Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 10

Originally posted by: ritzy09

bewitching...

so u did not spend too much time in putting Maan and Geet together..{😆..yes i did not take much time...hope its not too early😆}.a boss who cares only for his deceratery's proffessional side or rather a person who doesn't judge beauty just by what you see...

He has his own demons and his own share of pain...{yes he was sad because of loosing the project...thats what i tried to depict through his poem,,hope i have not exaggerated it..🤢}

And the poem was just wonderful...it depicted not only a person's grief but his yearning to break free from it too...{thanks😊}

awesome👏

Originally posted by: LadyArwen

a very beautiful story once again... both your previous pieces have been amazing with a lot of involvement from the readers' end as well... so does this sound the same... continue soon...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

such a lovely part...

i actually liked the leap u have taken... u didnt elaborated on her miseries after the scar...thanx for that... though its really sad for any gal to be in geets situation but the way she had carried on is commendable...

thanx for bringing on maan (just name only😡) in the second part itself... and maan seems to be such a gentleman ... not bothering about physical looks but just her work...

continue soon

Originally posted by: palindrome

Common,along with his name,there were few more things related to him like his four coffee mugs and one poem...😆

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

are yaar... gussa kyu hothi ho???? but until he is physically present how to count him up???and i forgot to mention about the poem... it was lovely... it seems u r really obsessed by poems... good for us... 😉