Marriages are destiny's decision

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Introduction

The whole house is decorated with flowers and ornaments. There is a mandap in the centre of the living room.

Everybody is busy in doing some chores. The pundit is uttering the mantras.

The pundit says to a guy standing nearby

"Call the bridegroom"

"Jee punditji." And the guy goes inside and brought with him a nearly 10 years boy dressed in a little sherwani and wearing a sehra.

The guy made the 'boy' sit in the mandap while the little kid complains "Dad! Why do I have to wear these flowers? I can't see anything!!" the boy said innocently indicating towards his sehra.

And his dad takes away his sehra from his face. The boy is very beautiful but there's a hint of arrogance in his eyes. The arrogance that he has inherited from his father.

The pundit asks the boy "Beta, aapka naam kya hai?" [whats ur name?]

The boy lifts his chin up in pride and says "Maan Singh Khurana."

And the pundit gets back into uttering the mantras.

After few minutes the pundit asks them to get the bride.

Maan's father indicates towards a lady and says "Bhabi, Geet ko le aayiye" [get geet]

And the lady gets a 5 year old girl dressed in a little red bridal outfit and make her sit next to Maan.

Geet looks at Maan and says in a baby voice "Maan, thou all altho doing the puda?" [Maan, u r also doing the puja?]

Maan looks at her but says arrogantly "Hmm."

After some time geet says to her mother "Mom, when will this puja finish?" and then geet's eyes fell on her father who was glaring at her angrily and she gets mum. Geet is very scared of her father.

And then the marriage took place smoothly without any interruption from anybody without the knowledge of both bride and bridegroom as what was happening. For both of them, they were part of strange kind of puja in which they had to dress gaudily.

They didn't know that this one act of theirs were gonna change their lives in future forever.

In the end the pundit asks both of them to take the blessings of the elders and announced that from now onwards Geet Handa is Geet Maan Singh Khurana.

The name of Geet with his name ticked something in Maan. He felt as if something was wrong.

And then the pundit says "From now onwards you both are husband and wife."

The words sink in Maan and he realised what was happening here. They were not sitting in some puja, they were getting married!!! He was not old enough to understand the real meaning of marriage, all he knew was when you get married, you have kids.

He looks at geet frowning angrily and takes a step back. He was himself a kid, how the hell he was gonna take care of other kids??!!!

While on the other hand, Geet was too young to understand as if what has just happened. She was just happy that the puja is finished and now she can go and play!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

15 years later

5 motorbikes on the road trying to get infront of each other. The bikes are going very fast. So many cars have put on abrupt brakes from saving to hit one or the other bike, but the bikers in black helmets didn't stop!!

They did all kinds of stunts in order to get an upper hand in the race and win the race.

They even try to hit each other to win. 3 bikes were not fortunate enough to complete the race and fell in between somewhere.

When they enter the college gates, only 2 bikes were remaining.

The biker in red bike was trying very hard to overtake the biker in black, but is always unsuccessful.

All the students were standing in a line on both sides cheering for the bikers.

At last the red biker managed to come parallel to the black biker...

When few meters away from the finishing line, the black biker suddenly moves the bike towards the red biker and the later lost the balance and fell!!

And the black biker finishes the race line and stops, hence winning the race!!

The black biker takes off the helmet, and under it the face of a beautiful girl with long hair gets visible.

She smiles and looks around at all the students who were cheering for her and shouting

"GEET, GEET, GEET..."

Geet gets off from her bike and goes towards the red biker who was looking down with humiliation.

"So Rahul, next time Geet Handa ko challenge karne se pehle apni aukaat dekh lena!!" she said in a bitchy style.

Suddenly a girl of almost Geet's age comes running towards Geet and said "O yaar Geet, tu bhi na! What if something has happened to you?!" she was worried.

"Chill Pinky!!" she said coolly and starts walking "Nothing's gonna happen to me!! Lekin us Rahul ke bachche ko sabak sikhana zaroori tha!!"

"Geet, wo sab to theek hai. But have you thought if your dad comes to know about this?" Pinky said.

Geet gulps down her saliva in fear at the mention of her father's name. But then she fakes bravery and says "Pinky tu bhi na! Ek number ki darpok hai!! Dad ko kaise pata chalega? Jab na tu unhein kuch batayegi, aur na main!!" and she smiles slyly.

Pinky shakes her head unbelievably at her best friend, and they both went into the class...

SOMEWHERE IN DELHI

A guy enters in his office and everybody stands up with the sudden appearance of their boss.

Everybody's breath is stopped unknowingly in fear as they saw him walking swiftly.

The guy is talking on the phone. He is saying angrily "Mr. Chopra, aap achhi tarah se jaante hain ke mujhe laaparwahi bilkul pasand nahin hai. Agar aap ko mere saath kaam karna hai, to mere tareeke se karna hoga. Warna aap koi aur construction company dhoond sakte hain!!" he paused for few moments as he listened to the other person on the phone "Ho jayega nahin, ho jaana chahiye!!" and he hangs up as he enters his cabin.

Everybody outside takes a sigh of relief.

A guy say to another "Yaar lagta hai aaj Maan sir ka mood phir se kharaab hai!"

The other guy says "Ismein nayi baat koun si hai?! Unka mood kabhi achcha hota bhi hai!! Ab kaam karein, iss se pehle ke boss hamaari chhuti kar dein!!"

And everybody gets back to their work again.

Maan is in his cabin working on his laptop, when his phone rang...

Maan: Yes Dadima

Dadima: Maan beta, I've called you to remind you that today Geet is coming back from Mumbai.

The moment he heard Geet's name, anger started flooding his face.

Dadima continues...

Dadima: To aapko hamaare saath unhein receive karne airport chalna hai.

Maan said angrily

Maan: Dadima (but then controls his anger as he realises that he is talking to his Dadima) I have lots of work in office. I won't be able to come!!

Dadima: Par Maan, aapka chalna bohat zaroori hai. Geet aapki patni hain!

Maan's anger was getting out of control now. But he didn't want to take his anger out on Dadima, so he made an excuse

Maan: Dadima, clients mera wait kar rahe hain. Main aapse baad mein baat karta hoon.

And he hangs up without waiting for a reply from other side.

And he switches off his phone and calls the intercom..

A girl picks up "Yes sir?"

"Tasha, if anyone calls from my home, tell them I'm busy in a meeting."

"Yes sir"

And he hangs up, still trying to control his anger.

Maan was aware of the fact that he was married to Geet at the age of 10...the age when he hadn't even came out of his childhood, his parents have married him without his knowledge. He has never been able to forgive his parents for that!!

When he has grown up a little, he has been told the reason for that child-marriage.

Geet's father Mohinder and Maan's father Vikrant were childhood friends. And to turn their friendship into relationship, Mohinder has promised Geet's hand in marriage to Maan at the day of Geet's birth.

But after few years, Vikrant has known that he was suffering from cancer but he wanted to see Maan's wedding before dying.

So mohinder had suggested that they'll marry Maan and Geet now, but would do the bidaai when Geet will be 20 years old and both Maan and Geet would be old enough to understand the meaning of marriage.

After the wedding, Geet's family has moved to Mumbai. But they have been back last month and today Geet was coming back.

Maan has never seen Geet after their wedding day, but he hated her to the core. He somehow blamed her for taking away the right from him to take the most important decision of his life: Marriage!

He hated her because he thought that if she hasn't existed, he would have been free. Free to choose his life partner, free to live his life. She has been forced on him, and he hated that!!

He was never able to go near any woman, as his principles always stopped him. He hated Geet, but at the same time he knew he was married. Whenever any girl approached him, the face of a 5-year old girl dressed in red bridal outfit pops up in front of his eyes, and he was never able to make himself go for any girl.

He has never seen the grown up form of Geet. Because of his hatred, whenever Dadima tried to show him her latest pictures, he would tear it or burn it without looking at it. And he wished he never has to see her jinxed face ever in his life!!!

And today, she was coming back.

It was already decided between the two families that Geet's bidaai will be done now as both of them are old enough.

He knew that next week, she was turning 20, and also that was the day he has dreaded for years: her bidaai!!!

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Part 2

Geet still couldn't understand why her parents were insisting on her to come to Delhi for her birthday. She did not liked the fact that she can't celebrate her birthday with her college friends.

Geet did not know anything about her marriage and neither she knew that in a week her life was gonna change forever!!

Geet's mother, Rano was always against of marrying Geet when she was just a kid, but she couldn't say anything in front of her husband.

So Rano has decided that she would not tell anything to Geet about her childhood marriage as long as she can. She didnot want that the news had any adverse effect on Geet's mind. She knew that her daughter's fate has already been decided, but at least she can give her a carefree life for as long as she can!! That much she owed to her daughter.

So she has brought up Geet with extra love and affection.

When Geet reaches home in Delhi, she has been greeted very nicely even by her father!! That was something unusual!!!

Mohinder had never had a caring relation with his daughter. He had always wanted a son instead of Geet. So he was never able to love Geet from his heart. And Geet was always scared of him like hell!!!

In the evening, Geet had made plans to go out as Ronit was coming to Delhi too for Geet's birthday. So she was going out to meet him!!

Ronit was Geet's best friend cum boyfriend. She has known him from fifth grade and they had started dating in college under friends' pressure. All their friends have continuously nagged them about how they were perfect for each other and should date.

So they had thought of giving it a shot!!!

But there was more of friendship and mutual understanding between them than love!! Their relationship was just in the initial stage of dating and haven't reached the physical stage yet..

Geet's parents were unaware of Geet being dating Ronit, as she knew they won't approve.

So Geet made an excuse at home and Rano also let her go thinking how less time she really has to enjoy her carefree life.

Geet was meeting Ronit at xyz disco...

When she reaches there, she looked around for Ronit but he was nowhere to be seen...

So she calls him and he tells her that he is stuck in the traffic and will be there in 15-20 minutes.

Geet went to the bar and sits and orders a drink for herself. She starts looking around casually.

Suddenly she felt a pair of eyes watching her from a nearby seat.

She looks towards him and saw a guy in almost his mid twenties looking at her.

The guy was unreasonably good looking. He has fair complexion... big brown deep eyes with long eyelashes... sharp nose... tight jaw... perfect M shaped red lips... and a stubble that was giving him a macho look...

But there was something in his expressions that was making Geet a bit uncomfortable... He looked like he was in a trance!! As she looked into his eyes, she felt a strange sensation in her... In a moment, she felt like she is drowning in his eyes... But then she come back to her senses...

She looks away thinking he's some cheap drunk loser who has probably never seen a girl in his life!!

"Hi!" she heard the guy say and she looks at him as he continued while taking out his hand towards Geet "Maan Singh Khurana!!"

10 Minutes Earlier:

Maan has come to disco to pick up his cousin Vicky as Vicky's car has broken down...

When Maan reached there, he tried calling Vicky, but his phone was out of reach.

Maan went inside and looked around for Vicky, but he couldn't see him anywhere.

And suddenly his eyes fell on a girl sitting at the bar, and his heart skipped a beat.

The girl was very pretty... He has never seen a girl more beautiful than her in his whole life!!

Her milky white skin, her long silky hair, her beautiful big hazel brown eyes, her cute little nose, her chubby cheeks, her pink luscious lips...everything was pulling him towards her!!!

The face was standing out in the crowded disco...

It felt like they were the only two people over there and the rest of the world did not existed!!!

He started walking towards her absentmindedly...

He sat near her and keep on looking at her while drinking her beauty with his eyes!!!

And suddenly, he felt her stiffening a slightest...like she could feel his eyes on her...like there was some invisible thread between them that was making them aware of each other's presence.

And then, she looks at him from under those beautiful big eyelashes of hers. Their eyes met, and Maan felt that the time stopped in that moment!!!

But then she looked away... Maan couldn't bear her looking away from him and he said to get her attention...

"Hi!" and he offered his hand in a hope of getting a touch of her hand, "Maan Singh Khurana!!"

Geet looks at him from top to bottom and then at his hand offered towards her and looks away...

Maan felt anger at her behaviour!! For the first time in his life he is asking a girl, and she is showing him attitude!!!

He holds her arm and twirls her back to face him in a jerk!!

He said through gritted teeth "Who the hell do you think you are??!!" his nails digging into her skin...

Geet tries to push him away and said "Get off of me, you douche!!"

Maan comes back to his senses and realises what he's doing??!! For the first time in his life, he's been misbehaving with a girl!!! He is not like this!!! He has never hurted a girl physically ever in his life!!! So what happened today??? Why has he lost control over his anger??!! So what if she doesn't want to talk to him??!! After all, she doesn't even know him!!!

He left her arm instantly and said feeling guilty "I'm sorry! I didn't mean to hurt you!!"

Geet looks at her arm where he had held her and rubs her arm to soothe the pain and then back at him with accusing eyes!!

She said angrily "How dare you??!!"

Maan was still looking at her with guilty eyes and said while his hand started moving on it's own accord towards the bruise on her arm to soothe it "I'm really sorry Miss--?"

A guy holds Maan's hand as he was just about to touch Geet...

Maan looks at the intervener with cocked up eyebrows in a frown and saw a guy smirking at him with an attitude.

The guy answers in place of Geet "Ronit!"

Maan and Ronit glares at each other angrily while Geet looked at them a bit concerned...she doesn't know for whom though!!

"She's my girlfriend!" Ronit finishes with a proud smirk.

Maan's expressions changed instantly and he looked towards Geet surprised and a bit hurt!! He didn't know why he was surprised or hurt though!!

Geet looked at him and she saw accusation in his eyes... She felt a sudden sense of guilt. She doesn't know why she felt like this for a complete stranger??!! She doesn't even know him!! So why is she feeling bad for the hurt in his eyes??!! But then she pulled herself together and looked away while breaking their eye-lock...

That brought Maan back to his senses too and he looked at Ronit now who was still holding his hand...

Maan smirks at his stupidity. He knew he could take him down any day, any moment but he stopped himself because he knew he was wrong here!!!

He was the one who was trying to talk to someone else's girlfriend when he is married himself!! He has never done anything like this before!! Girls die to talk to Maan Singh Khurana but he had never given any girl a second glance whatsoever.

Maan heard the girl say "Ronit, leave him!! Lets go from here!!!"

And she pulls Ronit with her and goes out leaving Maan standing over there who was still looking at her retreating form...

Maan smiled bitterly at the thought that for the first time in life he felt something for a girl, and his destiny is that he doesn't even know her name... and he would never know her name!! He would never be able to see her again!! The very thought sent a pang in his heart!!

But he knew this was for the best!! He is married...he clenched his teeth angrily at the thought and the hatred for his wife multiplied by million folds in that very instant... and the girl is also someone else's girlfriend!! He felt his inner self burning as he remembered how she touched that guy!!! He banged the bar counter in anger and frustration on his helplessness!!!

Maan sat there for a long time trying to forget about that unknown girl, but all in vain. Her big hazel brown eyes were haunting him!!!

At last he managed to make himself leave. He goes out and calls Vicky, whom he has fully forgotten after looking at that girl. Vicky tells him that his friends gave him a ride and he's already home.

Maan gets into his car and drives towards home still trying to get rid of those beautiful hazel brown eyes.

While on his way home, he saw the same girl but she has been cornered by 4 guys by a tree.

Maan abruptly puts on the brakes and looks towards them with immense anger at the very thought of them touching her!!

The guys were slowly pacing nearer to the girl and the girl has a determined expression on her face.

He didn't stopped even for a second to think and went towards them like a tiger mad with anger...

He holds the collar of the first guy and punches him hard on his face and the guy faints on the spot.

And in mere seconds, all other three guys were also lying unconscious on the ground but he was still punching and kicking them like a mad man. He didn't know what had made him so angry!! He was just not in himself anymore!!!

After several minutes of kicking and punching of the unconscious guys, he stopped breathing heavily as he was out of energy!!!

He looked towards the girl who was looking at him with amused expression.

The anger vanished instantly as he saw her and the concern and worry replaced the anger.

He looks at her from top to bottom to see if she is hurt somewhere... and for the first time he saw her dress!!

She was wearing a very short strap-less white dress!! Her dress could make any guy develop bad intentions for her.

Maan takes off his coat and offers it to the girl and said "Pehen lo!"

Geet looks at him for a whole one moment and then rolls her eyes on him in indifference and starts walking away without any word.

Maan felt irritated at her behaviour and goes towards her and holds her hand and twirls her back roughly to face him.

"What's your problem? Hasn't anyone taught you that when someone helps you, you should say thank you to them?" he asked angrily.

He doesn't know why her indifferent behaviour bothered him. He didn't helped her for thank yous!! But he didn't liked her walking away from him like that!!

Geet looks at him indifferently and said "Did I asked for your help?"

Maan frowns at her question and leaves her hand...

Geet continues "I didn't needed your help. I am totally capable of helping myself!! Agar tum zabardasti hero ban-ne ki koshish karoge, then don't expect me to be thankful!! Main tum jaise ladkon ko achchi tarah se jaanti hoon... jahaan ladki dekhi, herogiri karni shuru kar dete ho!! But you know something?! I hate heros!! Now get lost!!!"

Maan looks at her angrily and goes back to his car fearing that if he kept on standing there he might do something rash...

He sits in his car and gives one last look to the girl angrily and saw that she was standing near her car with its bonnet open. And she was looking inside the engine with a confused expression on her face.

He could easily tell that her car has broken down and she doesn't know anything about the problem in the car.

It was very late and the whole road was empty. There was no one that she can ask help from except Maan. And the thought brought smile on his face...

And Maan was thinking right! Geet didn't know anything about the mechanical stuff of cars.

Her car has broken down in the middle of the road and she was trying to figure out what to do, when those bad guys had cornered her.

There was not even a single living soul on the road except for that guy! But she doesn't wanted to ask help from him. Something was pulling her towards him which she hated so she wanted to stay away from him!! And she has just told him few minutes ago that she didn't need his help, so how could she ask him now to help her?!! Her ego was too big to let her do that!!

She thought of calling home; but as she saw her mobile, she realised that her phone battery has died.

She cursed herself for talking to Ronit for hours without charging her phone...

She looks towards the guy...what did he told his name was? Yeah! Maan Singh Khurana!... She looks towards Maan who has come out of his car and was leaning on his car with his one leg resting on the door casually and looking at her with a taunting smile.

Geet makes a baby face and then says loudly to Maan "Oye! Hello!! Maan!!!"

Maan likes the fact that she remembers his name!! He doesn't say anything but picks one eyebrow at her questioningly.

"Tumhein gadi theek karni aati hai?" her ego was still visible in her voice.

"Of course!" he said casually but still didn't moved from there.

Geet challenges "Can you prove it?"

Maan smiles at her tactics and murmurs to himself "Madad to chahiye lekin akar beech mein aa rahi hai!!"

He stands straight and goes towards her and says "And why would I need to prove anything to you?"

Geet: Because I know you are lying!!

Maan(angrily) You can think whatever you want!! And if you need help, then ask it properly.

Geet makes a baby face and bites her lower lips.

When she didn't say anything for few moments, Maan turns to walk away when he heard her say "Please help me!!"

Maan looks back at her with a smirk.

He said "Much better!!" and started looking at the engine...

As he was looking into it, Geet peeked into it from top of his shoulder to see what he was doing. Maan felt her warm breaths fanning near his ear and he started loosing control over himself...

His breathing fastened instantly and his heart started beating erratically from her close proximity...

He closed his eyes to control himself but it was way too hard for him...

He looked at her from his shoulder and their eyes met...

They didn't know for how long they kept on looking into each other's eyes while drowning in them...

It was Geet who came to her senses first and gets back from him...

Maan looks back at the engine trying to control himself while Geet looked away to control the new-found emotions in her...

After few moments, Maan was able to control himself and he gets back into fixing the car.

After some minutes, he declared that its done.

Geet tries starting the car again and it starts.

Maan goes near her car's door and looks at her waiting for her to say something.

But Geet took out some money from her purse and offers it towards Maan "Here!!"

Maan frowns at her angrily and all his first thought about her went down the drain. He came to a conclusion that she is rude, arrogant, insolent and a spoilt brat.

"How dare you!!" he said angrily and with a swift movement, he took out the keys from her car, and the car stopped.

Geet looks at him angrily and comes out of the car and said "How dare you??!! Give me the keys back!!"

"First apologise and say thank you!!" he ordered.

"And what if I don't?" she said with the same tone.

"Well then you leave me with no other option!!"

And before Geet can say or do anything, he holds the back of her hair to lock her face at a place and planted a vigorous kiss on her mouth...

AUTHOR'S NOTE

Ok friends well in this one Geet has a tint of grey shade to her character.. I'm sure you have felt it already!! Ok she is not bad or totally grey... but there's still a tiniest bit of grey... remember the word is 'tiniest bit'!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update der
loved all the three parts
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!!! All three parts are amazing and finally destiny plays its game...

Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start yaha tak toh pehele bhi padha tha ... I want next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic update..maan n geet attitude is mindblowing yaar..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All the chps were very nice.It's nice to read about Geet who has a got a different kind of attitude in this FF.Really looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
loved it
add ne in ur pm list
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loved it ! continue soon !

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