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Posted: 12 years ago
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aur kitna time lage ga...
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Originally posted by: neha512

SORRY LaKSHMI DR TO KEEP YOU WaITIG, IT WOULD TaKE ME 20 MORE MINS TO FINISH ... ME REaLLY SHORREYYY

20 mins 🤔
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Congrats on the new thread...

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Aww I couldn't believe its my 7th thread with intehaa. Thankyou guys for your love and support for this ff.
My special thanks to ~lakshmi~ and reachsky2011 for spamming my thread and pics, thanks dr love you both.

PART 73

Geet nodded negatively. Maan I just need you beside me and I can face anything. Aaj himmat ayi h please let me say baad me shayad I wont be able to say again. But geet you need' she stopped him in mid placing her hand on his mouth. Maan just hold me tight I want to forget everything in your warmth and let go of everything.
Maan didn't said anything just held her tightly while she continued, maan it was my 11th birthday, she started as the past came in front of her eyes.at that time we used to live in chandigarh and were a big name in the town. My birthday was celebrated like a festival. All were so excited for it. Being the handa princess, all the things which I ever dreamt were in my hand. I was so happy as everyone was celebrating it like a fairy tale.
A nice party was held in our house and all my friends and family were there. It was the time of cake cutting when everything changed. Maan saw the turn of emotion in her eyes from calmness to restlessness and fear. He held her tightly while she hid her face in his chest tugging his neck tightly.
Geet rehne do if you are not comfortable I can wait shona for you to be ready, Said maan kissing her forehead. Geet refused, maan please don't interrupt me, I want to let it all go. I cant take that pain, that fear anymore. Mai nhi chahti ki hamare darmiyan koi bhi raaz koi baat chupi ho. I cant see you in that pain again.
She again started her tale, that day we all were waiting for dadu and dad to arrive from office. We waited and waited but none came. After our frequent calls to them we came to know that dadu is in hospital as he had a severe heartattack.
Hum sab hospital gye, I was totally broken seeing him in that way as he was the one to him I was most attached since my childhood. Dad was there too and he also looked devastated. On asking him, he told us that our business suffered a huge loss making our share collapse in market, everything of ours ended. Actually business was having problem since a month and that day everything ended.
Our haveli was also on auction and that had given an attack to dadu. He was in hospital for more than a month and in the mean time we had to be shifted to a smaller house. I thought our problems would end soon but hmekyaptathaki it was just the starting.
Since it was getting difficult to bear our expenses while dad and dadu strived to get back our business on its position, it was getting difficult to bear mine and meera's study expenses and other needs. So it was decided to send me and meera to hoshiyarpur where my uncles lived. Though we didn't liked them much but that was the most needed thing at the time.
It was more than a months that we were living in hoshiyarpur. Dad and dadu were setting up the business and were doing well. We were getting settled in hoshiyarpur but didn't liked the environment there.
It was one such day when me and meera were going to school when we felt someone following us. But we didn't saw anyone and went inside. But when we were returning back, meera was moving ahead few steps while I was moving slowly as I was lost in our surrounding. That's when I heard meera shouting and rushed to her. I saw some men trying to hold her. I rushed to them and fought to free her. They were first shocked to see me there and their hold on meera loosened. Taking the privilege I bit them on their hand and freed meera and we made a run for our house.
But they were fast and captured my hand and slapped me hard. Meera was shouting all the while for help but none listened to us. All people there were afraid of them and none came for our rescue. We were scared and begging to be freed but they didn't.
They captured both of us and were taking with us in their van. When they were about to close the door I somehow pushed meera outside while she rolled over other side of the road. They about to go to them when they heard police siren and thus left her there, taking me with them.
I was so shocked seeing all this. My mind was so numb. I just prayed babaji to set me free from them. I just sat with them while they were looking at me with the look I didn't like. Even though I was only 11, I was beautiful and looked nice.
They took me to there place and I was shocked to see few more people there. They tied my hand and hit me hand for freeing meera. Then they through me to a small dim lit room and I was shocked to see few more girls there lying and crying. Mujhe kuch samaj ni aya who are they just I know that they were bad, real bad.

Through the girls, I came to know that they are some big smugglers who sell girls abroad. I didn't even know why they were selling girls. They kept me there hostage for around a week as I remember, everyday I would hear some screaming sound of girls coming from the near by room.
I thought they were also being hit by them as they used to hit me sometimes whenever they wanted. She started sobbing loudly as she touched her cheek as if she can feel the pain. Maan caressed her cheek which she held in her hand and kissed them softly everywhere.
Unhone meri jaan ko mara, he asked softly. She nodded as fresh layers again flowed. Where did he hurt you, show me, he commanded hoarsely. She pointed to her other cheek, he kissed her there as if trying to sooth her pain or trying to remove his guilt of not able to protect her then. They she showed her hair indicating he pulled them. Maan softly planted a kiss there too and started threading her hair. Then she pointed at her back saying they used to hit me hard on my back too. Maan moved his hand inside her shirt and touched the soft skin of her bare back caressing it softly trying to sooth her.
She gave him a faint smile and placed her forehead on his chest.

Pata h maan even my parents never hit me. Though they would scold me on my mistakes but never had they raised their hand on me. And that bas***d used to beat me daily. I used to beg him, say him ki mujhe pain ho rha h but he would not listen and would use abusive language to me.
I never even heard in my life such awful words, even the words itself disgust me. But they just treated me like a dirt with other girls. I started having dreams of them hurting and even killing me all night and would wake up shouting for my mumma but she never came, instead they would come and hurt me if my scream would wake them up.
On the other side, meera informed my parents about all this and they came to hoshiyarpur and asked police help. But they couldnt gather much information. It was one such day that I was sitting crumpled on the ground in the room when one of them came highly drunk that he couldnt even walk properly.
I got scared seeing him and moved back till I hit the wall. He came to me and pulled me up and took me out of the room forcefully. He took me to the other room from where I could hear screaming coming into our room.
But the sight there left me baffled.
Geet started shivering as the images of the day flashed like a movie in my mind. Her tears wetted maan's shirt while he himself was crying silently all the while hearing all this happened to her. How can someone be so cruel to hurt his mishty in such a way. His hold on her got tight seeing her scared self but he couldn't gather himself to stop her. Her condition itself told him either its now or never and till she wont let everything out she would have to face the doom of those nightmares.

He held on her tightly while she continued, he took me to the room where his other gang members were present too, actually only few of them whom I have seen as they had already hit me and few girls were also there who were mostly naked trying to gather their clothes and cover their dignity while the men laughed seeing them. They were crying badly and I didn't know what happened to them as I saw few marks on their body, which were black and blue.
I got utterly scared not knowing what all is happening there but the sight itself send a shivering fear in my body. Tears flew in my eyes as I felt something bad coming and clutched my already tattered school skirt tightly to my body trying to cover myself as much as possible.
He threw me harshly on ground as I felt hard stone on my face. Others started laughing seeing me and licked their lips as they saw my skirt and blouse getting misplace. The drunken person came close to me and sat near me trying to lean on me. He held my skirt and pulled it roughly tearing half of it. I tried to wriggle and he tied me back hitting me hardly.
Then he moved to my blouse and pulled of the fabric tearing of the back part.
Geet was feeling disgusted as she remembered herself in such a shameful form other than maan. She just felt why she didn't died at the very moment. Maan just stayed shocked as worst parts formed in his mind. She was just 11 wasn't even mature to handle anything, no wonder she has attacks of all that.

He leaned on me as I could smell that awful smell coming from his mouth. he was about to kiss me but I pushed him away as I puked there and then. He was about to hit me again when his hand was held in between tightly by someone.
I lifted my eyes to see the leader there who held his man's hand. I thought may be he felt pity on me but it was worse than even that. He said that some sheikh of dubai is ready to purchase me and is paying them a million if I was delivered untouched, mean without being used before and thus he ordered his men to leave me for a while.
I sighed for a minute but I knew its just for few days till they sell me. I had already lost the hope of getting free and seeing my dadu, my mumma-papa again. He left me after giving a glance on my body and then said to his boss, that he would leave me for few days but if the deal wont work then he wont leave again.
It turned to 2 weeks there in there hostage. They were planning to sell me the other day. I had lost petty much weight by the time and looked pale and skinny. I hardly eat and my body would keep fainting every day due to stress.
It was next day morning when I heard some voice outside the room. My door opened and I saw a boy of around 18 years standing there. I had never seen him before and he neither looked like any one of them. They left me alone in the room with him. I felt scared thinking he is one of them and is going to hurt me.
He came to me and sat beside me on the floor. I got scared and looked at him fearful. But he looked calm and composed. He was just looking at me trying to analyze my features and didn't made any move toward me.
After few second he took out a phone from his pocket and gave it to me signaling me to talk on it. I heard it and was shocked to hear papa's voice on the line. I cried and cried while he tried to calm me down. They he said to me that the boy is raj, one of the people of the village who helped them to find me. Actually raj saw them trying to kidnap me, but at that time he didn't made any move as he knew he cant fight so many well build people and no one of the onlookers would help him.
He saved meera when I pushed her and dropped her to home. Then he even informed my parents and with the help of his uncle who was commissioner of the area was trying to find mine whereabouts. Just a day back they came to know from one of their men that I have been kept here and they sent him inside as a parlor worker to make me ready to be presented in front of the sheikh. They wanted to make them look mouthwatering for the sheikh so that he wont reject looking my pale face.
I was relaxed hearing my dad voice at that time but was still scared of raj. The whole incident had implanted a deep fear in me for men. And being near raj was just provoking the fear in me. Raj tried to calm me but I just couldn't trust him. He then at that time to calm me down gave me the red holy thread which was tied on his wrist ( moulihoti h nater I matakiwhi) and asked me tie on his wrist.
I did that with shaky head scared of him. After I properly tied it he said, geet since you don't have any brother and I don't have any sister, I want you to be my little sister and you have even tied rakhi to me, so now wont you trust your brother. I just looked at him puzzled while he gave me pleading looks to trust me. His act simple gave me some trust and I gave him a small smile. He was my knight in shining armor at that time, my bhai I never had.
After I nodded he gave some signal on phone and then locked the door inside while he sat with me. Then we heard police noise and gun firings. He told me that police had attacked the men and I am now safe. I asked him why he risked his life, but he said that my dad wanted to assure that I am ok and doesn't want me to be scared hearing the attacks and then they came to know about the selling issue and thus he came here as an imposter . secondly if a police men would have come there are chances that these people may recognize them as they are part of some big gang operating and they didn't wanted any risk. And since he is joining army and has good knowledge of martial arts, he was the best option.
They freed me and took me back and we shifted in delhi.raj to came with us as he wanted to study further here and we became best buddies. He knew about my health issues that occurred due to all those incidents and helped me through everything.
Geet sighed as she completed her horrible past to him. She could feel her body getting numb as all those events recalled back. Maan was speechless hearing everthing. He just thanked raj million tonnes in his heart to be there with his mishty. He didn't said anything neither she expected. He just kept hugging her tightly and assuring himself of her presence.

His tears were flowing like a river now while she just stayed silent trying to embrace herself of the feeling she felt after telling him everything.


So how was it.
I hope you guys liked it especially since geet wasn't raped at all as you all feared. It was the fear of all those mental torture she faced due to the incident.
Please tell me how you felt guys.

Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r late ...im first ...that was a emotional update 😭 ...
geet had to go through so much at that tender age...
hope all her nightmares are vanished now...
awesome update...
will be waiting for some happy wale updates...
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Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me kaan pakad ke shorreyyy
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That was fab written update...

Completely heart wrenching... It was such a worst thing to face at the tender age of 11... And the emotions and pain were brilliantly written Neha... could feel the pain fo Geet...

Loved it totally...

Thanks for updating soon... would be waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart wrenching part only maan can erase her the nightmare she face
Edited by mitzi11 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was fab written update...


Completely heart wrenching... It was such a worst thing to face at the tender age of 11... And the emotions and pain were brilliantly written Neha... could feel the pain fo Geet...

Loved it totally...

Thanks for updating soon... would be waiting for the next

thanx for liking it diii,,,
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Originally posted by: neha512

me kaan pakad ke shorreyyy

nahi chalegi...update jaldi do tho hum maanege😈😳

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