Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Diva7

aiiiyyyooo😲...dil tod diya mera tune zalim😭

y wud i laugh haan ?????dis isheights😡

raju tu shaam ki dosti par shak karing????

try kar i'll giv u fair verdict abt it😊

shak nahi yaar...
...its just...i am not sure yaar!
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...but for u i will try...i promise!🤗
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And dare u think ever again.. k raju can doubt his best buddies...
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

shak nahi yaar...
...its just...i am not sure yaar!
...
...but for u i will try...i promise!🤗
...
And dare u think ever again.. k raju can doubt his best buddies...
...

Wow.. you started another one.

I like the way you are filling the characters. A sketch coming more into focus. Lovely writing.

This story is a beauty itself :)

Awide grin of smile on my face seeing ur pm and thanks for giving so soon .

congratulations on yr new FF...superb updates

Ohhh amazing one ... Loved it ...

Nice start with leap of 13 years just to tell how geet have faced all and how she became a strong girl that she can fight with outside selfish world and which taught her even more helpful & caring by her heart …

So geet started working as secretary in KC and getting attracted towards his boss….hummm….maan ka jadoo chal gaya…he never bothered about her dressing b'coss he must have seen her pain in her eyes as he also going thro some pain…!!!!

Maan & POEM….. nice unexpected combination….lol…but I loved it very much…very well expressed his pain thro' poem and he wanted to set free himslef from his pain

TFP

Cont soon

Waiting for their meet

part 2
nice part...
like this strong Geet...
but would like to read how she feels in her POV...
and Maan is her Boss...
cont soon dear...