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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow so her left side of the face got ruined huh
and am guessig she will soon be subjected to many taunts by ppl once she gets out
poor thing naa wont be able to play sita now
but that is least of her worries as of now things will change drastically for her
sp she was trying to save the toddler but was unable to save herself
wonder who was the driver of that vehicle
that man or woman has just ruined her life you could say
or did they
looking forward for more in this
cheers for pm

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yash

@-Trinity-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Very beautiful concept 👏

At that tender age if one goes through such horrific incidents it'll surely change a person's mindset.. eagerly waiting to see how geet goes through her life in hand with the society and its people..

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.. hoping that maan will be able to recognize her inner beauty which is nontarnishable..

Please add me to your PM list. You are an amazing writer.

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

oh new story

quite intresting n awesome concept

feeling sorry for geet bt dats d reality of dis world

continue soon

n u didn't pm me😭

jst joking😉

waiting for more

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

first of all am so happy to see u back... 🤗

new story and as expected with completely different essence...

just at the age of 12 she is so caring... the day she thought she was beautiful was the same day which gave her an ugly scar too...and its only fact that once we lose something we crave for it more...

eager to know how the story proceeds... continue soon

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank you so much lakshmi..Believe me i was missing your comment and just a few minutes ago i checked my outbox to confirm whether i have PMed you or not...???😆
will be waiting for your response for "beauty"...

oo... u made me feel so special yaar... thank you so much...

its just that navarathri started na ... so lil busy... thats y me late... and as it was a new and UR story i didnt wanted to rush and read ,,,,, commented above...

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dreamy4ever

@dreamy4ever

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Loved the start thou painful part but amazing
poor geet 😔
Plz cont soon

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P0K0

@P0K0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

oh god...!
This concept is too risky!!!
But i think no one can make it worth reading except u...!
Good luck babes...!!!

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Sorry for the late comment dear…..I could not read the part yesterday due to the sudden office work …

Again one more diff story from you…

Last two times I was not with you….Colors was ended and Obsession was near to end ….but I am happy that I will be with you in the journy of this story…

You very well written her eagerness to portray the character seeta …she got the role only due to her beauty and she is ready to help anybody with all her heart…. she realized importance of her beauty but next moment she realized that she will not be able to do role as now she became ugly b'coss of accident ….

I loved the title ….Beauty….only indicates the outer beauty which geet lost in accident and the inner beauty which she still possess … but she failed to notice it…

Hope she will not burry herself in depression b'coss of ugliness…

I am very much eager to know how you are going to shape the story….waiting for the next part

Thnx for pm

Cont soon

Happy Navratri to you & all readers

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

once again a very different story

loved the first part of beauty

and the beauty of ur writing and story line really amazes me

and thank you once again for the new story

the first part itself is capable of attracting readers

so our new obsession for beauty begins now😊

HAPPY NAVRATRI TO U TOO AND EVERY ONE ELSE

u have added a new spark on the beginning of navratri by beginning ur new story on such auspicious day

and sita and geet very nice combination

let's see how maan steps into the story as ram or maan

waiting eagerly for the next

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: gudmeet
once again a very different story
loved the first part of beauty
and the beauty of ur writing and story line really amazes me
and thank you once again for the new story

the first part itself is capable of attracting readers
so our new obsession for beauty begins now😊

HAPPY NAVRATRI TO U TOO AND EVERY ONE ELSE
u have added a new spark on the beginning of navratri by beginning ur new story on such auspicious day
and sita and geet very nice combination
let's see how maan steps into the story as ram or maan
waiting eagerly for the next

Thank you gudmeet..😊