madhu?
She stared at Dev:Devendar….you can't live happily after cheating me.You must have cheated many ladies.You don't deserve to live.If you live you will cheat many more innocent ladies.So you should die.
Maan,Aloknath,Dev,Naintara and others got tensed.
Geet told Maan:Maharaj…Thinking that you killed Devendar brutally I had decided to kill you.Because I thought you were an animal and Devendar is innocent.But I have been proved wrong.The animal is Devendar.He fooled us.He played with our emotions.I want him to be punished.He needs to die.I will kill him.Please let me kill him.
Everyone got tensed.
M:He cheated my beloved.So it's my right to kill him.I will kill him.
Geet smiled.Maan took the knife which was hidden in his outfit.Dev,Naintara and others got scared.Maan stabbed Dev.Naintara cried loudly.

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am sure Maan is acting but that will be a good closure for madhubala...awesome one Jasmine
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY DIWALI...

i dont think maan will kill dev...it may b soe thing maan pretending to kill dev...just like d knife amir khan had in ishq movie...

excellent update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
loved it
finally madhu aka geet's mu clear but now what
in the last maan killed dev or is it part of act
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! What was it at the end?? Maan can't actually kill Dev!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Maan stabs Dev! well written...update soon

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