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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

excellent dear

again a very wonderful update

loved this strong geet

physical ugliness did not put any scar on her inner beauty👏👏

u know ur writing not only entertains us but forces us to think

both our brain and heart start working overtime

amzing writer u r

and one more thing i like abt u is ur regular updates

u dont keep us waiting

thank u so much for that

and the poet palindrome is back again with a bang

loved the poem

what can i say abt maan's JHALAK

maan ka to naam hi kafi hai to stir emotions in my heart😆😆😆

will wait eagerly for the next when maan and geet will meet

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

I absolutely loved the start. The descriptions were simple yet very impactful. And the poem was beautiful! Rains sometimes make a sad person sadder ,and a happy person happier. They are just magical and this poem was lovely.

Amazing! 😊

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Mishu

@MeghPiyashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

awesome update...
just loved it dear!!!!

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Zahra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

It feels nice to see Geet working like any normal being, not staying in a shell, but rather be brave enough to face the world.

Maan seems to be a nice being here, I mean not the angry type, still you never know since we haven't really got much of him😆

And the poem, that was marvelous, I really liked it.

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

"what if it has not???"...well she nvr regretted her decision of saving dat child is a proof she is a priceless gem frm heart, she has immense courage to face d world but she is afraid to face herself in d mirror, yeah its vry tough bt nt impossible, is maan goin to help her to bring dat courage in her???

"13 years" hmm ...i lyk dat u come to d point 😉

"Presence of four coffee mugs on the table" i cnt tell u how much i lyk these details of ur writing, sometimes one word or one sentence lyk dis is enough to capture my whole attention lyk in today's chapter apart frm d poem dis is my fvrt cherishable moment of d chapter 😛 ...if it sounds weird 😕so cnt help it u hav to bear me wid my weirdness 😆

"I shall wait for next pour

when i shall paint "rain" bright "pink"..!!!".....poem start wid pain n end wid hope..👏

luvd it luvd it luvd it

oh my poet palin, plz care to explain "pink" here😆

"Geet's fingers caressed his name"Maan" a little longer" ❤️...iiissshhh

awesome mausam mein awesome blossom chapter, mazza aa gaya...luvd it dear😛

Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Geet is a brave woman, she didn't let her miseries affect her inner beautiful persona & it is great that she is happy in her work place.

l am more & more falling in love with ur story telling

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Diva7
"what if it has not???"...well she nvr regretted her decision of saving dat child is a proof she is a priceless gem frm heart, she has immense courage to face d world but she is afraid to face herself in d mirror, yeah its vry tough bt nt impossible, is maan goin to help her to bring dat courage in her???
"13 years" hmm ...i lyk dat u come to d point 😉
"Presence of four coffee mugs on the table" i cnt tell u how much i lyk these details of ur writing, sometimes one word or one sentence lyk dis is enough to capture my whole attention lyk in today's chapter apart frm d poem dis is my fvrt cherishable moment of d chapter 😛 ...if it sounds weird 😕so cnt help it u hav to bear me wid my weirdness 😆
"I shall wait for next pour
when i shall paint "rain" bright "pink"..!!!".....poem start wid pain n end wid hope..👏
luvd it luvd it luvd it
oh my poet palin, plz care to explain "pink" here😆
"Geet's fingers caressed his name"Maan" a little longer" ❤️...iiissshhh
awesome mausam mein awesome blossom chapter, mazza aa gaya...luvd it dear😛

Thank you sweet heart..

Ohk let me confess something here..After writing a chapter,i personally read it as a "reader"..and believe me I did not find something worth praising in this chapter except the poem...😆and i was waiting for you comment to see what new points you will bring out of this chapter or it would be a comment with "wonderful".."awesome".."good going" kind of things.,, No offence to such words because i myself had given such a comment for this chapter..

But ..but.. but.. you really amazed me...diva...with your observations..very happy to have you as a reader here...😛

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

so she did hear unkind remarks form people but luckily she didnt let that alter her personality or curb her nature good
thats what you would hope would have happened and i should have guessed would happen after all your stories go beyond what we percieve the world as no really
chalo at least she hadnt withdrawn into a shell that would have been bad real bad more like tragedy
so she is maan secretary huh interesting
so our maan is a great poet but then why does he discard them like this
wish to know more of both geet and maan and how they are with each other even if its just their professional relationship
cheers for pm